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This is my first time writing a OS so I thought I would do one on Viren and Jeevika as there are many Virat and Maanvi ones out here. Hope you all enjoy it, do comment on how you found it, and excuse any grammatical error, on my part.

Everyone had finished eating their dinner, and Dadaji had excused them all from the table at exactly 20.42. As Jeevika rose, she brushed against Viren's hand; he immediately looked up, and could not help but to stare at her beauty. She left the table area and walked into the next room with Chachi, she sly fully looked back and smiled at him. Viren was memorised, and could not utter a word. All he wanted was to be with her, and wondered how to get her alone.

Finally, Viren left the dinner table, after being teased by his brother about his wondering eyes. He decided he would try to steal his wife, from the clutches of his family, who were very happily chatting away on the veranda. Viren pondered, how would he get his wife's attention? He knew that Jeevika would not just leave with him unless there was a reason. However, he could not come up with a good enough excuse. He casually leant against the wall, and got his phone out. This was a marvellous creation. He texted Jeevika, and said to her that he had something very important to discuss. However, what he did not anticipate was that Jeevika's phone would be left in their room. When she did not respond, he needed to come up with another plan quickly! Suddenly, an idea whizzed into his
mind. Why didn't he think of this early, he thought. Viraat. He was the perfect person for the job. All that was needed, was to convince him, which was actually easier that Viren first thought, all Virat wanted was pizza. (The man loves his food. Unfortunately, he missed a meal again) Virat rose to the occasion, and was able to get his pyaari bhabhi away from his outrageous family, with only a few sweet words.


Jeevika was perplexed; she did not know what was going on. Virat did not say a word and took Jeevika to her bedroom. Once she entered, she turned to Virat, who had suddenly disappeared and closed the door behind him. Still ever confused, she turned around to see Viren leaning against their cupboard. He stood tall and handsome,in a purple shirt and suit and walked towards her. Both their hearts were beating faster. He did not say a word and slowly brushed his fingers against her face, his touch was soothing. She closed her eyes and said his name lovingly. He felt as if he had gone to heaven. He finally had his wife alone. With his one hand, he pulled her closer and moved his other across her stomach and back. As she got closer to him, her hands went around his back. They were so close that they could hear each other's heart beating. He gently caressed his hands across her back and kissed her neck. That was a night like no other.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👍🏼 loved it!
Virat completing his duties as a brother and devar! 😆
and who knew Viren could be so badmash! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nicely written. Hope to read more from you in future.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really Nice😊 Njoyed! Do Write More😊
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SOOO amazing..:) :) Great Work indeed! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Glad you all enjoyed it.😊 If I feel creative again I will sure to write another one.

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