Shraman ff- Destined thread 3 chapter 28 updated @page 17 (26/11/17)

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

you are back this is enough... we got an update this is enough... you are safe and fine this is enough... don't think this is not like what we are waiting... this is amazing...song is beautiful...I won't ask you for continue this story because har kahani ko ek din poora hona he padta hai.. I just want to request you please write more on shraman...thank you for pm update soon eagerly waiting

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Hope you are doing fine now.😊

Suman's POV. Lovely read...!!! 😳

So reconciliation on the cards?

My fav part was flashback scene's last para. Thought provoking one. 😊

Beautifully penned chapter. 👍🏼

Miss you a lot here. I wish you come back here for good soon. 😊

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Welcome back Sanjh 🤗 glad to see u bavk here with what younguys are best at :)) it's almost dead here :((

Lovely update.. So Shravan ki recovery has begun .. The nirmala convo was well written to take the story forward :)

Sumo introspecting :) hmmm can't wait to see how she is gng to move further 😳. Pushki is always a darling 😳

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lizzy1299

@lizzy1299

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Hope you are doing better now

The update was lovely.

I loved the part about forgiving others. Holding grudges doesn't work.You end up hurting yourself as well.

Hope Sumo forgives him.

Waiting for next update 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Sanjh 🤗 you updated destined yey!!!

And another beautiful one it is. The song specially. Broke my heart thinking of how they started and how they were. I was and will be in love with them.

An accident is as much out of our hands as is falling in love. Sumo kab samjhogi tum. You ressurected a physically broken man with your love and broke him mentally by taking it away... Circumstances. Agreed. But shouldnt the love you have within you at least get a chance. Please aur mat tadpao Shravan ko.

Yours Truely,

Shravan Bhakt Delta

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Nitequeen

@Nitequeen

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Good to have you back...

Destiny ka update as Gaya...

Ab dusre stories ke bhi update aayenge...

Yaay...

U hv wonderful imagination n write great stories...

Hope to hear from you soon...

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Wow, thanks for updating San 😃

Shravan ❤️ and his lame excuses to keep her with him

Loved it.

Nice flashback !!

I hope ShraMan jaldi ek ho jaaye, but i don't want the story to end 🥺

Will you start another FF Sanjh, please !? 😛

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

His silly excuses to keep her near him was really cute. Nirmala is right they were not aware of Sumo is Suman to whom they were trying to reach since long. But small mistake just look at the yr it suposed to be 2006 instead of 2016. Song is perfect for Shravan's feelings.

How are you now?

Thanks for PM Sanjh

Vinu

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

OMG OMG...I m sooo delightd to c this update dear...I hope u r doing fine now...waise if u keep giving such nice updates, our best wishes will take u from good to better to best of health... 😆 😛 😉

Poor Shravan...teri Sumo ko bol na use maaf kar de...he did not do it...nor did he hide it on purpose...look at his immense love n forgive him...only love can actually heal all those wounds...n that's exactly what Shravan wants to do...

Everyone was waiting for this upate for a long time...Now plz do d honor of updating "Inamorata" too...

rgds
Anuradha