Sumo Drabble: Burden - Page 3

Originally posted by: Ranified009

It was really beautiful Saleha...thanks for the pm

And of course congratulations❤️

Originally posted by: Safire

Beautiful piece of work Saleha!!

Once again congratulations!!

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sal,

Congratulations for becoming Dazzler!!! This was just amazing Sal!!! I'm so sorry I haven't read much of your work, I'll start soon. Pakka😳But just loved this and the one Nik posted as your previous one. You really write well and described Sumo inner feelings really well. You know many think that Sumo did very wrong to Shravan, I agree but she had suffered a lot too. Suman was such a beautiful character, but the makers spoiled it in the end. I'm sure they didn't think her confession was important enough. It was for her as much as her confession was important for Shravan. He needed to hear it back from her too.

But I feel not just two she lived many personalities simultaneously which was really commendable. One of a strong independent woman, one of a burdened child who has to think about everyone else before she could have a single thought about herself, one who is madly in love with her best friend, one she has to pretend she doesn't care.

Really love how complex Shravan and Suman's characters were.

And you have got us Sumo's heart out in open for us. Just loved everything about this Drabble. There's something about the sky which is endearing with the feeling of loneliness and the way you used it in your write up is commendable. The reference of Birds is one such, gives us lesson of how life works and moves forward but for someone like Suman the caged feeling never left her. She was caged in different cage every time she tried to fly. This drabble was just perfect way to describe the very complex Suman.👏⭐️

I might keep going on now. Will not bore you now😆

Lubna.

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

That was a beautiful piece Saleha!!

Congrats on being a dazzler! Keep dazzling!😃

Originally posted by: Nik03

😭

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Kya huwa? 😆

Originally posted by: Nik03

You havent replied to mine yet!!

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Arre baba karti hoon 😆

Originally posted by: Nik03

Sal🤗

Long time buddy n am sorry for that...I truly am!!

Coming to this one...

Another masterpiece of yours!!

I read it...re-read but I just couldnt get enough of it.

This Sumo...her pain or helplessness.

Beautifully captured👏

She wants to cry,

but dont know how to...

She wants to laugh,

but dont have the reason to...

She wants to run,

but dont know where to...

She wants to fly,

But dont have the wings to...

She just wants to Live,

but dont know when to...

So for now ,She just have to breathe, fight the demons and darkness and to Hope...hope that she'll find herself one day...that she'll find happiness one day.

This piece is special in a way I cant explain...I dont have words!!

God bless you.

Keep writing.

Lots of Love🤗

Nikka sa Nik

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

And this comment is special in a way I can't explain 😳
These lines you have written, where were you hiding till now? I have an official request, could you please write a Drabble or an OS, please *inserts puppy eyes*
Thank you so much Nikka sa Nik, your words have to power to make one smile 🤗