ShraMan OS: Poles Apart - Page 2

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

How? I mean how do you write so well?🤪This one's a masterpiece Sal!

A sleepless night and. ShraMan! 😆

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Originally posted by: Sunain

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<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hiii...🤗</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">In the beginning you wrote "Something Different"...That caught my interest the most! Yet the tittle itself was a captivating one.</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am just to spellbound reading such a enchanting OS!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">It was tre,tremendouslypenned...Mind it each and every line!</font>

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Humans are made of heartbreak and broken promises, hopeful tears and sad smiles. Experiences that wreck the soul to the core and leave the heart numb. Wise decisions taken after sleepless nights staring at the crack in the ceiling that is sometimes a stolid smile, sometimes a frown. A brick of dreams which crumbles to pieces. Empty words muddled with feelings. Emotions that burn your lungs and explode within your chest like a volcano in eruption...<font size="2">I so badly want to give you a tight hug!🤗...Truly beautifully written! Its so true!</font>

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And yet she wore heartbreak with ruthless elegance as if it was a dress which threads had been stitched to cover every inch of her skin....💔😭

My hair will go grey, my skin will wrinkle, my memory will fade to oblivion and I'll forget how to spell my own name but I will never succeed in perceiving the mysteries behind the unparalleled enigma that is Suman Tiwari...❤️

Suman Tiwari is everything I am not.
She is loud and proud, so much that she puts the princess of beauty to shame.
I am soft-spoken and drifting, my words are waves crashing against a rock.
Her heart is as hard a metal road, mine is as soft as clay.
She is all artifices, I am all simplicity.
Together, we make an evening in the city of lights worth your while.
She is south, I am north.
She is east, I am west
She is right, I am left.
We are two paths that are never meant to cross. Parallel lines that never coincide.
We are close yet so far.
We are poles apart.<font color="#333333">...</font>..Brilliantly penned!

Ufff..mera bas chalay tu mein poora chapter quote karlon yahan...Truly Saleha..You are too good! Too too good!

Memories are burden. She feasts on them as if they were small pieces of candies made of honey.❤️

I starve on them, my tongue aches for the sweetness of that liquor...💔

I cherished her like the broken pearls of a necklace ❤️

and she trampled me over like the leaf of a plant.To me, she is insensitive to the point of cruelty💔

Truly, your best teacher is your last mistake.
After pain comes blessing.
After suffering comes salvation.
After nothingness comes eminence.
After hell comes heaven.
We might be poles apart,
She and I,
Fatedly, we are in for a lifetime.
She is mine, I am hers...❤️

I read your OS and reading just few lines i fell in love with it mind it immensely! You are just amazing! You are truly a wonderful writer! One of the best!👏

The way you penned how he compared her with himself...all that part was just out standing!!!I so so so loved it!

And the ending...Oh My God! The most beautiful one! Literally! I feel with your OS all over again and i was totally totally mesmerizedby the beauty of it!

All the while he though her to be something she wasn't and the realization at the end was penned stupendously!👏👏👏

Hats off to you Birdy!

I so wish i could write as brilliant as you but..anyways we have you don't we😃

Your writing totally blew me off! Woah!

I totally totally loved reading it!

The best one!❤️

Lots of love, Hugs & Kisses for such a Talented Writer!

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Overwhelmed would be the word! Thank you so much Su ❤️

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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Overwhelmed would be the word! Thank you so much Su ❤️

Originally posted by: SumoKaShravan

😳👏

Eagerly waiting to read more like this

Thank you Maria 🤗

Originally posted by: swatiagarwal89

How do u manage this everytime u decide to pen down ur thoughts???

Amazing n awesome are lost words... N i dont even have more synonyms for brilliant n outstanding... So basically i m all short of words again...!!

This intricate detailing of emotions is something u expertise in... I can so feel ur writing!!!

Your writing flows like poetry... Which i can never have enough of...!!

<font color="#ff0000">unfaithful loyalty</font>... <font size="3">awesome choice of words</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Humans are made of heartbreak and broken promises, hopeful tears and sad smiles. Experiences that wreck the soul to the core and leave the heart numb</font>... <font size="2">Wonderful description of life...!!</font>

<font color="#ff0000">And yet she wore heartbreak with ruthless elegance as if it was a dress which threads had been stitched to cover every inch of her skin</font>...

True enigma of Suman... Bravo!!!

<font color="#ff0000">Memories are burden. She feasts on them as if they were small pieces of candies made of honey. I starve on them, my tongue aches for the sweetness of that liquor</font>...never have i read such brutally honestly confessions👏

I loved how u have compared their differences as well as familiarity... From the innocent kids to toxic adults... The emotionalplight of their life from ur eyes could b well felt by me.. u r so drowned in love for edkv n it shows...!!!!

N thank u for the happy ending😛

Your first comment to me Swati, thank you so much it means a lot to me! ❤️

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Loved the Rubic cube and chashmish reference! So indigenous!⭐️</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#330066">After love comes pain...After pain comes blessing.

After longing comes suffering...After suffering comes salvation.

After devastation comes nothingness...After nothingness comes eminence.

After hatred comes hell...After hell comes heaven.</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He found his heaven! #CycleOfLife !</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Of Shadow and substance !</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Such a Stunning piece it is !👏</font>

The one I always look forward to ❤️

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

OMG, this was so cute! <3

I loved the whole tone of factual simplicity here. Small sentences, big meanings. I LIKE this😆😳

And on the whole, the calmness of the narration was so amazingly handled. Right from the start, it was so intriguing.😛

I think I've noted down this well in my list of re read works ;)

- Mahi

I always wrote LONG things so I wanted to try to write something more subtle for once, thank you 🤗
P.S: I had made a post not so long ago, it was 'questions to the forumwasis' and there I had asked you if you has stopped signing at the end of your posts because of me 😆

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Wow! Speechless...👏

Thank you so much Lara 🤗