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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 6
suman woke up... she is still at same state

sharavan come to room with some food... and water

sharavan: suman thordha kuch khalo... tumnay kal se kuch nahin khaya plz...

suman: mein nano ko phelay nashta day doon unki medi ka b tume hogaya hai... and was about to standup...

sharavan hold her and said suman nano nahin hain... plz sambhaloo apnay apko... u have to accept the reality woh kabie nahin ayen gay...

suman become angry and shouted mere nano kahin nahin gaye hain samjhay... unhonay mujh se promise keya tha... dobara agr aisa bola to ao k keye acha nahun hoga... janay do mujhe mujhe nano ko deekhna hai...

sharavan cudn't believe tht suman csn talk to him like tht...
and follow her...

and she rush to nano room... but find it empty ... phr woh unko awaz dayti hai... but no answer...

sharavan again hold her tight and was bit annoyed cuz she is not listening to him what he is trying to say... and than shouted tht nano is no more... face the truth suman is tarha tum such se bhag nahin sakti... listen to me carefully NANAJII AB NAHIN RAHAY SUMJHI ...

suman ki ankhoin mein ansoo ajatay hain... and she start crying bitterly... and shouted Nano ap mere saath aisa kaisay ker saktay hain ap mujhe akelay chordh ker kun chalay gaye. ...

sharavan let her cry whole heartedly so tht she can come out from the shock...

after some hrs ...

suman sit at her swing jo nano.nay usko laga ker diya tha... sharavan come and give her glass of milk ...

suman refuse...

sharavan : suman plz kuch to lay lo... deekho mejne khanay per force nahin keya per yeh tumhay peena hoga.plz... nano k leye ... agr woh tumhay aisay deekhain gay to udass hojain gay plzz.

suman took the glass and drink it...

suman : m sorry meine ap se unchi awaz mein baat ki... pata nahin kya hogaya tha...

sharavan: its ok suman tumhay sorry.keh ki koi zarorat nahin hai...

to change her mood ... sharavan said... waisay mujhe tumhara yeh sumo.wala roop dobara to deekhnay ko nahin milay ga na...

sumo give.her small smile...

sharavan : thank god tum hasi to... chalo ab se tumhay sumo he bulaoo ga theek hai...

suman : ok

sharavan : sumo waisay mujhe tumhay sorry kehna chata tha... jis halat mein meine tumse shadi ki I knw its difficult for u to accept...

sumo: apko sorry keh.ki zarorat nahin hai... apnay to mere nano ki chinta dor ki hai.. meine yehi soochti thi k unki is chinta ko kaisay dor keroon... jab ap mere maang bhar rahay tha to mere nazar sirf nano per thi... unkay face mein sakoon tha bohat... or mein janti thi k ap k ma papa nay nano se mere baat ki hoe hai...

sharavan in shock... tumnay kuch kaha kun nahn phr...

sumo: cuz apnay nano ko jab yeh kaha k ap mujse shadi apni.marzi se kerna chatay hain na kay majborri se...

meine baad mein nano se baat b ki or unhonay bus yehi kaha k beta sharavan and uski family bohat.achi hai ... or apkay jo meine time spend keya mere dil ko sakoon mil gaya k ap mere best ho...

sumo look at sharavan and said thank you mujhe apni.life lanay k leye...

sharavan just stare her ... and he cup her face and kiss her forehead and said I LOVE U SUMO...

she just smile and hug him...


ok guys hope u like it ... dont want to write anyother depression part ... heheh

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome beautiful...please write more happy parts😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Hi Maria...

It was emotional & same time romantic chappy...

Sumo came out this sorrow... she shed her tears... Shravan is going his life partner job very well being her support system...Shravan cleared himself telling why did he marry her in hurry... But Sumo told him that she already knew her alliance was fixed with him earlier... She didn't mind accepting him as her husband...

Love just started to bloom...

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Maria...

It was emotional & same time romantic chappy...

Sumo came out this sorrow... she shed her tears... Shravan is doing his life partner job very well being her support system...Shravan cleared himself telling why did he marry her in hurry... But Sumo told him that she already knew her alliance was fixed with him earlier... She didn't mind accepting him as her husband...

Love just started to bloom...

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Nice update
Poor suman...she lost her dearest person, her nanu. Its big shock to her
It's good, ..she comes out from shock... accepted reality... And
At least she smiles...understand shravan POV... Accepted him as husband..
Really very good story full of love, emotions, care...
Waiting for their blissful life after marriage
Do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
amazing update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
superb
mariajamal thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
hello friends
sorry for not updating the next part cuz of busy day today... will update tomorrow nite insahallah... have a sweet dreams

good night luv u all


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Posted: 8 years ago
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okay guyss so sorry for.not updated next part yesterday...

part 7

after there small talk sharavan said to sumo tht we shud get inside ots bit cold now...

they come and reached to sumo room... shravan said tht u must b tired u will sleep now ... and was about to leave the room...

sumo: ap kahan ja rahay hain ...

sharavan : tum aram se sojao ... mein neechay ja ker sojaoon ga...

sumo: ap nay nano se promise.keya tha na k.mujhe kabie akela nahin chordhay gay or abhi ap mujhe chordh ker ja rhay hain...

sharavan : sumo... mein to ..

sumo: sharavan ap mere husband ho u have all the rights to stay with me... mana k humari shadi us tarha nahin ho jaisay baki logoon ki hoti hai... per shadi to hogaye haina ...

sharavan: sumo mein janta hoon humari shadi hogaye hai per I dont want u feel uncomfortable ...

sumo: sharavan mein apkay saath uncomfortable kabie feel nahin kersaki... I feel secure with u... nano k baad mujhe agr kisi nay is tarha feel keraya hai to woh ap hain... ap k saath I feel protective..

sharavan was touched by her words... he just pass the smile and said ok baba nahunbja raha bus ab chako late jao or sojao ok...

sumo: mujhe neen nahin aa rahi ... and said to him mere oass a, ker bethay plz or mujh se btein kerain...

sharavan sit near.to her... she very easily out her head on his lap.

sharavan just treat her like a baby ...

and shesaid doze off...

sharavan is about to standuo but sumo in neend hold his hand so tightly tht he is not able to move inch away...

sharavan sit again near her and loiked atand her.lovingly and when he doze off ... usko kuch pata he nahin chala...

sorry guys for this short update and will not b updated next part for one week cuz m going out of city for one week... so plz dont forget.me keep liking ... once I back will definitely update the next pa t...

byee till now... c u next sat ... munh...


Edited by mariajamal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Nice update...
Its nice to see that she feel comfortable with him.!.. & feels protective with him...

Shravan is very caring husband...

Happy holiday...

Vinu


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Posted: 8 years ago
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so lovely and adorable :)

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