Fate - FF CHP 17 pg 63 upd - 7/31/17

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Too many emotions involved, tears threatening to spill out, lessons for life, this was a masterpiece.

I'm sure Shravan will get his car out of the pool, this time round too.

It's hard to let go. I so understand.

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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

no PM yet .. anyways I read on wattpad as u update😉

But seriously was caught up with new job at the bank .. & couldn't comment but could only read ..

this is just amazing .. "Hide n Seek " "Fate" all ur stories deal with emotions at such an intricate and intense level that I just get fully involved and in love with them ..

The way they both are dealing with their emotions is so real like we often find ourselves in places where we don't know which path to take or be selfish or just let go ..

That's just deepti's magic👏❤️

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Finally...!!!! How are you..🤗
This was a beautiful update...
Par ye apni emotions bahar kyu nahi nikalte..?😔 hope you make them confess or give us a beautiful scene to raise our hopes😃
Waiting eagerly for the next..
Anu

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#454

So Good to have you back! ! 🤗

Ramu kaka n Shravan's conversation... soo soo relevant..!!

He could read him like back of his hand !!

What a way to boost up the morale !!

Your happiness is more important than the color of your cabin !! M like wow! !

(The actors would hv nailed it had they been given such scene in the show! ! )

This convo...Nicest thing I hv read in days !!

Now that she knew it was not meant to be, she realized how deeply she had fallen.😭

Sumo to hai hi volatile 😛

Shravan hi kuch sikha de re baba. ..koi to kuch sikha de.. nadaan chiraiya ko! !

"Until you met me...

(Until I met you my life was so simple Mr. Malhotra 😳)

Kuch bada aur dhamakedaar karna hoga! !😆

Nice dialogues! ! Very well written! !

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

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HappyLibran1910

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Posted: 8 years ago

#455

So good to see you back DD well and rocking 😊 the update speaks for it :)

So many emotions to be shown but with held 😭

How lovely the convo between Ramnath and Shravan 😳 like tabby mentioned .. the actors would have nailed it :)

So he is all set to jump again in the pool and claim his car 😳

it's so visible but they choose to make it invisible .. attainable yet unattainable 😕 why does life become so tough suddenly !!

Hope the next one will be sooner 😳 is banjar forum ko hariyali se bhar do 😳 ( dramatic enuf I guess )
❤️

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#456

This Ramnath truly deserves that brown leather chair in his study with Shravan on his feet discussing his love life Dips. ..like Tabby rightly said. ..This father son conversation was the best we read in a long long time.

Emotions are riding high, confessions are hiding somewhere and our favourite duo are hanging somewhere in between.

I hope they find their fairytale for we can't wait to see them star in it.

I feel so much for Sumo here..what's she supposed to say when she's all choked up and he looks like he's okay?? If only she knows that he is tearing up just as much inside. .if only he shows her that side of his.

Do we get the classic airport scene in the next update? Knowing you, you might actually send Sumo away😆..and make Shravan chase her across the globe and knowing me I would definitely take offence at that😃

This was a fantastic piece Dipsy. .and like I said. .I am your number 1 fan. ..no one else. ..me me me!!

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Beautiful update...very nicely written...looking forward for the next chapter😊

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Jaldi in dono se confess karwao dono ke dono pagal hai. Both have of them own reason not to confess to each other.

Hope before Sumo leaves for Florida confess any one of them.

Vinu

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Ab aur intezaar nahi hota. Ashes mein Sumo hai hi nahi, aur fate mein poori pagal hai. Get her back on track. And soon! I mean now.

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Ranified009

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Posted: 8 years ago

#460

Are we anywhere close to the abode of happiness...are we?😒 , because the way these "I_was_born_in _a_ pit of maturity and _shyness" people are going...we would have to wait till goofy gets married...rehem karo delta...rehem..pls🥺

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