Fate - FF CHP 17 pg 63 upd - 7/31/17 - Page 45

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Posted: 8 years ago
Read whole story in one go
wonderful story...
Like it
Loved Goofy cute baby
ShraMan as usual enka kuch nahi ho sakta. They r hiding their real feeling towards each other... ab to un dono ko milwa do
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Eva...yeh comment tha?😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Eva...yeh comment tha?😆


itni hi himmat hai mujhme aaj.
Doesnt it convey the msg? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely chapter. I'm so much exited!!! Do update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Yoohoo! Anybody there? Echo!


Yoohoo! Anybody there?


- thats an echo 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Definition of sadness:

1. Namik not posting
2. Delta not updating😒
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ranified009

Definition of sadness:


1. Namik not posting
2. Delta not updating😒


Namik ka IG profiel public ho jaye ot Fate update ho jaye !! jor lagao yaaro
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Posted: 8 years ago
Deepti dear,

since when did u become such a sadist...why r u doing this to them...

do thappad lagane ka man kar raha hai tere is Shravan n Sumo ko...kya roye jaa rahe hain..." jab pyaar kiya to darna kya "...kaise pagal hai dono...kuch bolte hi nahi...

ab tu hi unko akal de thodi si...

jokes apart...this is d new dimension t ur writings...keep it up...
I know u must b surprised by all these comments...especially when I don't use harsh words...but u r such a fantastic writer...u made me do it...

rgds
Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a beautiful update and a beautiful comeback. (Still have to do the detailed comments on the other chapters, but couldn't help myself.)
Deltadawn, you have won me all over again as a reader, if it wasn't already done. I still remember your first One-shot which had been published eight months from now and now seeing your growth as a writer makes me so proud and happy. The emotion ones were penned with such easiness and beauty that I felt for the three characters. When the attachment to a place becomes more important because of the attachment to a person, that's when you know that's love and I hope these two find each other halfway.
Winning moment for me - Agar tum apne kaam se khush nahi ho, then how can money fill that gap?
I wish every parent could be this understanding with their children.
Whatever it is you are going through, I hope that you find peace ❤️
Much Love ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
AWESOME... I just love your writing...PERIOD..👏
The way Ramnath guides his son to solve his badi problem first and the over enthusiastic mom in Nirmala.

Sumo ridden with conflicting emotions...the bundle of innnocence in Goof and SHRAVAN...(out of words to describe him) 😃

thank you very much for the wonderful story.

I forget which episode in our serial...but hope you remember the young shravan's words to NIrmala about dhaal..."ab aur wait nahi ho raha" ---- I am in the same boat. I also cant wait more...please give us the next update sooon...

love 😊

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