VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Great Update Elena !! I love the way u penn down things ...
Hope Virat gets some dose from Manvi ...Realy this guy is totally confused when it cums to Mamvi . I am already feelin bad for Rahul...he'll be a dead-meat in near future . Continue soon n thanx for pm :) :)

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ndp102

@ndp102

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

After a kind of a disappointing episode and a stressful day of studying...reading your FF really made my day better 😊 You are such a talented writer and I must say your writing style is excellent! I'm loving the whole lion falling for the lamb concept...theres something about bad boys that makes them more intriguing and sexy lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hoping we get more intense romantic parts!! =) Also I'm liking this Rahul character I think he will add an interesting angle to the story! =)

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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Wow! That was Beautiful!! Love it!! Continue As soon as possible =D

Sorry, exams wont give me enough time to comment more, but will like to summarize a bit in two sentences. Love your uses of rhetorical devices, and the tone you set is mesmerizing. Characters are well built and the narration is descriptive and amazing.

Looking forward to the next update, try to exclude Rahul, Tina and Dabbu, Lol! I tend to skip them! *Sorry!*

Prach

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

This was awesome... I want to read more... I know am greedy...lol. But u have a magic 2 keep reader stick 2 ur topic... Loved it. And u frgt 2 pm me... I didnt recieve ur pm since last 2 updates...:(

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prishika

@prishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

I'm in love with your ff. It's one of the best I've read on virman. I especially love virats character. It's somewhat similar but sooo different to our actual virat. Looking forward to the jealous virat when he sees Rahul and maanvi together.
If possible, can you pm me when you update part 8.