ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102)

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#421

Beautiful update...very nicely penned... Pls update soon😊

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#422

Fantastic update Saleha👏

This was indeed a beautiful garland of mixed flowers with all emotions like sadness, happiness,light romance, utmost caring,pure love,abundant affection etc blended superbly well...

Splendid job!!!!

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Only4ShraMan

@MariaCreations

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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

Beautifully penned 👏

No words to say

Eagerly waiting to know more

Update fast 🤗

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

We are waiting for their confession since long but don't want some more trouble in their life they al ready had many.

Sumo didn't tell she already read letter of him

Ramnath trying build new relationship with sumo

Pushkar's wrong timing entry 😆whenever they are enjoying their quality time. Sumo blurted she has heard him when he said kaun Sumo😆

Vinu

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Heart to heart. Fantastic! High on emotions. Glad these two are finally opening up to each other like ten years ago.

Best friends are back to be best friends ❤️

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: parboni
I've been a stalker of this forum from time immemorial and a silent liker.

But this update...I had to comment.In the actual show,which started as Suman's story became volatile as the writers and makers started to display it completely from Shravan's POV till the end.So,every time any ff writer writes sth from Sumo's POV,I start fangirling silently!
Anyways,SELF RESPECT-the two words that were used in the most irritating manner in the show(we all hated it when Sumo started with her self respect jaap to put Shravan down),what was the root of these words?What did this actually meant to Sumo?Why was 'self-respect' so much important to her over anything?
The whole conversation in this part where Suman reveals how self-respect has been the bridge between her old self and this one is the befitting reply to all the former questions.
This was sth you excellently did as a writer-you went through Suman's character and presented it reasonably which the CVs failed to do.Thanks for this lovely update and plz update soon.

The biggest achievement for any writer is when a silent writer finds the update worth commenting, reading this made me really happy.
I love this show to pieces but I have to admit that the self-respect thing wasn't handled properly. I always thought that her parents's death and the debt that came along shaped her character.
Thank you so much for this precious comment ❤️

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lizzy1299

@lizzy1299

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Beautiful update

In the show barring a few occasions, Suman and Shravan never had a heart to heart talk. Conversations are important for any relationship. It helps you understand your partner better. I m glad you're giving us just that.

Pushkar needs to work on his timing 😆

Pls no more trouble. I guess they have had enough. Ab confession ki bari hai

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Faith28
Beautiful update...very nicely penned... Pls update soon😊

Shukriya, Faith I'll try my best to update soon.

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#429

Did I have words?

No I needed to go hunt for a few.

Falling in love - easy. Crash , Bam and you are in with a splash.

Trying to create a love of a life time - Go read Holding you by Saleha and learn from there!

I want to know you. how important is it. To find a person's beliefs, their high points, their lows. so that you build a life around them trying to beautify the good and forget the bad. To cherish your best friend the way you are supposed to. So that a few ears down the line when this happens - "I know you like the back of my hand."

You know the person really sees though you. Cause they have put in the effort to know you

And it is not just beautiful its intelligent love. And that lasts way way longer. Because it comes out of respect more than cheesy over protectiveness.😊

You are unfolding this slowly and detailing it gracefully. Their moments together, each feeling. Marvelous. 👏

Holding you is holding us to our seats TIGHT!!