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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 22

I understand where his insecurities come from but I also feel that she has done enough to prove herself and she deserves a fair chance.

It's funny how no matter how much someone tries to assure you but deep-rooted issues always haunt you in a way or another, here his abandonment issues blind him to see her love and care for him.

Sumo tune aaj phir dil jeet liya hai ❤️

Few chapter before I was talking about Sumo's quest of love and see she has reached her destination. "You win Shravan Malhotra, my yearning, my need, my chase for you shall never end"

Perhaps I am just analyzing too much but this "Mai jaanti hoon. Lekin ab mujhe nahi lagta.
Reminds me of Ab darna chod diya hai mene
They are so beautiful. ❤️

These sessions with Dr.Das will eventually heal him. Hmm the treatment looks a little severe but I can't wait to read how they tackle with the distance and learn to have a life of their own but still have the other as a constant.

That your physical proximity isn't proof of your companionship. Neither your absence a proof of your indifference." Just wow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 23

I love their nicknames: Shravi, Life ❤️ ye dono na lade to kitne acche lagte hain 😆

Very intelligent move, sometimes talking to yourself in a middle of panic alway help, I talk to myself while looking into the mirror and it actually helps, loved the realistic bit, here.

Their text messages ❤️
"Good night girlfriend. Love you to the moon and back. I know you can't reply so I will assume you do too :* " I imagined Sumo waking up with a big smile on her face, Mr.Malhotra proves to be boyfriend goals ❤️

The discussion between Nirmala and Shravan and they way she helped him to understand Sumo, I would have loved to witness such perfection onscreen.

Shravan Malhotra and Suman Tiwari have finally reached where I imagined them to be, at peace with each other.
Ab hogi #ShraManKiShaadi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 24
The beginning of the update itself made me so happy ;).
Ramnath Malhotra proves to be father goals and the wedding preparations are full on!!
"Haan hai meri choice waisi, lekin fir tum bhi to meri choice ho na utpataang insaan" I love them, so so much ❤️
These little dialogues, these little moments are so precious, made me smile through out.
Even though they have a taken a step ahead in their relationship they are still those two best friends who share everything with each other and I can feel the tehrav in their relationship. ❤️


"Mai jo puchunga uska khul kar jawab dena. Jaise tum apne dost Shravan se baat kar rahi ho." That's it these fictional characters have ruined me 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Chapter 24
The beginning of the update itself made me so happy ;).
Ramnath Malhotra proves to be father goals and the wedding preparations are full on!!
"Haan hai meri choice waisi, lekin fir tum bhi to meri choice ho na utpataang insaan" I love them, so so much ❤️
These little dialogues, these little moments are so precious, made me smile through out.
Even though they have a taken a step ahead in their relationship they are still those two best friends who share everything with each other and I can feel the tehrav in their relationship. ❤️


"Mai jo puchunga uska khul kar jawab dena. Jaise tum apne dost Shravan se baat kar rahi ho." That's it these fictional characters have ruined me 😆


so you are going to make me talk here!

commenting takes my entire day so these days IRead, like and smile wide 😃(this is me right now after reading your chapter analysis and wattpad has its advantages but forum is forum. a paragraph of analysis looks as delicious as a lava cake to me 😆)

thank you so much for not just reading but finding the little things and appreciating them. I know I am no stalwart when it comes to writing a gripping story na grammar, na to mere typos help the case. But you guys are just love. That you ignore all these things and get into the story and try to understand wha tI want to say.

Is an I love enough to convey how gratified and lucky I am?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn



so you are going to make me talk here!

commenting takes my entire day so these days IRead, like and smile wide😃(this is me right now after reading your chapter analysis and wattpad has its advantages but forum is forum. a paragraph of analysis looks as delicious as a lava cake to me 😆)



Same I get so happy when I see a looong comment, makes my day ;)

thank you so much for not just reading but finding the little things and appreciating them.
These little details and moments make a story and you are a pro at them.

I know I am no stalwart when it comes to writing a gripping story na grammar, na to mere typos help the case. But you guys are just love. That you ignore all these things and get into the story and try to understand wha tI want to say.

Stop being so modest, you are one of the best talents we have here and I hope that you keep spreading your magic ❤️


Is an I love enough to convey how gratified and lucky I am?


More than enough, I love you too ❤️

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