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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Omg!! This was soo cute...loved the romantic shravan...this was soo soo cute...pls keep them coming😊😉😳

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome... Beautifully written

During that Cafe episode I so much wanted sumo to just go Nd listen to shravan for once thank u for showing this..

Mr. Oxford return lawyer planned everything perfectly... Really like it

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Beautifully written OS

Cafe sence is beautifully penned ... Kash ye serial mai ho pata. Sumo dare to meet shravan in cafe...but our phooti kismat.

Loved Smart shravan. He used his brain...good one

Like the name baby, shona,babu, babykin,shumu...how romantic, shravan ne etne name soch liye

Totally loved it

Thanks dips

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

...soo romantic

Shraman kiss...

...sharp and brainy Shravan...
... sumo... amazing

you are an amazing writer...

Ek boond aisa hai...😲
thanx for PM...😊
loved it...

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Delta Di

boond boond se saagar banta hai, haina😛

Aur post karo na mujhe samundar dekhna hai😉

This was shooo cute,

But the line 'woh toh jab bulaunga jab voh karunga'

It took me a bit of time to understand this

But jab samajh aaya, it made me blush ferociously😳

Do post more of these

Love

Arpita

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Its sooo beautiful story.. Loved it.. Great job dear... Thankyou so much for pm.

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wow.. i loved this boond a lot 😆😛

no seriously.. lovely OS.. i loved it ki she went to meet him... mazza aa gaya... naughty shravan is always a bliss to read anyway.. nice one.. 👍🏼

😉

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

😭😭😭 Whenever I read this type of ShraMan things, my heart weeps like this. Kya ho sakta tha kya bana diya cvs ne. Chalo... Again an amazing one deepti...always wanted to see this intelligent, witty Shravan.

You take care of yourself.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I could pitch in to whatever you will give to see them kiss as well.😉

Naya FF... Pehle wala to pura karne de madame.. I made kinda random updates so far but your last post on hide n seek has gotten me to actually think it through.. m bad at emotional handling of relationships so thats why writing OS to relieve stress of overthinking hide n seek...

Nahi yaar. .you will do a great job..I was thinking from a real life point of view. ..but woh toh kahani hai. .and kahani mein end tak sab theek ho hi jaata hai ...aur agar sab kuch happy nahi hua. ..toh picture abhi baaki hai mere dost 😉

So just go ahead with whatever you find to be the most convincing plot ..one that you are sure about yourself. ..hamara kya hai...hum toh bhooke hain...we will lap it up eagerly!!!!

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago