Lost FF - Thread 2 - Epilogue - pg 28 - Last Update - Page 22

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Deepti dear,

Ye itna emotional update...I m almost crying 😭 ...why...why dear...why did u hv to take d epilogue as far as their death...but still...it was very fantastic...their lake side home...all their little moments that u hv described...they r just beautiful...

Sorry sweety. i dont like to kill Shraman ever I usually get upset when they die untimely deaths. But this wasn't untimely. Yes it difficult to cover a lifespan in a tiny epilogue, but the the general direction was pointing to a life which has been fulfilling in itself. Isn't that the ultimate happily ever after?

what is love if it doesn't help you grow into a better version of yourself? Companionship doesn't mean always sticking to the other like a magnet. Shravan was a brilliant guy and Suman was a very giving person. Shouldn't that get a direction through this love? Yeah its a FF and is supposed to be fluffy. But then I couldn't stop myself. Sorry once again cause I made too many girls cry.

Suman not being able to survive without Shravan...this can happen...really...sometimes ur better half actually becomes d centre of ur existence that u really cannot think of surviving without them...

The letter was just perfect yaar...isliye to I m ur fan dear...loved it...a befitting end to a very emotional saga.. 👏

rgds
Anuradha

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Oh god dips beautiful epilogue even though its not a happy one but a perfect one for lost 👏

i was sure that you are going to give something like this as closure to lost and believe me you did it perfectly dear 😃

FB's was beautiful and reading them was pure bliss, just felt bad about kids as they lost their both parents 😭

but still its a master stroke love u hon for this 🤗

Priti

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Dipti I don't know what should i tell. U know I don't like sad endings still I read it. Couldn't see Shravan & Sumo like this. We lost both of them. BTW when did Shravan die because I didn't get in the story. May be long back or recently. I read the story lekhin mere dimag ke andar kuch nehin gaya. Because I was so lost in reading there were no Shraman scene together & end Sumo died. i didnt concentrate properly so that I couldn't get courage to read again. I can't handle sad one sorry if u felt bad.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Originally posted by: lizzy1299

Deepti di.

The whole story of list was beautifully penned. You are a fabulous writer.

Epilogue was emotional. To be honest, I hadn't thought u would end it with their death. I was on verge of tears😭

Shravan's letter was heartfelt.

An emotional end to a lovely story.

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

This whole journey of Lost is smtg truly at another level.. Each emotion,each pain,each happiness.. Everything is so close to heart that it feels I've gone through it at sm point of time .. This would always be very very close to my heart .. & with this u have made me your admirer for life ..

Thank you so much Adi. I mean I am overwhelmed right now reading this. Dont think this this is well deserved at all, but since its making me smile wide I ll take it 😃 🤗

Why did I have that nagging feeling from starting that this epilogue would not end at happy note .. & I was so damn right .. Giving all those beautiful flashbacks .. & then ending with one left alone & finally both of them gone .. Felt an uncalled emotion & literally I cried this time (silently; with my brother giving me weird look & then in a second got to know that I've read smtg emotional again) ..

Why ? I get so attached every time that it hurts when your stories end .. 😭 wish I could get another epilogue too ..

If there's no shraman then I don't have anything further to write about na sweety. I know I feel the same about some of my fav stories ending on forum... but goodbyes are necessary to help move on to newer things always. Do remember Lost though. I feel ten years down the line if I log in and find it as a good read. My objective is achieved 😃

Parting words :- I love you,your brain & your pen(keypad).. 👏🤗❤️

don't part so soon. Please do read Fate 😆 Love you too ❤️

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Is it going to sound weird if I say -

I loved how they died? 😕

I love you for this. Yesterday afternoon I was doing a happy jig saying Lara understood me. I have witnesses😉

But, seriously, what a superb ending to a superb story. 👏

I enjoyed the story so much. Their struggles, their growth, the way

they healed and changed into better beings together... and lived happily until they died. Wow!

I know... that was a serious dose of life lessons there, but I go on that incline a lot of times. This was one such week😆

Loved this story and

love you so much for writing it.

It was a perfect epilogue,

which you ended perfectly with me

desiring to read about their afterlife.

Afterlife. I would rather let them in peace there. We have reached their bedroom and minds already. God wont allow me in this place at least 😆

At the end of a chapter or the story... when you leave readers

wanting for more, you know you've done a great job.

🤗

Lots of love,

Take care.

Lara.

Originally posted by: Safire

Well done!!!

Originally posted by: imshveta

Definitely not the ending anybody was expecting.

It was good in its own way. After all its the truth of life. They had a good life together, complete with family and their many achievements. So I guess it was okay to see them go together as well.

Well done with this unconventional ending 👍🏼

Love
Shveta

Originally posted by: deltadawn

thanks Shveta. Unconventional i life itself aise ho gaya hai😆 I seemed to have lost out on the word Fiction there