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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Resh,

Hope you are having a great time in India. Thanks for this beautiful update. Though in a different way, you still gave Sumo a valid reason to ignore Shravan. That's so Sumo who doesn't give up on her reputation. But this Shravan is different, he knows what bothers her yet enjoys winning over her. Tashan ho to aisa!!
Lubs. .how are you doing now? How's your health? I never come to know anything 😕 yup..this Shravan is different😃

4 years of silence!!! Will definitely result in agreement to begin with and much more as they keep riding the bike😆 I so wanted Shravan takes Sumo for a bike ride once in the show. 😕
15 din bike par..enough to break the ice I guess😆

Rohit was a catalyst but use wahin rakho bahut door😆 I really hate triangles.
I have kept him aside. ..might use him later😉

I'm thinking 4 years ki khamoshi me ye haal hai ab further studies ke liye Janab London ja kar aayenge toh kya hoga😳😆 Thodi dosti hogi pehle, phir doori, right??? Then love and confession I'm already waiting for that confession, u are a pro at the best confessions Resh!!! ⭐️
Aww..am I..I thought I suck at confessions 😆..I haven't chalked out the plot yet Lubs my love..let's see what I come up with.

"Blue suits you" and whizzing out, can imagine what Sumo was feeling like. #Day 1- Tareef abhi 14 din baakhi hai Resh!! Hum sab ko har din ka hisab chahiye, two shots me nahi hoga. Bada do na please😳
Lubs ke liye toh jaan haazir hai. .bada update kya cheez hai😳

So love this story. Update soon whenever you get a chance 🤗



Lots of love,
Lubna


Thanks Lubs. ..I will update soon darling..but you have to tell me if you are sick or low..I am very possessive about you😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
It's a KJo n Yash Chopra genre! !
I could see some poo... laddo n a jhalak of Anjali somewhere! !
And I loveee,, Family Drama... Tension... Villain... Romance! !
In short I love bollywood! ! 😆

And regarding Shravan...it's needless to worry... when a fangirl writes fandom fly high! !

Love at first sight !! Princess and the Prince Charming! !
First one to sit... rightful place! ! 😉

Shravan extended the olive branch and Sumo readily accepted! !
Some temptations are impossible to resist! !😳
And than comes the compliment,,out of the blue! ! Blush worthy indeed! !

And he calls her Sumo not Suman !!😃

It's a lovely lovely read! !

Sorry for unresng late! ! All my time goes in voting for certain someone these days! !😛
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Superb Resh di
Jealousy Suman so cute and Shravan wow
They will have wonderful 15 days together
Suman noticed that Shravan is getting handsome after 4 years and Shravan also noticed Suman that she looks beautiful in open hairs
Lovely
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Superb Resh di
Jealousy Suman so cute and Shravan wow
They will have wonderful 15 days together
Suman noticed that Shravan is getting handsome after 4 years and Shravan also noticed Suman that she looks beautiful in open hairs
Lovely
Update soon


Thank you sweetheart 😃...yup even in enmity they noticed how good looking the other one is😆
Will update soon Zenab. .I am glad you liked this update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Oh my !!!!
This is absolutely beautiful ❤️
There's that ShraMan tashan along with that sweet ShraMan moments 😳

Lovely chapter, will be waiting for the next 😃

Enjoy your vacation Resh di 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: phoenix_edkv

Oh my !!!!

This is absolutely beautiful ❤️
There's that ShraMan tashan along with that sweet ShraMan moments 😳

Lovely chapter, will be waiting for the next 😃

Enjoy your vacation Resh di 😛

Maddy honey. ..how are you doing?
I wrote while travelling ya...so just went with the flow without thinking of the plot..
Glad you liked this though😛
Loving the hols so far babe!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
so now it begins
wonder what lies in store for these two
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Maddy honey. ..how are you doing?
I wrote while travelling ya...so just went with the flow without thinking of the plot..
Glad you liked this though😛
Loving the hols so far babe!!

Resh di 🤗
I'm fine, caught a little cold though
Oh, you know what I love the most, we can have some more chapters when you work up with the plot 😉😆

Oh, I LOVE everything you write 😃
Enjoy di 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Nicely penned...waiting for the next chap😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

It's a KJo n Yash Chopra genre! !

I could see some poo... laddo n a jhalak of Anjali somewhere! !
And I loveee,, Family Drama... Tension... Villain... Romance! !
In short I love bollywood! ! 😆
I didn't for a second realise that the story was moving that way...but then. .was I even thinking while typing this mush?😆..but Thanks for bringing this to my notice Tabby!!

And regarding Shravan...it's needless to worry... when a fangirl writes fandom fly high! !
Fangirl. .guilty as charged😳

Love at first sight !! Princess and the Prince Charming! !
First one to sit... rightful place! ! 😉
I know right..though I literally specified that the bike was new ..didn't the coincidence come across? 😉

Shravan extended the olive branch and Sumo readily accepted! !
Some temptations are impossible to resist! !😳
Look at who is offering that tempting branch Tabby😃

And than comes the compliment,,out of the blue! ! Blush worthy indeed! !
Again..zara origin of compliment par gaur farmaiye😆

And he calls her Sumo not Suman !!😃
He does😃

It's a lovely lovely read! !
I was telling this to Dips and Eva yesterday. ..I laugh at my own romantic write ups😊..but thank goodness you found it good. For some weird unexplainable reason, I feel you are as casual about romance as I am Tabby!!

Sorry for unresng late! ! All my time goes in voting for certain someone these days! !😛
Ahem..who's the Fangirl again?😆

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