HAPPILY EVER AFTER - A Shraman ONE SHOT

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

Phew.. catching my breath... cause this got me scared.. .I don't watch such stuff on TV..

But it was heartwrenching .. and I cried at his state... till the point of where Preekar saw Suman...

amazing OS... I dont like anyone from Shraman dying though... 😭 so this will stay on my mind tonight...

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi,

Wow that was the ultimate heart wrenching story as it has ShraMan. I was literally crying imagining Shravan like that. But what a wonderful writing piece. You have great writing skills, and writing dark stories so convincingly needs more appreciation. I get really scared of such stories, Kyon Ki haunted me for many days. But I couldn't stop reading this. The end gave little satisfaction that even though in different worlds for everyone else, they both were together in their world.

Lubna.

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank god i did not read this in the night or sleep would have evaded me completely. ...you we an awesome writer...every emotion displayed perfectly😭😭

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

You are an amazing writer,no doubt!!!

But today you have made me a sad person...

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tanvi23

@tanvi23

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow!!!! I have no words to describe this story. I cannot imagine this situation..

Hats off to your beautiful writing and applauds for the you have described Shravan's reaction...

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear All,

Thank u all for the kind comments n sorry to everybody who felt sad... Will reply individually 2mrw, till then plz accpt my hugs! 🤗 🤗

Luv Niki

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Wiccamaya

@Wiccamaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

⭐️LIFE IS ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL WITH YOUR STORIES... AMAZING LOVE... AWSOME STORYLINE... CRISP AND BEAUTIFUL ... JUST LIKE A ICE COLD WINTER NIGHT WITH FULL MOON ... LOVED IT LIKE ANY THING 👏⭐️

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing OS... Beautifully penned

I seriously got scared at some points Nd for that really appreciates you as a writer...I know shraman are happy in their own world but I m still feeling bad for shravan..

Do write more

Edited by Jerry2308 - 8 years ago