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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

A beautiful OS filled with pure love!!!

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Chahe hum janam pe nahi the , par janamdin par to hain. 🤣

What a beautiful piece.❤️

I am in love with the ideas "jo fudakta rehta hai" aapke dimaag mein. 😆

First of all. Ye toh kisi ke dost ka song hai na. Amazing the song is.😉

Chotu shravan POV. Dazed. I have always loved his innocence and it is beautifully penned here.

And the song goes perfectly well here.👍🏼

Pushkar bechara. What a way to remove kabab mein haddi.😆

Badi top banti hai par hai darpok. The epi in which he says this. One of the most charming epis. His expressions . ❤️

How beautifully it went from Chotu's POV to Badu's . Super beautiful. 😳

Dad to be Shrav's POV. ❤️ I have no words yaar. Isliye emoticon se kaam chalata padh raha hai. 😳

Twins.

Thank you so much for writing this.

Happy 1 year everyone. 🤗

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MadhuGupta

@MadhuGupta

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I haven't any word such you are amazing writer.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Aaj mujhe kuch nehin kehna behna itti achi likhi hai so I don't have words...splendid, awesome dear...
Itna pyaar karne wala mil jaye jannat ko bhi humpe jalan ho jaye...When Shravan is here no fear...

Thanks for PM
No time to read 5 to 6 PM hai padha nehin..

Vinu

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

wow 😳 right from their school time to being parents...so lovely😳...and adorable ... thanks for the birthday sweet😳

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Res 😳
*****
Oh!! Mera yaha bhi res tha 😲
Silly me 😛
Unresed at the same pg 😆
Sorry bro!!

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow !! Lazy weekend afternoon reading ur OS dipti and drifted into Shraman's world 😳 ..

From their school journey to being parents of twins ❤️ love these characters so much n can read any amount of stories written on them :)) thanks to Namik n Nikita for essaying their roles to perfection that we can't seem to get over them 😳

Got so used to Dipti's fictions that other than Nimik updates look forward to urs too 😆

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Deepti...🤗
Kya likha hai yaar...
Adorable one... 😳
Even though didnt listen the song yet, but loved it ❤️
Perfectly fits in your writeup bro... 😳

Sumo carrying twins...Awwie
Shravan sneaking into the room...haaye...❤️
Thank God I have read Lost first n this cutie one afterwards...Am smiling like 😃 now after reading it!! 😆
Thank you fir this lovely piece dear... 😳
Loads of love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik 😉

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Awesome OS..

poison ivy leaves in pushkar's socks😆...No one is allowed between shravan and sumo..

Shravan and his love for sumo...He was dreaming of her even though she is so close to him❤️

Sumo is pregnant with twins❤️...So beautiful.. Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Amazing update dr... asusual... 👏 👍🏼 ... beautifully penned... loved it...
And the use of song... Omg...mindblowing...
Ab Kya bolon... no words to describe ur work... ur update always makes me happy... thank u so very much
😳

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