ShraMan TS: Breaking Free (Part 2 page 7)

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shirly amirja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Very emotional one dr...it made me cry 😭

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Whoa! That was something!

So effortlessly written though!⭐️

I never expected this ending. But yeah, it meant much more. He had to sort it out before returning to her, he couldn't let his lack of trust and other issues come in between. Though I would've loved if you'd shown Suman breaking off from the marriage too.😳

Too much freedom, eh?😆

ShraMan always makes us dive deep into emotions, everytime is a new experience. So, thankyou for enlightening us on one more facet from the thousands of instances.

The detailing was indeed so delicately done. I always admire your ability to do this, it's so soft and smooth!

Love,

Mahi.

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orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Gorgeous piece buddy!

Very well done with the detailing..

Though the end did make my heart hurt but I like who you wrote it!

Way to go!

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: BloodRune
😭

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Tussi chha gaye! Just wish *sniff*

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nobonita.sara
Heart touching os . U nailed it.

Thank you so much :)

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05
Saleha, please issko ss main convert kar do 😭

It may sound sadistic but I like the ending but if an idea strikes, I'll make it a TS.

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: avni01
My shraman😭. Lovely os. Rula diya

Our ShraMan ;)

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Very painful 😭
But ye ending nahi ho sakta warna SRK ka om shanti om wala happy ending wala dialogue galat hojayega 😛
If possible make it two shots Saleha..

I'll think about this possibility! Thank you :)