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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello you lovely people... Thank you so much for your comments.. They make my day 😃
Here is part 4... Hope you guys like it 😊


Part 4:




Around 6.30 am in Jeevika's Room

Manvi is fast asleep and Jeevika had her shower and came out. She went to manvi's side and removed the cover from her face.
Jeevika: Maanu... Chal get up.
Manvi: Di yaar.. Please let me sleep na. Sirf 10 min

After 10 mins...
Jeevika: Maanu Chal now get up... Remember what we did last night?
Manvi's eyes shoot open...


Virat's Room around 6.30am
Virat: Bhai I'm sure yeh Sab uss bandaria ka idea hoga.. Meri Bhabhi toh sita hai sita.
Viren: Im sure Sab meri Saali ka plan toh Nahi hoga. Jeevika aur sita... Virat tu na apne Bhabhi ka pet hai. You think she is innocent in this prank. Ek number ka chamcha hai tu.
Virat: Bhabhi yeh Sab...
Viren: Yes Virat... It's both the Behnas.
Virat: let's get that bandaria and only you get bhabhi...Bhai..
Viren: hmm... That's not fun... Let play a game on them.
Virat: game?
Viren: Yes Game... Let's pretend like this didn't affect us. I'm sure it will kill them inside and they will confess. * smiling*
Virat pats Viren.
Virat: Vaaah Bhai... Kya idea hai. Aap apne Biwi ko sambalo aur mein meri bandaria ko sambal ta hoi.
* smirk*
Viren: clean up quickly and then we will go outside my bedroom.
Virat: outside your bedroom.. Bhai hum Kyun...
Viren: just trust me...
Virat in the bathroom..
Virat: Yeh bandaria ne kitna make up Lagaya hai... Ek baar tu confess Kar phir mein tera guitar bajata hu.
Viren: Virat mere Bhai.. Stop talking to yourself and get out quickly..
Virat came out cleaned up and Viren smiled.
Virat: kya Bhai.. Please don't laugh.
Viren: sorry but you looked Cute..

Viren and Virat both tip toed outside Viren's Room around 6.45am

Jeevika's Room around 6.45am:

Manvi's eyes shoot open..
Manvi: OMG di... Im so scared... They will get revenge on us..
Jeevika: Mannu I'm so scared... Viren ji mujhe...
Manvi: Dii stop being scared of them.. Waise bhi Woh lipstick ka idea Jeeju par aapka tha.

Viren hearing this has a grin on his face. Virat is shocked.
Virat: OMG Bhai.. Jeevika Bhabhi...
Viren: Shhh...Chepu chup * winks at Virat*

Jeevika: Yes woh mera plan tha aur
Virat ki bindi ka bhi mera plan tha and what did you do... The lip- is - stick and manvi special blusher.
They both start to laugh.
Manvi: Mujhe uss Chep ka reaction dekhna hai... Jeeju toh... Vaah Vaaah mein kya kahon..
Jeevika blushes and smiles.
Manvi: Haaaye... Jeeju toh kal raat aapke naam ki Mala jap rahe the
Jeevika: Chup Kar Mannu... Go fresh up.
Manv: Yes di I'm going... Waise di Your cheek are more pink than that chep's blusher cheeks.
Jeevika runs behind manvi and manvi runs and shuts the bathroom door.

Viren: Nice going Mrs Vadhera..
Virat: we have to get them back Bhai.. Waise Bhai how many times do you jap Mala with jeevika Bhabhi's name? * laughs* Viren hits him..
Virat's laugh is too loud.
Suddenly Jeevika opens the door and finds them both sitting on the floor.

Jeevika is speechless. Doesn't know what to say.
Jeevika: Vi-Vir-Viren Ji app yahan...

Viren and Virat are confused. Viren gets up and walks up to her and holds her hand.. Their face is inch close and are lost in each others.
Viren: Kyon mein Apne Biwi se Milne Nahi...
Virat: Ahem... Ahem... Guys do your romance in shut doors. No one will disturb you. Mein toh abhi bacha hu... Please control in front of me.

Manvi: Kaun hai bacha? Good Morning Jeeju.. Aur tum
Chep.. Why are you sitting on the floor...Subah subah Bhikh mangane lage..
Virat: dekho meri Bhabhi ki behna.. Subah subah Na apna ugly face maat dekhoi .
Manvi: Chep ... I don't talk to ugly people in the morning.
Virat: Oh really now... But you talk to yourself every morning in front of the mirror..
Manvi: haha you are so funny Virat... Im going to die from laughter.

Jeevika and Viren are watching this exchange and are smiling. Viren interrupts.

Viren: Please you two stop this early in the morning. If Dadaji finds out about what you two did... [while saying this he's looking at Jeevika and manvi ]
Jeevika and manvi just look at each other...
Jeevika: Mannu Chal mere saath... I have to tell you something.
Saying this she holds manvi's hand and takes her downstairs.

Viren has a smile on his face.
Virat: Vaah Bhai... Kya lawyer hai aap.. You scared both of them... Getting revenge is so sweet...
Viren: Yes it is definitely sweet. From my opinion I know jeevika is going to convince manvi to apologise to us and I know she will be successful too... Let's wait to see that then we will get them back...
Virat: Till then Bhai I'm going to my room... Better get ready for breakfast warna Dadaji... You know what I mean...
Viren: I know what you mean... Chal I'll also take a shower and get ready

Jeevika and Manvi downstairs

Jeevika: Maanu Did you hear what VirenJi said. Mujhe paka Lagata hai VirenJi aur Virat ko pata Chal Gaya hai ki yeh prank hum done kiya tha..
Manvi: Di stop getting so scared.. They can't do anything..
Jeevika: Dadaji...
Manvi: *scared* Dadaji... Pffft they won't tell Dadaji.. Would they...
Jeevika: the only way to stop them is to confess the mistake and apologise.
Manvi: Di let's think... Hmm...
Jeevika: Mannu please... Kuch maat soch... Dhek... Meri Baat sun... Let's just apologise for our mistake.. I'm sure they will forgive us..
Manvi: Di please...
Jeevika: Please Mannu... Listen to me... Behen ho mein tere khoon ka rishta hai hamara... Mannnuuu * puppy face*
Manvi: Di... This is emotional attaychar... Ugghhh Di...Thek hai di.. Let's go upstairs...You apologise to Jeeju aur mein uss Chep se apologise karuge...
They both head upstairs...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
plz pm me!!! that was amazing!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Amaazing ! bettter thn imagined was gettin restless since u told me ure updatin part 4 n eagerly waiting for part 5 , pls continueee fast n sooo!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz cntinue soon it was amazing.eagrly waitng 4 part 5
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
This just brilliant I love Jeevika being naughty, I can't image her like this but she fun like this. Maanvi will be Maanvi a drama queen any way curry on. I think it the best story I have read so far.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Thank you so much guys 😃 You guys are the best...
Guys I think I might turn this into a FF but not sure yet 😉

Love you guys
Ani
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Its Amazing..!
Thanks for the pm and do continue soon..!
Pm me when u update...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Love it hurry up with the next part please !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was really good! pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really goood but u never did pm me

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