New Virika SS- Partners for life- Part 4- Page 6!! - Page 5

Wonderful update!!Loved it👏

Eagerly waiting to knw about their past...

Hey; loved it as usual, the amount of detail is quite amazing.

I could picture Jeevika's jog in the morning and the phone call with Manvi was exactly in character as the Jeevika in the show (it's good to see Manvi in education :L).

Although I probably am not qualified/good enough to give you constructive criticism, I thought I could give you a bit of feedback: the end half of the part was quite rushed; I'm guessing your really busy nowadays :)

Just some general feedback: if you slow the pace down a bit, then the whole interaction of Viren and Jeevika would be on a whole new level. But saying that, absolutley adored it and the cogs are turning as to just why Viren broke off contact with Jeevs.

Hope you don't get offeneded, and thank you for the FB tag; keep updating if you can whenever you get any free time :)

@Sabeeha: Thank you thank you for your comments & great feedback; and YES you are def qualified to give pointers to others. I am certainly not offended at all, what could be better than getting feedback from ace writers like yourself. Will def keep your points in mind while writing next time! *PS: As for Manvi, I like to make my characters educated lol*

Excellent Work Amii!!!!! LOvely! but it was so short :'(

Loving the Ff! Update soon!

great work!!!! enjoyed reading it, loved the part when jeevika would go into Viren's room and Viren was aware of it all but he was playing along as well, awesome!!!! 😊

Awww Its Superbbb,Loved It😳

loved ur ss...its amazing...:)please continue soon...:)