VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 - Page 9

Awesome make part 6 longer :D

Originally posted by: Elena123

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"When her eyes met mine, I felt something click, like a key turning in a lock. Believe me, I'm no romantic, and while I've heard all about love at first sight, I've never believed in it, and I still don't. But even so, there was something there, something unrecognizably real, and I couldn't look away."

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Maanvi sighed and argued loudly 'You know you're mad and weird and all your screws have fallen loose and are probably in a really unpleasant place. Filled with broken glasses and mud and all the grim things in the whole universe', she finished, catching her breath and wiping the beads of sweat that had formed on her forehead.

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She looked ahead, as she felt his gaze on her. 'Fine. Before you drive, I have a few conditions, first you drive slowly. Second, I don't want to-',

Virat reversed the car aggressively. Maanvi clutched onto the seatbelt that she was about to put on, cursing him out loud.

this part was short but great!
i've said it already once but i'll say it again : this is the best SS ever !! :D
please continue soon!
and please PM me, i've added you to my buddy list now :)

awww loved this part... it was superb... waiting for next..

Sexy Story.. loved it.. Pls add me to the PM list..

ok now im all exited abt hw its goin2 go frm here!!!!😍...lookin frward 2 the next update...thanks fr the pm😊...loved the update👏...pls make the next one longer...pls...

Originally posted by: Arya1991

1. I love the quote you've used in the beginning! Whr is it from?

2. The whole rant thing, is sooo typically Maanvi! And the ending, cuz thts how their entire relationship begins!!

3. Also, the tiny glimpse into Virat's home. is very insightful.

Kudos to you!! 👏

I loved it so much especially the cinderella part
Congrats on ur presenation success
Please make the next part longer and pm me when u update