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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Vinu. I know you dont like sad nedings dear. But sach me I did not see it as being sad so continued posting. They came a full circle with each other which is what we wanted off them always right. So this was it.

Before the lake house flashback section there is a tiny para where he doesn't want ot leave her hand... that her final goodbye to him.

WE will always have happier stories to wipe out the sadness though wont we 😆

OK dil Thamke I will read once again where u asked me to read. I can't, I had tears in my eyes while typing this. Sorry I m very emotional.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

So my favourite story ended. ..not quite the way I would have preferred it to, but in a much more realistic and relatable way nonetheless😊..

My delay in commenting here was directly linked to my reluctance in letting this beauty go..the more the attachment, the more time it takes to finally close the book. I stayed on my seat long after you had pulled down the curtains 😳

The best feeling they say is to watch things fall into place after having watched them fall apart for so long. This story was an emotional galore, pulled the heartstrings like no other.

Shravan and Sumo lived for their love and that made it totally beautiful. Life, long or short, it's completeness depends on what it was lived for and how it was lived...they lived it together for each other..mission accomplished 😊

You have grown as a writer with Lost Delta. ...and for that at least you need to take a bow..if not for a thousand other reasons my celebrity writer👏

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
So my favourite story ended. ..not quite the way I would have preferred it to, but in a much more realistic and relatable way nonetheless😊..

Sorry hunny. I know I had bummed you out that day so wasn't really pressing to get any kind of response. Every reader has a right to ignore something they dont like. Although I dont give that right to you most days 😛 and coax you into telling me what you feel. Someday you might just tell me Delta killing them sucked you moron!! 😆

My delay in commenting here was directly linked to my reluctance in letting this beauty go..the more the attachment, the more time it takes to finally close the book. I stayed on my seat long after you had pulled down the curtains 😳

🤗 my personal PR you are 😃 And thanks for being that, bearing rants, monologues on how bored I am of everything all the time and after putting your brain through the slow cooker there comes an update. I dont know how you find the heart to appreciate those especially which come after days of cribbing. Your love is unconditional ❤️

The best feeling they say is to watch things fall into place after having watched them fall apart for so long. This story was an emotional galore, pulled the heartstrings like no other.

Shravan and Sumo lived for their love and that made it totally beautiful. Life, long or short, it's completeness depends on what it was lived for and how it was lived...they lived it together for each other..mission accomplished 😊

you gave in !!! 🤣

You have grown as a writer with Lost Delta. ...and for that at least you need to take a bow..if not for a thousand other reasons my celebrity writer👏

😳 Dont make me blush I wont look good turning purple 😆

I love you. Does that convey the million other emotions I feel right now?🤗

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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: deltadawn

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: evaviego
I miss this already. 😭

One of these days I am going to hold a quiz session for you, on your favourite stories. I want to know how seriously you read them😆

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

One of these days I am going to hold a quiz session for you, on your favourite stories. I want to know how seriously you read them😆

😈

Jaan le lo bacche ki...!!!!! 😆

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: evaviego

😈

Jaan le lo bacche ki...!!!!! 😆

but you finished it uske liye to shabaashi banti hai.😃

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Chapter 19
I had to take a break from writing and what is better than reading DD's stories? 😉
Your Sumo expresses what she REALLY feels and actually tells what she wants.
I hated when Shravan got drunk in the show I don't know it just hurt to imagine that his heart hekd so much pain that he preferred to slip into senselessness.

This conversation really is needed, the way you brought out Shravan's fear of sympathy and so rightly so, he has always loved unconditionnaly, so it's normal that he expects the same from her.

From here on, starts Sumo's quest to seek him, to pine for hm, to prove him her love.

Mere liye ayi ho? I can actually imagine him hunched up, disbelief in his voice, this man has just been so disappointed in his life that when happiness comes knocking at his door, he is afraid of opening it.

Bohot mann hai khush hone ka, saas lene ka, khuli hawa me. Tumhare saath. Par itna sab kuch galat ho gaya... bas aise hi kaise thik ho jayega? Itni jald meri sazaa kaise khatam ho sakti hai Sumo? Itni jaldi kaise..." Bohot mann hai khush hone ka, saas lene ka, khuli hawa me. Tumhare saath. Par itna sab kuch galat ho gaya... bas aise hi kaise thik ho jayega? Itni jald meri sazaa kaise khatam ho sakti hai Sumo? Itni jaldi kaise..."
Sometimes instead of waiting for punishment, you should start by forgiving yourself.

"Proof of Love Mr. Malhotra. Please be there" This is what Shravan needs, assurance and I am sure that she is going to give him just that and even more.

Sumo lived up to her name 👏
This sequence was so important not only to make Shravan realize the depth of her love but also for her, to be able to move one, the fact that was able to talk about her story without shedding a tear and holding her head high tells me that she has healed, truly the best proof of love ❤️

The moment in the car, so pure, so ShraMan like ❤️

"Bohot intezar mat karwana" this reminds me of "daas saal se roz roz mene intezaar kiya..."

Their first kiss! My babies have come such a long way, show main to sirf jhalak mili thi 😆 ❤️

"I love you Sumo"
"I love you too"
This right here makes me so happy.
And DD, we love you three 😆 🤗

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Chapter 20

This would have looked so organic onscreen *_* : a set of fingers entangled sipping coffee over some snacks.

I love the simplicity in their scenes, like the best friend Relationship is still the core ❤️

"Shravan mai tumse kabhi kisi haal me nafrat nahi kar sakti. You don't fall out of love with someone if they mess up somewhere, warna log kabhi insaan se pyaar hi nahi karte.

I love this Sumo. She is expressive and aware of what she wants and your dialogues are just top notch, I can imagine these as part of the screenplay 👏

The way you handled his drinking habits too is commendable, like anyone first's instinct would have been to eradicate alcohol totally from his life, but I really liked the fact that uou incorporate the fact that he could still have it, but with moderation.

"Haan mujhe achchi tum bachpan se lagti ho. Par ab jaisi ho, tumhe kahi bithakar pooja karne ka mann karta hai kabhi kabhi" This was so adorable, I let out a proper 'aww' when I read this 😆

"Pyaar me hoon Sumo. Kitne saalo se ye sab kehne ko tarasta raha hoon pata hai" Why are you playing with my feels, I'll end up watching episodes at this time. This si a parallel to "Kitna kuch kehne ko, karne ko tadapta rehgaya main."

The comparaison between love and the river which flows - beautoful and so real at the same time ❤️
You really like to incorporate small little talks like these and I love reading them ❤️

"Shravi?" Bundle of cuteness 😳
"Good morning beautiful" Imagine Namik whispering this in his oh deep voice *_*
Why we didn't get this in the show? 😭

I think I am DR. Das here, the way he observed them, ye koi shipper hi karsakta hai 😆

"Miss me Sumo"
"I already do..."
How do I deal with my feels at midnight?

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Chapter 21
I missed Pushkar to be very honest. 😃

These two remind me of two teenagers awestruck in love and I love it! ❤️

"British Accent me mujhe convince karne ki koshish mat karo chashmish I chuckled at this, this was a Sumo's line 😆

You have taken his dependency on Sumo on another level, but I guess it's justified with everything they went through and I am glad that now they talk and try to sort out their issues, true sign of companionship 😉

I love Dr.Das, he reminds me of someone ❤️
We don't realize how important it is to reach out to people and just talk, sometimes it can do wonders!

Qutub Minar is back, so is the banter!!

Sada aise hi saath me khushi khushi raho" This reminds me of their bidaai, I actually like that episode.

Their moments together make me smile like an idiot ❤️

Oh God Shravan, is it bad that I understand both of them. Sumo is absolutely right, if they want to start afresh, they should do it with a broad mind, nit while pinning on their past issues.
And I also understand Shravan, because right now he feels that she is again rejecting him, when she only want his well-being, but they'll come around akhir ek duje ke vaaste banne hai.

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