HAPPILY EVER AFTER - A Shraman ONE SHOT

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

you are an amazing writer...
...😭😭
... too sad...

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Dear All,

Thank u! And once again sorry, will reply individually 2mrw to everybdy who commented; couldn't do it today due to time constraints... But plz know that all ur comments are truly appreciated and cherished! 🤗

By the way I have posted a Happy fic for everybody who felt sad, LOVE IS FRIENDSHIP WITH WINGS - A Shraman ONE SHOT . Hope this makes u happy! 😳

Luv Niki

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

superb

absolutely amazing

loved it

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: deltadawn
Phew.. catching my breath... cause this got me scared.. .I don't watch such stuff on TV..
But it was heartwrenching .. and I cried at his state... till the point of where Preekar saw Suman...

amazing OS... I dont like anyone from Shraman dying though... 😭 so this will stay on my mind tonight...

Hi dear,

Hope this story didn't haunt u that night 😉. But seriously, thank u so much for braving this story till the end even though u aren't fond of this genre dearie.🤗

Thank u once again.

Luv Niki

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hi,
Wow that was the ultimate heart wrenching story as it has ShraMan. I was literally crying imagining Shravan like that. But what a wonderful writing piece. You have great writing skills, and writing dark stories so convincingly needs more appreciation. I get really scared of such stories, Kyon Ki haunted me for many days. But I couldn't stop reading this. The end gave little satisfaction that even though in different worlds for everyone else, they both were together in their world.

Lubna.

Hi Lubna, thank u for the lovely feedback! 😃 I have replied to u in Wattpad too!😳

And yeah hopefully u have read the happy wala Shraman fic I wrote for u and all those who asked me to write a happy one after this! 😃

Luv Niki

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Thank god i did not read this in the night or sleep would have evaded me completely. ...you we an awesome writer...every emotion displayed perfectly😭😭

Thank u so much for the kind comments. And dearie don't be sad, just imagine a happy shraman in the end to make u happy again! 🤗

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Safire
You are an amazing writer,no doubt!!!
But today you have made me a sad person...

Hi dearie,thank u and sorry! 😳 Hope the other fic did make u happy person again! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tanvi23
Wow!!!! I have no words to describe this story. I cannot imagine this situation..
Hats off to your beautiful writing and applauds for the you have described Shravan's reaction...

Thank u so much dear! I'm truly humbled... 😳😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya
⭐️LIFE IS ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL WITH YOUR STORIES... AMAZING LOVE... AWSOME STORYLINE... CRISP AND BEAUTIFUL ... JUST LIKE A ICE COLD WINTER NIGHT WITH FULL MOON ... LOVED IT LIKE ANY THING 👏⭐️

Awww thank u so much for such beautiful words, dear!! 🤗🤗 Your comment put a huge smile on my face!😃

Thank u once again! 😳

Luv Niki

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Amazing OS... Beautifully penned
I seriously got scared at some points Nd for that really appreciates you as a writer...I know shraman are happy in their own world but I m still feeling bad for shravan..
Do write more

Thank u dear! 😃 I'm really happy u enjoyed the story; what more could a writer ask for?! 😳

Thanks once again!

-Luv Niki