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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: vimikrao
In these 4 years they never faced each other or never bother to give imp to each other.
Shravan named her princess when his eyes laid on her for the 1st time.
Sumo is avoiding him because she can't resist his charm & handsomeness.
Shravan felt pang on his chest when her voice broke when she was telling her helplessness because of her father's sudden departure to Bangalore.
Shravan found her beautiful in her blue dress & complimented about her looks.
After hearing his compliment Sumo is blushing.
Something is definitely changing between them for good

Hope we would be going to meet soon Mr & Mrs. Malhotra

Thanks for PM Reshma

Vinu

Hey Vinu..glad to hear from you!! Something is changing for sure.

It took 4 years for them to talk. Let's see how long it takes for them to reach the next step. She's definitely tensed about her dad.

I love your comments always 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Interesting..

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

😃 I knew this would be my cure 😆

so story aage badhi dhakka maar maar ke tujhe haavrat!!

but kya mast aage badhi. super cute.

So the best way to suppress your feelings for a girl is to become her arch nemesis. Goo djob Sharvaan Malhotra.

Dumbledore ne bhi Harry Pooter se kaha tha. You are the chosen one because Voldemort marked you as his nemesis. He chose you and made you big. 😉

Loved your Nimmo 😆 keep her sane!

If this came out of writers block then on a good day tu to dhamaal machane ke plan me hai yaha pe!! 😲

write soon. vacations ka sadupyog kar resh!!

Bike rides ka mazaa to bike rides me hi hai. 15 days of tension ab is tashan ka kya hoga??

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

So it's thanks to DD 😳 tha this vehicle moved and how 😳

Super cute episode Resh !! So Shravan seems to be taking over and Sumo flustered 😆 so it's LIKE or DISLIKE feelings fighting it out in the mind and heart 😆

THE BLUE SUITS YOU !! Before disappearing in his bike ❤️ ( my favourite part )

Princess in Blue kinda ' Frozen ' not meeting each other for 4yrs :) n straight gets to be the first girl to sit on his new bike .. So they agree for a midway path 😆

Thank you for the pm n this back to the future Wala update Resh 😳 loved it n this Dalmala is to my liking 😛

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Interesting one. And an awesome update. Totally loved it. It was a treat to read. Please continue soon.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

Thank you dear!!

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Hey Resh,

Hope you are having a great time in India. Thanks for this beautiful update. Though in a different way, you still gave Sumo a valid reason to ignore Shravan. That's so Sumo who doesn't give up on her reputation. But this Shravan is different, he knows what bothers her yet enjoys winning over her. Tashan ho to aisa!!

4 years of silence!!! Will definitely result in agreement to begin with and much more as they keep riding the bike😆 I so wanted Shravan takes Sumo for a bike ride once in the show. 😕

Rohit was a catalyst but use wahin rakho bahut door😆 I really hate triangles.

I'm thinking 4 years ki khamoshi me ye haal hai ab further studies ke liye Janab London ja kar aayenge toh kya hoga😳😆 Thodi dosti hogi pehle, phir doori, right??? Then love and confession I'm already waiting for that confession, u are a pro at the best confessions Resh!!! ⭐️

"Blue suits you" and whizzing out, can imagine what Sumo was feeling like. #Day 1- Tareef abhi 14 din baakhi hai Resh!! Hum sab ko har din ka hisab chahiye, two shots me nahi hoga. Bada do na please😳

So love this story. Update soon whenever you get a chance 🤗

Lots of love,

Lubna

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: deltadawn
😃 I knew this would be my cure 😆

so story aage badhi dhakka maar maar ke tujhe haavrat!!

but kya mast aage badhi. super cute.

So the best way to suppress your feelings for a girl is to become her arch nemesis. Goo djob Sharvaan Malhotra.

Dumbledore ne bhi Harry Pooter se kaha tha. You are the chosen one because Voldemort marked you as his nemesis. He chose you and made you big. 😉

Loved your Nimmo 😆 keep her sane!

If this came out of writers block then on a good day tu to dhamaal machane ke plan me hai yaha pe!! 😲

write soon. vacations ka sadupyog kar resh!!

Bike rides ka mazaa to bike rides me hi hai. 15 days of tension ab is tashan ka kya hoga??

Goodness. .tu dhakka nahi deti toh August mein aata Yeh update😆

Baby I am dabba when it comes to Harry Potter, but I agree with whatever was said.

My good day will be your birthday now..nothing before that..I shamelessly take a vow never to write and then end up writing again😊

I want a likeable Nimmo. .this Nimmo is me😆..I talk to my tiny that way and I am awarded with a mighty roll of eyes.

Chal tujhe Acha laga toh will write once everyone is asleep..that's all I can manage during vacation 😃

Tashan is my bane right now..I don't know how to use it here but let's see..like I said..you move me and I move this story😳

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

So it's thanks to DD 😳 tha this vehicle moved and how 😳

Super cute episode Resh !! So Shravan seems to be taking over and Sumo flustered 😆 so it's LIKE or DISLIKE feelings fighting it out in the mind and heart 😆

THE BLUE SUITS YOU !! Before disappearing in his bike ❤️ ( my favourite part )

Princess in Blue kinda ' Frozen ' not meeting each other for 4yrs :) n straight gets to be the first girl to sit on his new bike .. So they agree for a midway path 😆

Thank you for the pm n this back to the future Wala update Resh 😳 loved it n this Dalmala is to my liking 😛

Mayu meri jaan! !

DD is the gas in my vehicle. .she propels me.😆

Yup..it's ignore someone yet think of him all the time...

Midway has been agreed for now..one is serious about his grades and other is worried for her dad.

I loved the frozen parallel 😆

Dalmala is me..glad you loved it sweetheart!!