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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Seher is really cute as Sumo said. 😛
She loved him sincerely, she waited for him but Shravan was busy in helping his childhood friend in her case, that's why he had cancelled his tickets for two times. But she is lucky she got her childhood friend as her husband same like Shraman. 😊 Sumo accepted in front of Seher she was the reason behind his broken state, she broke him, he had become Devdas almost. She had a guts to accept that she was reason behind all of his sorrow.

Last part flying kiss wow that so romantic. I didn't read any of the story Shraman shared flying kiss.
That is the most romantic & beautiful part of the chap.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

I know Vinu, Seher got her childhood friend as her husband too.

And I am sure, she will love her husband right back.

Yes, I appreciate Sumo for having the guts to accept ino front of Seher that she was the one who broke Shravan..it was important to take the story further.

I am happy that you liked the flying kiss part Vinu, I myself got a bit emotional while writing the last few lines. Till you reminded me , I had never realised that Shraman hadn't shared a flying kiss before. So a big thank you for that...I am feeling so good now😆

Thank you for your comment Vinu, always appreciate it.

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#362

Beautiful update di..

You have described Seher's character so beautifully

"I just wish he was a little more transparent with me , a little more considerate , just enough to tell me why he wouldn't or couldn't think of me ." Seher just wanted a closure so that she can move on. But we all know from what dilemma Shravan was going through at that time in India

Loved the devdas part

"Kisi ke ishq mein apni hasti hi mita do, itni shiddat kahan hoti hai har Kisi ke pyaar mein?"So true only a few can do that

Suman in her Ellen DeGeneres mode😆

Seher and Rishabh were also childhood friend

"I broke him then, I abandoned my Shravan"

It must have been very difficult for Sumo to accept this in front of Seher😒

Shravan blew a flying kiss and Suman catching that flying kiss as if her whole life depended on it... Loved it

Eagerly waiting for next super long part😃

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#363

Wow Reshma! Never had I imagined that Shravan could have had a life back in London too. It was only MM and TK for us. This is such an interesting perspective and twist to their tale. And yes, I can't blame Seher at all. Shravan is that adorable. No wonder she fell for him.

I found your story today, and couldn't help read it in one go! It's that gripping. I did feel a bit dejected to think Sumo was married off to RK, but that one line in the second chapter "he was looking at her, as if no one else existed" brought a smile on my face. I knew I had gotten it wrong. Shravan could never look that way at any other girl. That line gave me a shiver in my spine.

I'm loving the way the girls are pouring out their hearts to each other. And I somehow ended up imagining Vivian as RK and Drashti as Seher. The weird games of the mind!

Great story! Waiting for Suman's story to unfold.

Cheers!

Nuts

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05
Resh chota update 😃 Agli baar bada dena aur thoda ShraMan romance bhi 😉
Coming to the story now..
Obviously due to his past experience Shravan didn't want to go through the same pain again, so to protect himself from more pain he rejected sheher..
Sheher didn't want to give up easily so she thinks if Shravan come back she will try again to give their relationship a chance but God has another plan which she was unaware of..
Sheher was right that Shravan probably should have been little more transparent and give an explanation why he can't accept her because sheher didn't know anything about sumo and niru kaki..
Resh who is this Ellen DeGeneres? Iss chij par thoda roshni daalna jaroor 😉
So rishabh is sheher's childhood friend and their families are close..
So finally sumo told sheher that she is the reason behind Shravan's hater towards women..
Flying kiss 😉 😃
Thanks for pm

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Shrujani

Hey Shrujani! !

I know chota update tha, but I wanted to end it at that flying kiss yaar. .so chota rakha.

You are right, Seher did think that once he is back, she might make the relationship work.

God definitely had different plans, better ones don't you think?😉

Ellen DeGeneres, is a popular American talk show hostess dear.

She is known to extract even the deeply hidden answers, like Oprah Winfrey.

Ya, Rishabh and Seher are childhood friends too, and that kiss art was something I personally liked a lot.

Thanks for the lovely comment daring!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
wow
awesome update
loved it
continue soon

Thanks Pinky 😳

It's nice to hear that you are liking all the updates so far!!

Will update soon.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Two reason for Shravan rejecting sheher, first is his bitter past where nirmala and sumo, two person which are his world ditched him for their selfish reason, so Shravan always compare every women with these two and thinks that all women are selfish. Second is he loves sumo though he denied that but his Heart knows he can't give that place to another girl..
Look like sheher is a very nice girl and hoping against hope that when Shravan come back she will try and convince Shravan to give a chance to her but some where in her heart she knew that he won't come back and that's what happened..
Sheher though not blaming Shravan but certainly she wanted to know why Shravan can't accept her ..
Devdas 😃 😉
So sheher and rishabh's family are close and they are childhood friends like suman and Shravan.. Rishabh is also a good guy helping sheher in their childhood Times..
Finally sumo told sheher that she is the reason that Shravan can't accept her love and the one behind Shravan's bitter past...
Flying kiss 😃
Thanks for pm

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Smita

Hey Smita,

Both the reasons you gave for Shravan rejecting Seher is bang on, but there's a third reason as well. Shravan was already in love with Sumo, he could never love anyone else.

Seher did hope that Shravan once back can be asked to try again. Ya, Rishabh is a childhood friend of hers.

Had Shravan even once told her about his reasons, Seher being the girl that she is would have never pushed.

Ya, the flying kiss part is my favourite as well.

Thanks😳

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: evaviego
Ahem.
That space was for partying.😛

After all that we went through, you just left it for partying😆

You just blow me away with every single update of yours.
The whole narration part is so beautifully penned. ❤️

Seher is an amazing human being. If she were there in the show i would have been in a dilemma whom to ship. 😆

I know😉
You said it babe, so would I!!

har koi kahan Devdaas ban sakta hai. Kisi ke ishq mein apni hasti hi mita do, itni shiddat kahan hoti hai har Kisi ke pyaar mein? 👏 Just like Seher this left me speechless as well.

The guy was always a mystery to me, wasting himself and dying that death🥱

"I am Shravan's childhood love Seher ...it was me, I broke him then, I abandoned my Shravan"

This was a tear-jerker dialogue.

I honestly felt for Sumo here, must have been tough to admit that in front of a girl who unlike her never hurt him.

I saw Suman catching that flying kiss as if her whole life depended on it, as if he were her every hope, every dream, her reason to be...as if she were holding her breath, till he became her air.

#Feels. 😳
This is my favourite line of this part. ❤️

When it comes to your updates , I am unable to put forth any deep thoughts of mine. Ab Mere guru ke saamne mein kaise kuch bolu. 😳

Splendid this one was. 😳

And here is the flying kiss wali GIF for this stupendous update. 😉

The flying kiss part was a favorite , but this GIF man...another level altogether!!

I am getting feels for this one😳

Deep thoughts in your comments or not, does not really matter, deep love For me, that I demand!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Wow Reshma! Never had I imagined that Shravan could have had a life back in London too. It was only MM and TK for us. This is such an interesting perspective and twist to their tale. And yes, I can't blame Seher at all. Shravan is that adorable. No wonder she fell for him.

I found your story today, and couldn't help read it in one go! It's that gripping. I did feel a bit dejected to think Sumo was married off to RK, but that one line in the second chapter "he was looking at her, as if no one else existed" brought a smile on my face. I knew I had gotten it wrong. Shravan could never look that way at any other girl. That line gave me a shiver in my spine.

I'm loving the way the girls are pouring out their hearts to each other. And I somehow ended up imagining Vivian as RK and Drashti as Seher. The weird games of the mind!

Great story! Waiting for Suman's story to unfold.

Cheers!
Nuts

Hey Nuts!!

Welcome here, are you new to the forum sweets?

Have noticed you around only recently, but I am glad you are here nonetheless.

The other talented writers had already explored Shravan's India life in detail..so thought of going different 😛

No seriously , this story was a result of a bored afternoon in a cafe doing nothing, so didnt think much about the plot line babe.

I know right ..the part about Shravan looking at her that way was a dead giveaway. Shravan could never love another that deeply, he would never look at anyone with that love.

Vivian and Drashti, I quite loved the idea Nuts. They make a striking couple.

I am so glad that you stopped by and liked what you saw😳 . Thanks!!

Hope to see you around a lot more!!

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

No
Hey Nuts!!
Welcome here, are you new to the forum sweets?
Have noticed you around only recently, but I am glad you are here nonetheless.

The other talented writers had already explored Shravan's India life in detail..so thought of going different 😛

No seriously , this story was a result of a bored afternoon in a cafe doing nothing, so didnt think much about the plot line babe.

I know right ..the part about Shravan looking at her that way was a dead giveaway. Shravan could never love another that deeply, he would never look at anyone with that love.

Vivian and Drashti, I quite loved the idea Nuts. They make a striking couple.

I am so glad that you stopped by and liked what you saw😳 . Thanks!!

Hope to see you around a lot more!!

Was more of a silent reader. Now decided to spread my wings 😆

Yes, I will be frequenting here. It's you writers who seemed to have drawn me here. Seriously, how tempting can you guys get!

Thank you for the awesome work!

Nuts

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Beautiful update di..
You have described Seher's character so beautifully
"I just wish he was a little more transparent with me , a little more considerate , just enough to tell me why he wouldn't or couldn't think of me ." Seher just wanted a closure so that she can move on. But we all know from what dilemma Shravan was going through at that time in India
Loved the devdas part
"Kisi ke ishq mein apni hasti hi mita do, itni shiddat kahan hoti hai har Kisi ke pyaar mein?"So true only a few can do that
Suman in her Ellen DeGeneres mode😆
Seher and Rishabh were also childhood friend
"I broke him then, I abandoned my Shravan"
It must have been very difficult for Sumo to accept this in front of Seher😒
Shravan blew a flying kiss and Suman catching that flying kiss as if her whole life depended on it... Loved it
Eagerly waiting for next super long part😃