Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 80

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

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Main der karti nahin..der ho jaati hai.😆

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Typing this while waiting at a signal. ..I had predicted Eric and Amanda wayyy earlier😆..detailed comment in a while!

Shravan is a gem😃

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I can't believe that I am this late in commenting here considering that I read it the minute it was posted..in a moving car..and luckily for me and for the others on the road , I wasn't driving for a change😃

That's alright!

And I'm glad, for both the people and you😆

Nonetheless, Meyaar was a beauty Zoya, and for reasons more than one. This update was full of moments that made feel so goid.

I'm glad you said that, thank you!

I loved the way Shravan made peace with his mother's presence in his life, as fleeting as it was, he seemed at peace about it. The way he liked that she was wearing a saree to his ceremony. .there was something so grounding about it..the familiarity we feel around our moms when we they are near in a way that we are accustomed to see them in..I don't know why, but that moment made me smile.

That's exactly what it was meant to do buddy...

The thing is, mothers have an aura around them, its so motherly that you can't help but feel loved. Shravan had to make peace someday, I thought why not now...

Then there was this moment after Shravan gives his speech and Nirmala exclaims 'Hamara beta Ram' to a guy she no longer is associated with. .her estranged husband. .but that's the beauty of parenthood..it's a joint venture, the joy of seeing your child grow can be equally felt and gloated upon only with his other parent.

IKR! I wanted to slap those bozos on the show! Mera beta nahi mera beta! Bhai, a sperm and an egg were used. Its hamara!

So as you said, it should have been a joint venture...

Followed by a moment where Suman's excitement at her own success gets deflated just because Shravan wouldn't be around to see her get her medal, that moment when someone's absence is felt way more than everyone else's presence is the moment your brain actually starts giving signal that you have fallen hard in this game called love...usually the first realistically etched feeling of love.

Amen to that! So well put... That's the time jab ghanti baj jaani mangti hai!

Sumo wali feeling coupled with Shravan wali feeling was the ultimate desert after that beautiful spread ..what lines..and the smile just grew wider.

Yeyy! So glad you likes it so!

Not again Sumo. .never again. .ouch. .brace yourself Shravan, she might just knock off all your defences. 😊

Hahaha.. Knocking off will happen, what remains to be seen is when 😉

The speech was love..beautiful words and even more the emotions contained and conveyed.

Thank you! It was a huge part for me! To let that speech get on a public platform...

The hug was phenomenal. .and him straightening his shirt while watching her run away. .a perfect end to the flow. Resolutions versus emotions. .with Shraman, there can never be a predicted outcome of the duel.

Never! Be rest assured, you are in for a surprise!

Beautiful as always Zoya!!

hey when will you update next part dear eagerly waiting for grown up shraman's joy full moments...please please please update soon

Originally posted by: sweksha

hey when will you update next part dear eagerly waiting for grown up shraman's joy full moments...please please please update soon

Sorry i m damn late 😒
Shravan is graduated from Oxford his speech was speechless & as u said it was u r speech.
Eric & Amanda, girlfriend soon to be DIL of Eric's mom.
His mom who is loving mother figure for Shravan also. sun ke acha laga someone was there for Shravan to fulfil his emptyness of mother's love.

All Malhotra family were attended his convocation function, along with Nirmala who was happy & proud mother to see her son.

Sumo also graduated silver medalist, she managed to get 2nd topper in university.
Shravan's surprise was awesome how can he miss his BF convocation he just rejected internship for her. that sweet of him. It shows how much she matters to him.

Shravan doesn't want to feel same feelings which he hid behind somewhere corner of his heart.

It was one of the best chap till date
Thanks for PM Zoya

Vinu

Originally posted by: orion23

Hey hon!

Sorry to keep you waiting..

I'm working on it..

Hopefully soon..

ohh no need to say sorry dear...I was tooo much excited that's why am annoying you...take your time I'll wait

Right, so when the first part ended I was like "Dude that's no place to end!!" Lol!! And then you asked us to scroll down!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res

Originally posted by: Nik03

Unresed @ pg 101!!

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Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Right, so when the first part ended I was like "Dude that's no place to end!!" Lol!! And then you asked us to scroll down!

Sab IF ki moh maya! Mere pieces hadd se zyada lengthy lagte hai 😆

Zoya, Meyaar is so far my favourite in Alfaaz 😳

It is a beautiful piece!!!

Aww yey!!

Thank you so much!

Waise I knew there's no way our Shravan would not come for her graduation..😉. I thought he would figure out a way, start later or something but he left the opportunity... His priorities are so right!!!

His "Priorities" are right indeed!😉

I also knew Amanda aur Eric ka scene hoga.😉

That was a last minute thing.. When I was giving Eric a GF, I was like ek minute, why not Am? She always was stuck in my head for Eric😆

Loved reading the ShraMan scene!!! The madness, the childishness, the friendship, the love was all seeping through it!!

Haina!

Hats off Zoya!!!🤗

Thank you!

Thanks for the PM 😳

Pleasure!