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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
soch soch ke dimaag ka karela ho gaya but this was so much fun 😆
I would like to vote for

Past and Promises - such a beauty 😊

The elusive Mr Momordica Charantia - too funny 🤣

Together this winter - logical Shraman 😎 no hue and cry.

I know 3 out of 20 only allowed.

But the authors of these two stories get 🤗

Heartbreak and Hot chocolate

Under the Blanket
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12


3 out of 20 😳 tough !!

Past and Promises .. more closer to home #EDKV 💔
The Elusive Mr. Momordica Charantia 😆
Heartbreak and Hot-chocolate 😳

Special mentions " come back home " and " under the blanket "
😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
I would like to vote for Together this winter, Past and Promises, and Come back home.
Special mention to,
Heart break and Hot Chocolate.
I liked it a lot but something is a miss. It felt a little incomplete somewhere.



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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
My votes are for--"Embers Of Passion", "A Winter Not Too Cold" and "Under The Blanket".

After reading all, it was truly tough deciding which ones I'm going to vote for. 😕
So I went back and took in consideration the structural side of writings as well.
Hunted for plots and flows that were best with next to no plot errors or flaws and had good punctuation; my fav--dialogue tags and perfect or nearly perfect balance of emotions.

Wonderful job all the writers. 👏
I would mention all the rest of the pieces if I try to give special mentions, so I'm refraining myself from doing it. 😳


Edited by devilaonmoon - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
I would like to vote for Past and Promises, A winter not too cold, under the blanket.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
I would like to vote for
"Sukoon" - the comparison to night and moon, sometimes drawn close, sometimes pulled apart. gets all the extra brownie points😳
"Under the blanket"- Basically everything was fab
"Past and Promise"- makes my heart cry for Suman😭

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Special mentions

Embers of Passion- the shayari was lovely!
Heartbreak and Hot Chocolate- the last line!
Come Back, Home - the idea was way different than the others and also well executed


love
arpita
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
that was awesome reading such amazing pieces...loved everyone of it...
sorry the admin said only 3..even though deserve the same...

I would like to vote for "Come Back Home" , "Sukoon" and "Ember of Passion"

all the best guys🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
I would like to vote for
1) TOGETHER THIS WINTER
2) THE TOUCH OF LOVE and
3)PAST AND PROMISES.

Oof!!! This was a very tough job..
I was not willing to leave any but what to do!!
Only three will be taken for counting,right?

Congratulations and hats off to all the participants👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
I would like to vote for "Together this winter"
"A winter not too cold"
And "Under the blanket"


What I loved about the pieces:

Together This Winter~ This piece was so subtly and flawlessly Shraman. Because their fights may a storm but their reconciliation are always a summery zephyr. And this piece perfectly captured that. I also loved how the swig came into play and how they kept the ritual of meeting one another before Shravan leaves for London.

A winter not to Cold~ Again, the subtly was superb. I loved the indifferent way Suman apologized or rather asked if Shravan could forgive her. All this happening while they were walking bought back memoried of EDKV where Suman always walked Shravan to his car! Also worthy of mentioning, the way he said this feelings of his towards her were true! That line was love! And the forehead kiss near the end was the cherry on top.

Under the Blanket~ What immediately made me fall in love with this piece was the line where the author captured Shravan's essence by having him concerned about Sumo suffocating herself to death with a blanket! That was Brilliant and utterly cute. The rest of the story was a beautiful choreography of Shravan in bed, and not in the way one may initially think! All in all a beautiful read.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
All stories were amazing 👏 hats off guys 👏👏
It's difficult choice

My vote
1. Together this winter
2. Come back home
3. Heartbreak and Hot-Chocolate

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