ShraMan TS~ Der Schnste Moment *Part-1 Pg.5* Jan 16

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Safire
Great update!!!

Thanks Safire! 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
hey cas, the entire chapter is awwwi just loved every part of it. firstly sumo is pregnant🥳and over-protective shravan . sumo standing on a stool and helping him wear the tie is soo cute😳. the curse of malhotra is😆. the hair tucking scene is cherry on the cake.
please pm me next time and update soon

Hey Madhu!

It feels so good to read all your comments! Its reassuring that I'm not boring you all! 😳

Every part of this one is close to my heart just like ShraMan

Will try to update soon...

Till then

Cas 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Hello...
Loved the chappy to the core yaar...👏
Aww it was tooo cutie...
Tucking hair behind...My my.😆👏..casy I wanna give u a hug yaar...🤗 Used that tooo beautifully...
K3G stool scene...Cute😳
CURSE OF MALHOTRA...kaha kaha se lati ho aise ideas yaar...😃
All in all the chappy was suppper se bohot bohot uppar vala...👏
Update soon and PM me also...
Love,
ANU😳😊

Hello!

As always, zyaada cute toh nahi tha naa?! 😛
Hugs right back to you kiddo... 🤗

Well the Curse of Malhotra comes from my family!! There were 7brothers born in my clan and they had given up but bam! I popped out them 😆 😆

Your comment made me super se bhi bohot bohot happy!!

Will try to update soon!

Till then
Cas 😊

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: krutish22
Loved over protective shravan
Do continue soon

Thank you 😊

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
So finally sumo tucked his hair okay not behind the ear but still! Aaamazing it was cas. Let's see what happens next! Loved this overprotective grizzly bear Shravan.
P. S. Why didn't I get a pm. I seriously demand an explanation! Next time I need one. Or you will see my irritably grizzly side!😡

Sanjh!

Areee par Shravan ki zulf lambi nahi hai naa toh woh kaan tak kaise pahunchegi? Err nahi pahunchegi naa? 😕

But I'm glad you loved this one man!! 😳

And about the PMs sowwie!! I didn't send it to anyone... But promise I'll try to send it next time..

Cause can't risk an angry grizzly Sanjh! 😆

Till then

Cas 😊

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl
Firstly I'm really sorry for commenting so late.
I had actually read it in the morning itself but had to rush for my classes, sorry for the delay.
Thank you for making my day!
Zulph-tucking part was❤️😳
Oh I can totally get Shravan. She had pleaded him not to go that day, she might have been having some kind of feeling about it!
I hope all goes good!
Baby Girl, my choice!!
I didn't get my pm for this😲🤔
Keep writing
Swarnima

Hey Swarnima!!

Aree isme kya sorry? Me toh forever late commentor hun 😛
I'm glad I could make your Monday a bit bearable! 😳

Its Suman man...her intuitions are always spot on!! 😆 😛

Baby Girl? Let's see 😉

Will try to send the PM next time, didn't send any PMs this time.

Will try to update soon

Till then
Cas 😊

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Loved the prop #stool...have forever imagined them like this...k3g effect may b...😳
ShraMan as Parents to be...bliss!❤️
Beautifully written!

Hey thanks dear! 😳
Yeah K3G 😆

Man everybody knows about it except me? I feel left out! 😕

ShraMan are bliss anyway

Cas 😊

P.S. Your 999th post!! Congo!!

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Awesome update.. Caring Nd protective shravan is adorable..

Shraman stool scene reminded me of K3G's Jaya Amitabh epic moment❤️.. Nd sumo tucking shravan's hair strand was so cute.. Totally loved it

Waiting for next update..Plz continue soon

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
[DIV]Awesome update.. Caring Nd protective shravan is adorable..[/DIV]Shraman stool scene reminded me of K3G's Jaya Amitabh epic moment[L].. Nd sumo tucking shravan's hair strand was so cute.. Totally loved it[DIV][DIV]Waiting for next update..Plz continue soon[/DIV][/DIV]

Thanks dear!!

I'm so relieved that you loved this one.
Will try to update soon...

Till next time

Cas [:)]

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Lubna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Hey Cas,

Finally finished reading it after more than 10 attempts. Sorry for being so late. Was very busy for the last week. Coming to the update, it was amazingly awesome. Loved every bit of it, in fact was upset it ended. I wanted to read more of it. We craved for such moments in the show and I bet if Sumo was pregnant in the show, this would be the Shravan we would see.

You nailed it. His worry, his love, his feelings, her assurance, his overprotectiveness everything was very well described.👏

For me the best line was that when Shravan said they waited to have a baby as they didn't want anyone else in their gang yet. That was so cute, as if they have a new friend in their gang now. That depicts their friendship in true sense.👏

Will be eagerly waiting for the next part.

Lubna.