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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

awesome.. ff...read full part now... it is awesome


Thank youu.

Originally posted by: shahriddhi

hey! its quite interesting!

update soon :)


Thanks. Im gna update real soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy just caught up with ur ff really amazing.. would lovee to read moooree!" :)
plz add me to ur pm list!
do cont soon ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: karanshilpa22

heyyy just caught up with ur ff really amazing.. would lovee to read moooree!" :)
plz add me to ur pm list!
do cont soon ;)


Thank youu n iwll x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
OMD, finally i'm updating after a month! Guyz, im soo sorry! I was busy with homework n then I had my exams, so i had to concentrate on them! Really sorry again! So I decided that I'm finally gna update 2dy! =D

Chapter 3

Standing in front of me were two men. They were dressed in black and had many gold and silver chains hanging on their necks. I looked at them awkwardly, fear struck on my face. Immediately I moved their hand off my shoulder. The men smiled at me.
"Oi Chammak Challo, don't worry. We won't do anything. Hum "sharif" log hain." the men chorused together.
Sure they were. Like I was going to believe that. I scanned my eyes around the plane. All the passengers were sitting down, or they were blocking the path ways. I needed to escape.

"Bhai saab, there's a spider on your head!" I shouted and legged it as they ran after me like dogs. Pushing people over was not at all like Jeevika. I remember Mannu doing this. She used to drag me around the whole city as we ran away from ghundas.

Now, I had reached the airport but I was still running away. My head started to spin. People around me were blurred. Slowly, I started falling to the ground. But as I nearly fainted, I felt an arm grab me and pulled me closer. I could hear a man shouting at someone. Then my eyes opened a tiny bit and I saw the guy I was sitting next to on the plane. I managed to smile and instantly, I fell into his arms.

*~*~*

I was lying on a bed in an unknown room. I didn't have a single clue on what had just happened to me. All I needed was my Maanvi. I decided to call her.
It was ringing. Suddenly it stopped.
"Hello? Who is this?" said a voice.
Maanvi. After so many months I heard my sister's voice. Tears rolled down my cheeks as she kept on repeating 'Hello'.

All of a sudden, I realised that the guy that sat next to me on the plane was sitting next to me. I wiped my tears as he grabbed my phone off me.
"Hello?" he said.
"Finally someone replies! Who the hell are you? Why aren't you talking to me?" shouted Maanvi.
The guy made a 'bak bak' sign which made me laugh so much.
"Sorry Miss Bak Bak. I called the wrong number." he replied calmly and hung up the phone.

"Kya larki hai. Kaun ti?" asked the guy.
"Maanvi my sister." I answered.
He was shocked.
"You're lying right? I mean, you're so quiet and she's so loud." the guy said as he folded his arms.
"She's my step-sister." I mumbled. Immediately I covered my mouth with my hands.

What did I just say? Why did I say it to him? He's nothing to me and I still said who Maanvi is to him? Why did he need to know? I was soo angry at myself! He's just a random guy who I met on the plane.

To be honest, he looked twice as shocked. Thank god he didn't ask any questions.
To avoid any awkwardness I asked him "Where are we?"
"Erm...at a hotel." he replied as he looked down. "Our flight's tomorrow btw. We missed it because of those ghundas."
Suddenly, I remembered everything. Me going on the wrong plane, the ghundas chasing me and finally the guy saving me.
"Thanks." I said.
"No problemo. By the way, what's your name?" he asked politely.

I was shocked at myself. We had known each other for so many hours and yet we didn't know each other's names. How stupid am I? Or shall I say we?

"Jeevika Chaudhry. What about yours?"
"Viren Vadhera. Friends?"
"Friends!"

We shook each other's hands. It looks like I have found a new friend!

Hope you liked 2day's update. Will update soon and will update more in Easter holidays! Sorry it's a short update.

Nahi

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
OMG I'm first to comment.

First of all, you took ur time didn't you😆 i had to remind you like thousand of times. Please don't do that again. i mean we started r ffs off together and i'm aready on chapter 17🤣

Secondly, wow that was amazing! She escaped and fainted in his arms. So sweet😳

Keep up the good work behna. can't wait for the next update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Well worth the wait :)

Finally, we know our mystery dude's name :P Aww it was adorable how Jeevika fell into his arms, proper romantic <3

So Manvi is Jeevika's step-sister; that explains quite a lot in terms of the mother-daughter relationship that we saw a glimpse of in the first chapter. (:L I'm getting a bit of Jia from Kal Ho Na Ho coming out here)

Anyways it was great; please update when you can [=
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -Niha-

OMG I'm first to comment.


First of all, you took ur time didn't you😆 i had to remind you like thousand of times. Please don't do that again. i mean we started r ffs off together and i'm aready on chapter 17🤣

Secondly, wow that was amazing! She escaped and fainted in his arms. So sweet😳

Keep up the good work behna. can't wait for the next update👏


Loool. I certainly did! ;) Ikr! Ahahaha! Thnxxx! Cnt w8 4 urss! xxx

Originally posted by: sabeeha

Well worth the wait :)


Finally, we know our mystery dude's name :P Aww it was adorable how Jeevika fell into his arms, proper romantic <3

So Manvi is Jeevika's step-sister; that explains quite a lot in terms of the mother-daughter relationship that we saw a glimpse of in the first chapter. (:L I'm getting a bit of Jia from Kal Ho Na Ho coming out here)

Anyways it was great; please update when you can [=


Hehe. Aww thnx yep! Viren <333 I didn;t think of that lol. Of course!

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Veeeii Nice,Lubhed It To Bits😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nabamita4Virika

Veeeii Nice,Lubhed It To Bits😊


Thnx Nabamita!

Nahi

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Thank youu x

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