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Tina Saigal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Loved it.. Virat's character is getting sexier in each update and OMG Manvi is like the protective and serious girl who learned the lesson of enjoying the life in a hard way by over coming her cancer.. Once dedicated to become a doctor is looking for ways to live life to full extend and finding Virat more exciting then her comfortable friend circle and Virat bored of living life at the dangerous end with all the extremes and adventure finds Maanvi's company more soothing and sane then his friend's get together.. Surely they are made for each other.. Maanvi the good girl falling for the Bad boy and Virat the masochistic lion falling for a lamb like Maanvi.. Its so like Twilight.. Dangerous but yet cute.. LOVE IT.. Hope your updates keeps getting better and better.. The USP of your Updates are that they are not overly romantic and mushy with typical dialogues.. They are sharp, curt and to the point with awesome come backs from Manvi and silent attitude of Virat.. pls maintain the class of characters .. Would love to see the reaction of Virat when Rahul proposes to Maanvi.. I'm sure Virat will be furious like Hell!!! Rahul would be a dead meat.. LOL

Edited by Tia.Saigal2002 - 13 years ago

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isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

gettin beter n better pm me!!!!

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Hooria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Congrats im so happy u have turned this to an FF now hopefully we will get more regular updates right?? *wink*
i really enjoyed this part so much manvi is falling for him aww so cute
Continue soon and please pm me when
U update
Beautifully written

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Dii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Loved it cant wait for the nest part!

love:

-princess-

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: misaki
omg !!...it keeps gettin better!!...
im so glad u decided 2 make it an ff...i wan2 read the whole thng 2 no shortcuts...

u are jst amazin!!!...this is by far the best virat that iv read abt apart frm the actual one(im partial 2 kushal virat)...seriously i love both manvi and virat that uv created !!!...u are an awesome writer!..truly !

thank u so mch fr the wonderful post...

and thnk u fr the pm..

will be eagerly waitin fr the next update...

cant wait!!!!...

Thanks for liking 😊 Glad your liking the FF., I'm partial to Kushal too, will be updating sooon 😉

Originally posted by: TabassumR
Good stuff!

Thanks you for liking it 😃

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Wow..! Dear this was another fab update by u.!! Loved it...!! The changing behaviour of Virat... Stalker Virat!! Wow.!! And Manvi as always loving.!! Whatever may be the condition... And the best thing u didnt deteroite her character... Loved it.. Continue soon...!!

Thank you for liking. I am hoping to update soon. I am glad your liking Virat's character😉

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Eleanor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

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Eleanor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: kkekaishi
update soon dear
update soon dear
update soon dear
update soon dear
update soon dear
WIll do 😊

Originally posted by: tipd3md
Loved it
please continue

Glad your liking it! 😃

Originally posted by: kajenvirman
omg! its getting better and better
again an awesome update!!
thanks for the PM

Thanks so much for liking it! 😊 Your most welcome.

QUOTE=shilpa09] loved the story...and the characters r just awsome...by the way is viren in this story??????

...nd plzzz pm me

Thank you for liking. 😊 I am not sure at the moment if Viren is going to be in the story but even if he is, he will merely be a side character. Add me as a buddy for future updates or check back on the posts as it gets harder to pm individual people. 😊

Edited by Elena123 - 13 years ago

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Eleanor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: FairoozT
Lol. I think this is has to be one of my favorite FF's!! It's emotional, witty, and funny at the same time. Can't wait untill you have the next part! I hope it's soon though! :D

😃 Aw, thanks for the lovely comment. Glad your liking it. I am hoping too as I am a really indecisive person😆

Originally posted by: Khushi15
Amazing..!

Thank you for liking😊

Originally posted by: Khush94
totally loving virat and his mood swings. great job dear

Glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: ayeshapasta
AwesOme update soon

Glad your liking it! 😊

Originally posted by: Rach-dc
I am sooo loving this lol

I am glad that you are 😉

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
Love u for making dis an FF!!! I'm just luving Virat's character here,and Maanvi is awesome as always. The last dialogue of Maanvi cracked me up!! Virat is falling for Mannu!!

Thanx for da pm.Plz continue soon!

Thanks so much for liking it😊. I am glad your liking the characters😃

Originally posted by: sonika_virman
elena
U r surely gonna kill me with your suspense one day.
I am loving how the story is progressing . And am really excited for the next part.
So please mujh par taras khakar thoda jaldi update kardo plzzz.

Thankyou for liking Sonika, 😆 Mein bohat koshish karoo ge kay mera brain work karay so I can write a quick update 😉

Originally posted by: madpaki
Awesome loved it plz update and pm me plz

Thanks for liking, do add me as a buddy for future updates or check back on the posts 😃

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
That was fantastic... You are absolutely superb
Continue soon yaar and please PM me

I am glad you liked it. Thank so much. Will do 😃

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Eleanor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Tia.Saigal2002
Loved it.. Virat's character is getting sexier in each update and OMG Manvi is like the protective and serious girl who learned the lesson of enjoying the life in a hard way by over coming her cancer.. Once dedicated to become a doctor is looking for ways to live life to full extend and finding Virat more exciting then her comfortable friend circle and Virat bored of living life at the dangerous end with all the extremes and adventure finds Maanvi's company more soothing and sane then his friend's get together.. Surely they are made for each other.. Maanvi the good girl falling for the Bad boy and Virat the masochistic lion falling for a lamb like Maanvi.. Its so like Twilight.. Dangerous but yet cute.. LOVE IT.. Hope your updates keeps getting better and better.. The USP of your Updates are that they are not overly romantic and mushy with typical dialogues.. They are sharp, curt and to the point with awesome come backs from Manvi and silent attitude of Virat.. pls maintain the class of characters .. Would love to see the reaction of Virat when Rahul proposes to Maanvi.. I'm sure Virat will be furious like Hell!!! Rahul would be a dead meat.. LOL

I loved reading through this and I am glad you went through what your liking in the story and your analysis as it gives me an insight of what I need to focus on and what you guys want to see. There is nothing better then a bad boy 😉 Thanks for the lovely comment and I am glad your enjoying the updates 😊

Originally posted by: isha.raj_98
gettin beter n better pm me!!!!

Glad you liking it 😃

Originally posted by: hs7071
Congrats im so happy u have turned this to an FF now hopefully we will get more regular updates right?? *wink*
i really enjoyed this part so much manvi is falling for him aww so cute
Continue soon and please pm me when
U update
Beautifully written

Thank you for liking it! Um 😆 I am not so sure about the regular updates since I am a uni student and it will be really hard and also because I am not the best writer so need time to come up with and write the next update. Updates will still be spontaneous in the week and on time at the weekend. As a compensation, I will try to make the updates longer 😉 Will do!