Sumo Drabble: Burden

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

That was some deep analysis but I liked your take on the doting part, made me think also 😆
Thank you so much Mahi and I see that your habit of signing in the end of your posts persists 😆

I thought it's been a while since I was here so people must've forgotten me. Hence a signing off 😆

But surprisingly it seems you remember everything pretty well 😳

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
'Who knows what true loneliness is-not the conventional word ,but the naked terror?
To the lonely themselves it wears a mask. The most miserable outcast hugs some memory or some illusion.'

Joseph Conrad.

What a beautiful write up Saleha. Shows how you have grown as a writer👏. Sumo envisioned and explained as never before. Just because she came off as strong, didn't mean that there was nothing wrong.

Congratulations on your promotion once again!! You provide the much needed oxygen here and so very selfishly. ..I hope you stay around 😳

A Perfect quote !! For a Perfect write up !!

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

That was a beautiful piece Saleha!!

Congrats on being a dazzler! Keep dazzling!😃

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Hey Sal,

Congratulations for becoming Dazzler!!! This was just amazing Sal!!! I'm so sorry I haven't read much of your work, I'll start soon. Pakka😳 But just loved this and the one Nik posted as your previous one. You really write well and described Sumo inner feelings really well. You know many think that Sumo did very wrong to Shravan, I agree but she had suffered a lot too. Suman was such a beautiful character, but the makers spoiled it in the end. I'm sure they didn't think her confession was important enough. It was for her as much as her confession was important for Shravan. He needed to hear it back from her too.

But I feel not just two she lived many personalities simultaneously which was really commendable. One of a strong independent woman, one of a burdened child who has to think about everyone else before she could have a single thought about herself, one who is madly in love with her best friend, one she has to pretend she doesn't care.

Really love how complex Shravan and Suman's characters were.

And you have got us Sumo's heart out in open for us. Just loved everything about this Drabble. There's something about the sky which is endearing with the feeling of loneliness and the way you used it in your write up is commendable. The reference of Birds is one such, gives us lesson of how life works and moves forward but for someone like Suman the caged feeling never left her. She was caged in different cage every time she tried to fly. This drabble was just perfect way to describe the very complex Suman.👏⭐️

I might keep going on now. Will not bore you now😆

Lubna.