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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
amazing
absolutely loved it
superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Uff Sumooo. ..you are stuck in Shravan's brain like his damn blood vessels woman. ...he is too tired to hold on..but too in love to let go..

You will never understand the mess that's going on in his head..how about showing him the pain in your heart at least. .

Sumo sends him halwa. .he gets her roses..she leaves behind a blank note and he leaves behind thorns. Sigggh..she loves him more than he will ever know...and he loves her more than he will ever show..what an absolutely incredible OS man👏

And Dips darling. .about you..I will come back to it when I find words for you❤️❤️


you dissected Shramans feeling and my mindset here. so beautifully dear. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Main late ho gayi Kamse kam mujhe to pm kar deti, itn a kya aalsipan! Agar IF mein log in na karti to! Huhh! But never mind!Thank you so much for this Dipu darling! This one the second os for me!

Coming back to the OS! Mind blowing!👏 Kahan kahan se ideas aate ho tumko! I have never imagined that you would turn a funny topic to this emotional one. So beautifully you have described their love, longing! Sumo sent him halwa with a blank chit, and Shravan gave her thorns! But the best part was when Sumo woke up and her feet touched the petals!
Again a bada wala thank you! And now my room mate is looking at me like I have gone all nuts! She just uttered "Screw dhila hai kya..kya kar rahi hai! Kal kya karegi! " ab usse kya pata kya kar rahi hoon main! Chalo bye for now! And thank you once again! 🤗



gundi ka title Dolly ka nahi tumhara hona chahiye us bechari ko maine aise dhamkiya dete hue kabhi nahi dekha 😆

glad you liked it. I was in a rush to go out this morning. but the OS request made the idea strike and so had exactly 15 minutes to type it out and post before left. hence the short OS.

now give the best in your exams and next OS will also be dedicated to you 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Oh this was too good

I really want to know what happens further...please please turn this into a ts PLEASEEE *puppy eyes*
Loved it👏👏


thank you dear. lekin shraman ke problems TS me sulajhnewale hain bhi nai... to likh ke kya fayda. let this one be. TS layak topic hoga to pakka likhungi someday😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh



Mereko thank you do! Dhamki dinto likkha! Nahin to kat leta!

Wow Sanjh ache se dhamki deti ho tum, chalo aise hi sahi, Dips ne OS to likh diya. So Thank you Funny Bunny. You are a true friend who push harder to get the best out from your friend. ❤️

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Kaise kar leti hain aap ?
I don't even know what to write in comments anymore to make you understand how I feel about this piece. This is ShraMan in their full form, love, hatred care, pain this is their trade mark.
Shravan and Sumo live on because you guys write them so beautifully and and in such a relatable way that I fall in love with our show a little more.
You are the bomb Deeps 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
beautiful OS ❤️
Hidden love and hate 👏

blank note and thorns 😭 perfect for their emotions

mong dal ka halwa and petals of 24 crumpled red roses ... pyar etana kut kut ke bhara hai lekin jahir nahi karna 😭

chotusa but beatiful




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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
WOW Update.
Amazing one .

"kaante hain inme?" 💔

All was not lost yet. ❤️

She left a blank note.And he kept thorns instead of roses.
Life would have been so simple if these two were vocal about their feelings. Stupid Ego.

But a mindblowing OS Deeps .
Loved it ❤️

P.S. This can be converted into a TS also. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Uff Sumooo. ..you are stuck in Shravan's brain like his damn blood vessels woman. ...he is too tired to hold on..but too in love to let go..

You will never understand the mess that's going on in his head..how about showing him the pain in your heart at least. .

Sumo sends him halwa. .he gets her roses..she leaves behind a blank note and he leaves behind thorns. Sigggh..she loves him more than he will ever know...and he loves her more than he will ever show..what an absolutely incredible OS man👏

And Dips darling. .about you..I will come back to it when I find words for you❤️❤️



Agar kisi writeup ke depth mein jaana ho.. toh aapka comment padhna is very necessary. 😊

@Bold: Oh my God. Love those lines. Beautifully penned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: evaviego



Agar kisi writeup ke depth mein jaana ho.. toh aapka comment padhna is very necessary. 😊

@Bold: Oh my God. Love those lines. Beautifully penned. 😊


Eva. ..you have made my day twice today sunshine ❤️

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