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siya_16

@siya_16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Loved it...pls update soon... And pm me also... 😊

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Lovely story...The emotions are well-delineated! It's true to the characters as well. You should definitely continue.

Just a helpful note- since you are doing it in chapters, it isn't an OS, which is just an abbreviation for One-shot, or a single chapter story. I think you should consider renaming it as an SS, or in other words a short story:)

I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter...please do PM me when you update!

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Amri174
Lovely story...The emotions are well-delineated! It's true to the characters as well. You should definitely continue.

Just a helpful note- since you are doing it in chapters, it isn't an OS, which is just an abbreviation for One-shot, or a single chapter story. I think you should consider renaming it as an SS, or in other words a short story:)

I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter...please do PM me when you update!

Thanks for the lovely comment...
And This was actually meant to be an OS only though it was divided into two parts because of my exams...but I m not considering to update it since I haven't got any new idea to continue it...

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Hi when are u continuing? pls do it soon :) thanks!!

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

That was a nice update!!!! But she fainted...oh gosh well hope for more Virman moments!!!!

I love how you have portrayed the emotions of Maanvi very well...her recognizing Viraat when he comes and how she can'd even bear to lose him...typical of her for whom the whole world even her death is something easily told but not losing the loved one!!!!