Inamorata-SS chapter 8 updated @ page 34(04/10/17)

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Safire
So well written Sanjh!!!
The initial part was somewhat hilarious but the later part was very emotional!!
Nicely penned!!
You know one thing? Not only your Sumo,even I had wished in my teens to marry a hotelier so that I would not have to cook at home after marriage!!...

Actually it was my dream to marry a panipuri wala when I was a kid. Even now, if he promise to let me eat panipuri, I may end up marrying a panipuri wala. 😆

So happy that you liked it. 😳

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: evaviego
Golgappas and bus rides. Rich brats doing these simple little things. How i love it. 😳
I love it when introverts open up. Because they do not open up randomly to anyone and everyone, but when they do you know that the person must be really special.

Who knows better than you!

Sometimes all we need is an ear to listen and a heart to understand. He has been fighting his demons all alone and hiding his pain. And she with her open ears and arms will be his cure. 😊

An absolute beauty this piece is. ❤️

Thank you...😳

And I love the way he looks at her. Visualisation happening. 😉

You visualise too much.

P.S. i hope you do not find this thanda. 🤣

Veryyy😉

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

I know..every girl might have wanted to marry for one such weird reason..like Saf Chechi I wanted to marry a chef. ..preferably the Chinese stall wala for I absolutely loved his manchurian. And I thought I was the only weird one around😆

His story though. .Ramnath has given a whole new defination to the term 'Selfish'. They played with his heart and he stored in resentment against them. Quite a torture to live with so much in one's heart. Would you be penning a confrontation scene between Shravan and Ramnath? I would surely be looking forward to it.

The whole initial part was so breezy. ..this Shravan needs this Sumo. .for him to know and enjoy life from a very light perspective.

That song from Pyaari Bindu is a personal favourite. Looking forward to more such moments between them.

I love the way you write ya...seriously!!

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

ohho aate he dhamaka...sumo with wet hair wet kurti shravan ke ghar...sumo's portrait in shravan's secret place...and my naughty mind... mohabbat barsa dena tu savan aaya hai... tere or mere milne ka mousam aaya hai.. sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai pyaar me tere had se guzar Jana hai... finally barish feel hone lagi sanjh ki vapsi ke sath...super se bhi upar update dear...thanks for pm... koi mujhe bhi pani puri khila de mai pakka shadi nahi karungi thele waale se

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

RES
U r really very late.😔..aab mai bhi late unress karungi...
Chal chod...😉
This was wonderful...Loved it to the core...😃

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Sweetness overload! Shravan opening up to Sumo like never before. With a sad childhood, it's but natural for him to feel that way. Glad to see he found someone worthy of his time and love.

Dadi 🥺 That bit hurt.

Great update bud!

Edited by nuttynuts - 8 years ago

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imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Absolutely love the Suman in your story. She is so positive and lively. I wonder what's her story.
Great update

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Only4ShraMan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Perfect update with wonderfully penned 👏😳

Eagerly waiting for more

Update fast Dee 🤗

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Sanjh this was a beautiful update hunny. Why do you think it was long? I could read more.

It was a perfect day and a perfect storm.

From being friends to sharing secrets 😊 I am a big fan of talks and he opened upto her poor sould. My heart cried for him. Hope those two idiots burn in hell!! 😡

And hopefully suman lives upto deserve the high pedestal he has put her on.

Love this story and I love you.(ye bhi koi batane wali baat hai? kuch bhi aivayi!!) 😆

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Harshi Arora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Superb one I loved this really shravn n itna face kiya h life m and finally suan is here for him as a frnd for now and I'm sure s perfect life partner soon

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