SS : Tum Mere Ho part epilogue @ pg 14

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hey guys after long time I got bit time to write short story about harman cant say how many parts will write ...
now without wasting time lets start...



Tiwari killa...

nanu kahan hain ap????
nanu: ary mere bitya kun chilla rahi hoo kya howa hai...
sumo: nanu apnay medi kun nahin li tak mein rakh ker gaye thi ... ap kun mera kehna nahin.mantay... apko pata hai na doc nay kya kaha phr b ...

ramnath and nirmala : namastay tiwari ji kaisay hain ap..???
nanu: ary ramnath nirmal namaste namaste ao ander ao ... tumlog kab aye london se mujhe bataya b nahin ...

nirmala: tiwari jee bus kal he aye hain or subha sub se phelay ap se milnay aye hain...

ramnath : tiwari ji yeh subha subha kis se dant kha rahay hain ??

nanu: ary yeh suman hai priya ki beti ... ary beta namastay kero ...

sumo : namastay uncle namastay aunty

nanu: ary suman in k leye koi chai nashtay ka intazam kero...

sumo left the living room

tiwari ji: or ramnath itnay saloon baad kaisay ana howa tumhara yahan

ramnath: bus tiwari ji ap yahin settle honay ka irada hai sharavan ki bhai phardhaye khatum hogaye hai or wahan bohat naam kamaliya ab soocha apnaycall desh wapas ajaon nirmala ka maan yahin tha k india mein settle hotay hain...

tiwari jii: acha keya ...

nirmala : tiwari ji: suman yahan hai priya kahan hai... itnay saal hogaye ussay milay hoe..

tiwari ji : beta priya ab humaray beach nahin rahi... tumlog k yk janay k theek ek saal baad ek accident mein priya and akash ki death hogaye jab se suman yahan mere pass hai... or 5 saal phelay sameer and uski family canada mein settle hogaye ... mujhay doc nay travelling kernay se mana keya haihai is wajah se mein yahan reh gaya or.mere saath suman b ... jo farz betay ko nibhana chYe tha woh nawasi nibha rahi hai...

nirmala: bohat he pyari bachi hai...

tiwari ji : bus beta mujhe usski fikar rehti hai doc nay kaha hai mere jeenay k kuch he mahinay bachay hain... mujhe cancer hai last stage ... mere janay k baad suman ka kya hoga bus yahi chinta khaye jati hai... bhagwan karay koi acha sa larka mere suman ko mil jaye... jo ussay itna pyar keray k mere yaad b, na aye...

ramnath : tiwari ji ap aisa kun bol rahay hain apko kuch nahin hoga or.ap suman ki shadi zaror deekhain gay... mein kerwanga shadi suman ki apnay betay se ... kal sharavan aa raha hai aplog kal himaray ghr aye dinner per sharavan se b mil lejeye ga... suman se filhal kuch na kahain do ek dosray ko pasand kerlain phr baat agay kerain gay...




ok guys thts for today I knw its lame...

tiwari and ramnanth having same relation as serial

sharan andoff suman, dont know each other ... they met first time ...

and yes nanu is going.toI die

will try to include some spark... or may it auautomatically happen when sharavan met suman...


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Harshi_ta thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh it's lovely
When u upload next part
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Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Oh it's lovely

When u upload next part


soon dear can't say but really soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey nice but please try to update long chapter
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Hi Maria,
Very interesting. I'm sure there will be sparks when they meet, effortlessly. Like your story, waiting to read the first reaction when they meet, as they are not friends. Update soon.

Lubna.
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Wowww
Its seems very interesting..
Its goung to be an arrange marriage
Hmmm it's different
Plzz update soon..
But sad tht nanu us going to die
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Very nice!!!! Eager to know what happens next!! So please update soon...
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Hi Maria after long... & Happy New Year ...
Good starting... Shraman's are strangers so there won't be ego fighting .. & they didn't insult each other... So far everything positive positive... Sumo has no parents here also... She is living with her Nanu...

Shravan's parents are together they were in abroad... Ramnath is positive... How is Shravan's character is here. Is he lover boy or khadoos here...

Waiting for next chap...

Update soon...

Vinu
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Very nice. Please do continue
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thanks lovely people for liking my story ... so sorry for small update actually i mostly use my cell ph thts y no idea how much i write ... today i specially using laptop for you guys so tht i can update long part ...
so now with out wasting time here comes part 2 enjoyyy:

suman came in living with some nashta and served ramnath and nirmala...

nirmala: wah suman beta yeh to bohat acha hai... tumharay haath mein to jaadu hai ...

they enjoy the nashta.

nirmala : suman beta tum kya kerti hoo?

suman : aunty abhi recently meine apna bachelor khatum keya hai or abhi apna catering ka business run ker rahi hoon... saath saath event organizing b kerti hoon...

nirmala: ary wah yehi to bohat achi baat hai ... to kun na kal ki party ki catering tumhay day dain...

tiwari jii: yeh b koi poochnay ki baaat hai ... sumjho done...

after tht they left ...

in car

nirmala: apnay tiwari jii se keh to diya per ap ko lagta hai sharvan is rishtay k leye manay ga.. .
ab woh bacha nahiin raha k jo ap kahain gay or woh maan lay ga...

ramnath: mein janta hoon ... per mein sharavan ko b janta hoon woh mujhe kabie mana nahin karay ga ... or waisay b tiwari jee se meine yeh b kaha tha k agar dono bachay ek dosray ko pasand kerlain phr baat agay kerain gay...

kal sharavan aa raha hai or mein us se forun he keh doon ga takay woh apna mind set keray or phr suman ko deekay...

at tiwari killa :

suman : nanu apnay kun haan bola mein chootay mootay event kerti hoon ... woh log bohat classy lag rahay thay mein kasisay manage ker paoon gi...

tiwari jee: beta kun ghabra rahi hai khud per bharosa hai na to sub acha hoga...

next morning :

sharavn reached malhotra mansion

and go to his room for fresh up...

ramnath us k room mein ata hai ...

sharav: aye na papa ... mein bilkay ap k pass he anay walay tha ... woh firm ka kam sub wind up hogaya hai...

ramnath: janta hoon beta k tum nay sambhal liya hoga ... mein tum se yahan koi imp baat kernay aya tha...

beta mein or tumhari ma kal tiwari jee se milknay gaye thay...

sharavan : nana ji se ... papa meine b jana tha ap ek din wait kerlaytay...

ramnath: beta aj ek chotta sa function rakha hai ghr per woh b aa rahay hain milayna... beta (in worried tone)... beta tiwari jii ko cancer hai last stage doc nay jawab day diya hai un k pass bus kuch he samay baki hain... beta kal meine un se ek baat ki hai or agar tumhay us mein koi aitiraz na ho to hum baat agay bhardhaye gay...

sharavan was listening each word carefully and also had some tears nanji ki cancer ki kaber sun ker...

beta tiwari jii ki ek nawasi hai suman, bechari nay bachpan mein he apnay parents ko kho diya us k leye uski poori duniya sirf us k nanu hain ... beta mein chata hoon k tum suman se shadi kerlo... tiwari ji ki chinta b khatum hojaye gi ... or tumhay ek achi or suljhi hoe larki mil jaye gi ... tumhari ma ka b yahi faisla hai ... woh aj aa rahi hai infact aa chuki hogi function ki preparation woh he ker rahi hai ... beta ek bar us se mil lo or deekhlo ... koi zaberdasti nahin hai ... agar koi aistiraz hoga to hum meikn se koi b tum se koi baat karay ga... ek or baat beta suman ko is baeray mein kuch nahin pata... mein chalta hoon ...

ramnath left the room... sharavan in thoughts ... his father words were frequently repeat in his mind...

suman arrived at malhotra mansion

suman : namastay aunty .

nirmala: aray sumna aoo beta tumhara he wait ho raha tha chalo baee ab apnay party ka charge tum sambhalo ... ok

suman: dont worry aunty mein sub sambhal loon gi ... ap aram keraain...

ramnath b unlog ko join kerlayta hai ...

suman : namastay uncle ... chalain ap dono baatein kejeye mein kam shuru kerti hoon apko sub kuch 8 bajay ready millay ga ...

ramnath: nirmala meine sharavan se baat kerli hai ... let c woh kya decide kera hai...

suman in garden ... arranging stuff with her staff... she is so involved in thh .. tht she didn't noticed tht sharavan is looking from his window...

he had a smile on his face tht pap choice is not tht bad...

after 3 hrs

he came to the garden and mistakenly step on the decoration and got scared how she would react...

suman came and look at him...

sharavan: i m sorry i didn't see it ...

suman : its ok mein pohr se set ker doon gi...

suman look at him in disbelieve tht how calmly she answered him.

nirmala : sharavan meine tumse kaha tha k suman ko bola khanay k leye or tum us ko yehi lay ker kharay ho...

shravan and suman looked each other and pass small smile...

nirmala: suman yeh mera beta hai sharavan... sharvan yeh suman hai tiwari ji ki nawasi...

all went inside to have food...

nirmala : ary suman beta kuch khao to tumhari plate to bilkul khali hai ...

suman : actually aunty please bura mat manaye ga kya mein thordi der k ghr ja sakti h9oon woh nanu kafi time se akelay hain or mujhe un k saath khanay ki adat hai ... ap ka kaam almost done hai ... bus mein ek hr mein wapas ajaoon gi...

ramnath: suman beta is mein bura manay wali kya baat hai tum jao infact sharavan tum suman ko lay jao ... tiwari jii se b mil layna...

sharavan: ok papa.. suman chalain?

suman: ap khana to kha lain ...

sharvan : mein n b nana ji k saath khaoon ga...

both left malhotra mansion...

in car...

sharavan: papa nay nani ji health k baeray mein bataya ... suman tum pereshan na ho... he will be fine i m sure...

suman : just look him and smile weakly...

they reached tiwari killa...

suman : nanu kahan hain ap? nanu ! nanu !

SUMAN WAS BIT WORRIED CUZ NANU IS NOT ANSWERING HER...

sharavan: relax suman yahin hongay shayed room mien hoon so na rahay hoon...

she ran upstairs and bit relieve nanu nay head phones lagaye hoe hain or woh bhajan sun rahay thay...

sumo apnay tears pochti hai or seedha unkay lap mein gir jati hai ... nanu pereshan ho us se poochtay hain KYA HOWA SUMAN...

suman: nanu kab se apko awaz de rahi thi jaan nikal di apnay mere ap jantay hain na apki awaz nahin sunti to mann mien kasisay kaisay khiyal atay hain ... please dobara aisa mut kereye ga...

nanu: suman ki sir per haath rakhta hai or muskura tha hai ...

sharavan yeh sub door mein khara howa deek raha hota hai ...

nanu: ki nazar us per phardti hai... woh suman se poochtay hain yeh kaun hai?

suman: nanu yeh shravan hain ramnath uncke k betay ...

sharvan touch his feet and also sit near suman...

nanu: ary mera bhooloo to bohat handsome hogaya hai ... and laugh...

suman stand up and said ap dono baatein kerain mein khana lagati hoon...

nanu: or beta sunao sunna hai bharday famous hogaye ho...

sharfavan ; mere chordieye or yeh bataye ap nay papa se kuin bola k apko cancer hai ... nanajii apko kuch nahin hoga samjhay ap...

nanu: ary beta ab tum na shuru hojana abhi deekha na tumnay suman ka kya haal hogaya tha... bus issi baat ki fikar hai mujhe pata nahin kaisay sambhali gi khud ko...

sharavan mein sambhaloon ga usay ... haan nani jii mein keroon na suman se shadi...

nanu us ko ashirwad daytay hain ...



ok guys thts for today will update next part tomorrow byeee have a sweet dreams ...

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