Scene of Virika after accident - Page 2

Originally posted by: Mo710

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Originally posted by: Amii90

Hey guys, lovely topic! Just on request for an OS on this typical scene, I have made a small attempt to write one. I am not a writer so its just a quick write-up; hope it meets your standards and you will like it. Please do comment! ( Have not edited it so could be spelling mistakes) Enjoy!

VIRIKA OS- NOTHING MORE IMPORTANT THAN YOU!

The news of Jeevika and Viren's accident just shook everyone; Viren had only minor injuries whereas it was Jeevika that had severe injuries and was in critical condition. Everyone had gathered in the hospital where Viren just came out after getting few bandages done. Vanshika and Virat hugged Viren and he explained how the accident occurred.

Viren: Mom, Jeevika kaisi hai, kahan hai? Mujhe milna hai usse

They all kept quiet hearing Jeevika's name knowing that she is still in critial condition. Vanshika avoided making eye-contact making Viren even more stressed.

Viren: Mom, please batayiye kya hua Jeevika ko?

Vanshika: Beta, Jeevika ki halat bahut hi serious hai, doctor ne kaha hai ki agle 24 ghanton tak observation main rakha jayega phir hi kuch pata chalega

Hearing this, Viren just shattered down; he ran towards the ICU trying to look at Jeevika through the window. Seeing her lying there with an oxygen mask and million other machines, his heart ached and tears flew down uncontrollably. Everyone came upto and consoled him when the doctor came by.

Dada Ji: Doctor, abh Jeevika beti ki tabiyat kaisi hai?

Doctor: Vadera Sahib, abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai, we have to wait 24 hours before we can say something.

Viren (crying): Doctor, please kya main Jeevika ke paas ja sakta hoon, main uske paas baithna chahta hoon

Doctor: I am sorry Viren but I can't allow that

Viren cried and pleaded him with folding hands and telling Dada ji to convince him; everyone cried seeing him in this condition.

Doctor: Fine Viren, I will talk to the authorities.

Viren: Thank You, thank you so much doctor!

Shortly after few mins, doctor allowed him to go inside and he made his way to the ICU. He slowly opened the door and sight in front of him just shook him emotionally. He stood there crying staring at his Jeevika- remembering her smiling face, her shyness, her being dressed with choora and adorning herself with mangalsutra and sindhoor making her belonging to him- & lying there with several bandages tied to her head and arm; oxygen mask, and many other tubes and machines. He slowly walked upto her and carassed her hair and face ensuring not to disturb her although she was still unconscious; crying uncontrollably he kissed her forehead and sat down on the stool next to the bed holding her hand in his. He can't imagine himself and his life without her, he thought. He spent whole night sitting next to her and ultimately fell asleep next to her laying his head on the bed while sitting on the stool. Everyone was worried outside that he has not come out and that he needs rest as well. Virat saw him through the window and he walked back.

Vanshika: Virat, Viren ne kuch nahi khaya usse kaho ki kuch khale

Virat: Mom, mujhe nahi lagta bhai is waqt kuch khayenge, is waqt unka bhabhi ke pass rehna bahut zaroori hai; so let him be with her. Aap tension mat lo, main hoon yahan par.

Everyone left for home except for Virat who spent the night sleeping on the sofa outside the ICU hallway whereas Viren was inside with Jeevika. Next day, everyone came to hospital and Vanshika fed Viren food so he can take his medicines.

Vanshika: Viren, tum chinta mat karo...Jeevika bahut jaldi theek ho jayegi aur waise bhi jab tumhare jaisa itna pyar karne wala pati ho to kaise use kuch ho sakta

Viren placed his head on her lap crying and Vanshika consoled him.

Viren: Mom, abhi tak Jeevika ko hosh nahi aaya, sari raat main uske jagne ka intezaar karta raha. Agar use kuch ho gaya to...

Saying this, he got up and hugged Vanshika who cried to see him in such situation and also consoled him hoping for the better. Then entire day passed away; and every second of that day felt like an hour for Viren. It was around 8 PM when Virat went inside to see Jeevika; it moved him to tears seeing her in that situation. He sat next to her and talked to her saying "Bhabhi, please wake up"! Just then Virat sensed little movement in Jeevika's hands and he rushed out to seek a doctor.

Virat: Dr, bhabhi ko hosh aa raha hai aap please chalkar dekhiye

Doctor rushed to the room while Virat told everyone else about this too and they all rushed towards ICU as well. Doctor did his check-up seeing Jeevika gaining conscious and within few minutes, regaining herself back and being stable.

Doctor: Good news, Jeevika ko hosh aa gaya aur blood level aur baki sabh kuch stable hai; par hum abhi hune ek do din aur yahan observation ke liye rakhenge. Aap sabh mil sakte hain

Dada Ji: Shukriya doctor saab

They all rushed inside the room and Jeevika laid there trying to smile a little seeing everyone. Vanshika kissed her forehead while crying and Jeevika gave a weak smile indicating shes ok now. Dada ji and Swamini Bua met her and Jeevika tried to smile seeing Virat who wiped his tears and smiled back at his bhabhi. Her eyes slowly turned towards Viren who also had few stitches on his forehead and his hair all scruffy indicating that he hasn't took care of himself. She was worried for him and was relieved to see him standing in front of him. Everyone left the room and Viren slowly walked upto her; he slowly touched her face and carassed her hair- sensing her and feeling her- and broke down sobbing uncontrollably again. He kissed her forehead; Jeevika who was also crying by now, slowly lifted her right hand upto his forehead carassing his wound. Viren held her hand and placed another kiss ensuring that he is okay.

Viren (crying): Pata main kitna dar gaya tha Jeevika... jab mujhe hosh aaya to mujhe maa ne bataya ki tum ICU main ho, main hi janta hoon ki tumhe aise dekhkar mere dil par kya beeti. Yeh 24 ghante mere liye 24 saal bankar guzre, har pal tumhe kho deneka ehsaas mujhe hila kar rakh deta; tumhare begair zindagi to kya main ek pal bhi nahi guzaar sakta. Tum meri zindagi, meri saans jo Jeevika...agar tum nahi to main bhi nahi. Maut ko itne kareeb se dekhkar dar nahi laga magar agar tumhe khokar main zinda bachta hoon to yeh mere liye maut se bhi battar hai

Jeevika put his finger on his lips stopping him from saying another more and simply engulfed him in a tight hug; pulling Viren on top of her and she clutched her left arm towards his neck embracing him more tighter. They both cried out loud embracing each other with intention of never letting go of each eacher forever. She could feel the pain in his words, his teary eyes, his choked sobbing voice, she felt it all. She couldn't speak much; she nodded to tell him to stop crying that its all over and that she is here with him forever. Viren smiled with teary eyes and wiped away Jeevika's tears placing a kiss on both of them. He laid next to next with his legs hanging down and Jeevika rested her head on his chest; they both fell asleep in each other's arms embracing each other for eternity.

Next morning, Viren opened his eyes to see his Jeevika next to him and after long time, a smile crept on his face. He slowly got up without waking her up and got freshened up in the washroom in the hospital facility. Later in the morning, Vanshika came and helped Jeevika get up and fixed her hair etc and she brought breakfast for Viren and Jeevika. Just then Virat walked in.

Virat: Good morning bhabhi, kaisi hain aap? All good?

Jeevika smilingly nodded saying yes

Viren came out after freshening up and saw Jeevika smiling at Virat's silly jokes.

Vanshika: Are Viren aa gaye tum, lo main tumhare aur Jeevika ke liye naashta lekar aayi hoon; Jeevika ke liye khichdi banayi hai

Viren: Jee maa

Virat: Maa, bhai khud bhi nashta karlenge aur bhabhi ko bhi kara denge...apko nahi lagta humain chalna chahiye

Viren smiled at his comment while Jeevika blushed; Vanshika carassed her forehead saying bye and both left the room to leave them alone. Viren came and sat next to Jeevika and started feeding her khichdi and shortly after doctor made his way in the room.

Dr: Good morning Jeevika, Viren. How are we doing now Jeevika?

Jeevika slowly spoke that she is fine.

Dr: Thats good

He did his regular checkup while Viren sat there anxious.

Dr: Nothing to worry Viren, she is doing much better now agar aise hi raha to hum kal tak discharge kar sakte hain

Viren: Thats great news, thank you doctor

Dr: Not a problem, and Jeevika jo maine medicines di hain voh time par leti rahiyega waise to I am sure Viren will take care of that; you are very lucky ki apko itna caring husband mila hai, zid karke inhone apke saath poori raat ICU main guzari. I am sure he will take very good care of you. Okay, so I will see you guys later.

Viren nodded bye and Jeevika just stared at him with admiration while tears rolled down her eyes. Viren looked back at her and was surprised to see her in tears, he shook his head telling her not to cry and wiped her tears.

Jeevika (crying and speaking slowly): Wakya hi Viren Ji main bahut lucky hoon ki mujhe aap jaisa humsafar mila, ek pal ke liye main bhi dar gayi thi ki mujhe kuch ho gaya to...par apke pyaar ke aage sabh kuch jhuk gaya, jisse itna pyar karne wala pati mila ho usse bhala kya ho sakta hai, I love you, Viren Ji

Viren moved forward and kissed her forehead whispering "I love you, too"!