Collecting on Promises! A short OS.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

A brilliant OS Hasini.

I have also just started watching the show. It's quite good in my perspective.

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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497410

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey Hasini!

Okay I'm a huggeee shipper of JeeVi & VirMan... and I wouldn't want anything.. anything at all of this sort happening in the show!🤔 🤣

But I must say, you've done a FAB job of writing it up!

Kudos to you!

-Sharmi

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Sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I agree with Sharmi. I dnt want jeevika to love manan and i definitely dnt want manvi to kiss viren
But really gr8 xpression of manvi & jeevika's love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Oh! Common Girls, this is only a spin on the story line from my imagination...
So I can only hope you see it that way.

I understand, we all fight accepting alternatives 😉 Lekin...show abhi bakhi hain mere dost.

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Jyothi N

@-Jyo-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thank you Jyo.

Oh! I wish you could finish it and let me know if you liked it. It's completed by the way.

I know, I have a feeling she is going to do something of the sorts in the show, but not sure if it would be with Manan, or Viren or even that other guy...(Viren's brother).

Even I wish that could get sm time and read ur ff but my job is eating all my time, sure ll leave comment when I finish reading it. I know u completed it, recieved pm.
Now she wont do anything to break jeevis marriage. But its too confusing wts manan charecter doing in the show??? If J is in love with M, wts the use of introducing Vs whole family??? Hope M dont turn into negative one.

Keep writing...

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her_story

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey Hasini, nice to see u here... welcome to the show and the forum...

Though i am a through and through Virat-Manvi fan, i am curious to know how this story turns out... so do continue...

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sparkling-star

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hey loved your OS !

.. Even though I'm like a really huge Virman fan .. :D

Will be wating for more! I hope this doesn't happen in the show but this is reallly good for an OS .. Short but interesting .. Pls write more. 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 6thElement
Oh! Common Girls, this is only a spin on the story line from my imagination...
So I can only hope you see it that way.

I understand, we all fight accepting alternatives 😉 Lekin...show abhi bakhi hain mere dost.

I know!

That's the reason I said, I don't want this to happen in the show!

Apart from that, I love the way you portrayed Maanvi's character... she is impulsive and sweet and totally adorable!

Her pov of JeeVi's relation is awesome to read! 😳

You've done a great job with it!

Do continue it! =)