ShraMan Drabble Series~ The Center of the Room *Drabble #5 updated*

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Breathtaking beautiful! !

Confession revisited n like never before!!

What a fab description! ! The whole scene just flashed infornt of my eyes,,n the realisation dawned in...Man!!this is what he was thinking! !

Isey kehtey hai,,aa gaye...chaa gaye! 😳

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Casi..My Pumpkin!! 🤗
Firstly m so so so Glad to see you back..posting and finally returning to ur original bubbliness we know tht exsist in you😃
Warm warm welcome back to you my Pumkin🤗
Love you so much❤️

Now coming to ur drabble...
As always a Magnificent Piece!👏
The way u potrayed his predicament his feelings his rollercoaster of emotions...Comendle!⭐️
I just loved it to core❤️
Indeed it was a new begining of their love life married life and thy both will be the anchor of one another😳
Really really loved it...looking ahead for more n more such wonderful pieces of urz😉

Cheers!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I am so happy!!!!

My favorite part of the last episode...Namik deserved an award for this scene...

This was so your style babe...you did justice to his feelings..Shravan might have actually felt like this.

This is mammoth for a baby step...and I am glad you took it to come back!!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

that one took my heart away...

this must be what he should have felt.. oh cas.. and the last line just took my heart away... ❤️

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Oh this was sheer beauty!!

There were no exchange of words and yet so many feeling were exchanged!

I could literally picture it all and that only proves how fantastic you are as a writer!

Hats off to you!

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

hey cas its really good to see u back with such lovely drabble series

Thanks you for staying back😊

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wow

so amazing

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Hey Cas,

So so happy to read your post. Glad you returned to your extended family who love you as much as your own. This Drabble perfectly displayed Shravan's emotions. You absolutely did justice to it. Loved every bit of it, as if feeling Shravan's pain. Take your time, we will be here waiting anyways. 👏

Lubna.