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saraswatirawat

@saraswatirawat

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

You are amazing yaar .What a great talent to convert a small life incident to superb one shot

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: LubSha
Just speechless Dips, you are incredible. After watching that video, I felt this would be one hell of a story. And here you are, you described it so beautifully that left me out of words. Contrast of love and hate, halwa and roses, clean chit and thorns was touching. 👏
Great going.

Lubna.

Mereko thank you do! Dhamki dinto likkha! Nahin to kat leta!

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Mind blowing...u have merged yesterday incident so well in ur OS..

Loved the line "As she set foot on the ground she was welcomed by the softness of petals from 24 crumpled red roses... All was not lost yet."

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siliya

@Breezyexpanse

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Amazing OS Dipti 👏

Plz turn this into a TS plz plz

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

It was superb loved it !! Ur simply amazing dipti 😳 wanted it to continue 😳

N thank you sanjh for the damki 😆

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Nice and interesting Very well written dear

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

so emotional !! it made me cry. perfect depiction of their situation after their marriage. can't express in words. shravan has got a secret admirer or well wisher but he feels lonely. he can't celebrate his victory. and sumo can't express her joy to him frankly. she sending him the halwa is one sweet gesture. how these love birds are suffering. and roses with thorns concept was aweee. Shravan would defintely do that , giving her thorns...BUT THE ROSE AT HER FEET is his true love..My God...excellent OS

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Haiyeee so adorable ShraManilicious beautiful love it!!

Thank you hun!!!

Love,

Spandana

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Uff Sumooo. ..you are stuck in Shravan's brain like his damn blood vessels woman. ...he is too tired to hold on..but too in love to let go..
You will never understand the mess that's going on in his head..how about showing him the pain in your heart at least. .

Sumo sends him halwa. .he gets her roses..she leaves behind a blank note and he leaves behind thorns. Sigggh..she loves him more than he will ever know...and he loves her more than he will ever show..what an absolutely incredible OS man👏

And Dips darling. .about you..I will come back to it when I find words for you❤️❤️

Loved your comment dear..so beautiful & true!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Shravan won his 1st case in India that too independent as Shravan Malhotra...she went to court saw his hearing she is proud of him, sent Moong dal halwa for him..but he is angry that she doesn't care for him but he brought roses for her kept it in his side of bed that too with thorn..kya bacho jaisi harkatein karte hai...

But she kept her legs on the petals of roses..which has been spread on the floor...

Nice OS Dipti...

Vinu

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