New SS 'Dirty Rotten Scoundrels' updated Chapter-1, 07/08

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nothing's more deadlier than MEN with SECRETS...

Nothing's more sexier than WOMEN with SECRETS...

Brace yourselves for a shocking/rollicking roller-coaster ride with the BADASS BOMBSHELLS!!!

Statutory warning- Weak-hearted peeps...ABSTAIN FROM READING 😆 😈

PS- There's very little similarity between the show characters and MY characters. It's not just the Goenkas, but more or less EVERYONE'S evil 🤣

Do let me know if u wanna be pm'ed.

Edited by shelly_08 - 11 years ago

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Index :

Prologue

Chapter-1 Goenkas, Thakurs and the city.

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shreya

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Prologue:

'What a wonnderrfull evening, ain't it Mathur?' He slurred looking at his half-empty glass. 'Beautiful weather, beautiful wine and...' he looked to the other side where all those scantily-clad women were gyrating- 'beautiful women. Really what else can one possibly ask for' he giggled after finishing the sentence.

Mathur wasn't sure whether he's supposed to laugh at this statement or not, he smiled nervously at his boss resulting in his face looking constipated! He knew this man was up to no good and him taking refuge in such a conspicuous place strengthened that belief!

'See that b**** over there' his drunk boss pointed to a particular girl. She wasn't dancing, just serving those sloshed predators their supply. Mathur looked her way and saw that regardless of her alabaster skin-tone, her features were not at all western. If possible she looked...Indian. He gulped.

'She came to the Goenka house a few weeks ago, B**** that she is, thought she could get her ugly paws on Raj, didn't she? What did he say was her name?' He closed his eyes and hit his glass to his temples and after some time opened them again with a dramatic exclaim. 'Saakshi...Saakshi something. wazzunit?'

At this point, Mathur saw that the woman stared directly at her boss. Her brown eyes were sharp and her gaze piercing. She walked up to them straight and stood facing the offending customer.

'Drinks, sir?' She asked in a husky voice coupled with an alluring smile. But Mathur gulped again as her penetrating gaze haven't left either of them and if he knew better, she could well be spitting poison in both their drinks...and they would have no clue.

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'You...you can't do this to me...I'm your...FOR GOD'S SAKE I'M YOU...' He bellowed but was cut short. 'I know what you are to me...won't even need a DNA test for that, would I?' The other one drawled, fixing his revolver.

'Do you realize what you're doing? You would be in Jail all your life' He tried threatening as the last resort as his hands were tied- literally.

'Please' he chuckled now walking up to the tied man, 'I know what I'm going to do' his voice was so calm yet so dangerous. He came to his side, pointed the revolver to the man's head and whispered amid his loud pleas and protests 'Au revoir, Arnav Goenka.'

Over to you all peeps 😃

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CornKhazana

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Posted: 11 years ago

plot seems to be interesting.do continue.

eagar to see what the secrets would be

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Ramona

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Posted: 11 years ago

Shreya !!!!

Glad to have you here. I'm a huge fan of Innocence Lost.
Waiting eagerly for this story.

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: atominis
Bring. It. On.😉

Was sooo looking forward to your comment LOL 😆

The fact that the show's not keeping our interest made me think of crazy stuff!! Prologue will be up tonight 😈

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Posted: 11 years ago

Shelly

I want complex power play amongst all badass characters. Kaante ki takkar!😉

Looking forward to your creativity.😊

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aa_patel
plot seems to be interesting.do continue.
eagar to see what the secrets would be

😉 😈

Originally posted by: PristineSoul
Shreya !!!!

Glad to have you here. I'm a huge fan of Innocence Lost.
Waiting eagerly for this story.

Wooww...that's a pleasant surprise! 😳

Thanks dear, will pm u for sure.

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: atominis
Shelly
I want complex power play amongst all badass characters. Kaante ki takkar!😉

Looking forward to your creativity.😊

Ohh TRUST ME you're gonna get that and MORE!! 😈

I've written an ff with the same name on Maan-Geet and the response it received surprised me even (in a good way, of course) 😆

But in this the story's completely different and unlike the shows which deals with 'Good vs Evil', there's nothing 'Good' here to begin with 🤣