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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
Awesome writing!!👏Gosh,gal u better pm me from now on!!😈

thanxx and yaa sure i will😊already added u as ma buddy😉

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Great work... Amazingly potrayd... Short but very effective... Pm me whn u want dis 2 cntinue...!!

thank u😊appreciate ur comments😃

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sehrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

soo sad os
with a sad ending
loved it

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sonika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was really good. But was too sad . Anyways r u going to cont it then do pm me and if u r not going to cont it then add me inyour pmlist for future updates!

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EHMMBH_fan1

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was really good 👍🏼

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--Aarzoo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice os keep it going

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rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

She welcomed death when she was in his arms... OMG, this was amazing

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NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

howw sweet . to welcome death as a guest while gazing at the love of your life.. beautifull

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Captain_Pari

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Posted: 13 years ago

Omg... ithni cruelty!! 😭... my poor Virat... hai ni...

greatly written as always :))

- Luv Pari

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Preeti Ravindra

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow...so this was ur 1st OS Gayathri!!!😊 Seriously ur a born writer yaar...so good in d first 1...👏

Lovd ur OS 2 d core...So simple and beautiful!!! If I had a Hat..then Off 2 u!!! 😃 😉

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