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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn




yep lot has been said and lot of raita has been failaoed by both.. plus ab adi diya and ved.. bhel ready hai poori wht say ??


Han raita toh full on failahoa hai upper se yeh 3 ka tadka (adi, diya, ved)...
Raita + tadka = too much fun 😆 😆 ... bhel 🤣 🤣 ...agree.. 😆
To curious foe next updates dear... jaldi jaldi update karo ...
Edited by shaggy8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn



Adi meri jaan !!

thanks for the reply again and you do read in detail 😆

Sumo ka kaisa hai... jab tak hum dubki lagate nahi.. we dont understand how much we are capable of..so she is testing waters... STILL...

Aditya's POV... hmm lets see...

Shraman moments.. 😆 will try to add conversations for sure.. I wont promise anything as you know I dont have a recorded plot.. jaise mann karega waise story jayegi

reading in detail.. woh toh can't avoid , its so real and gripping,I can relate to Sumo a lot and Shravan is like dream guy for every1 ..
Definitely go your way,I'm toh just a reader,u write beautifully , sare angle use karo ,ved,diya,aditya,u r awesome at your job .. just keep giving regular updates ..😊
infact I forgot abhi toh jealous shravan dekhe hain,woh bhi thoda sa,not fully,and in future abhi toh jealous Sumo baki hai,ita handsome munda hai,ladkiyan toh girengi hi,wud love to see,her jealousy and pain,when his husband wud appear to be stolen from her (i hv really bad fantasies,facepalm)..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh


Adi-Diya ka failaya hua raita I guess ved sametega... I mean... What ever adi was saying to Shravan, abhi Shravan would think... Sumo would do the same... Like Diya... So they shouldn't get intimate. Par jab ved ko dekhega... Tabhi shravan would decide the reverse... Yaaa I am so excited... 😊😛 saare filmy ideas mujhe hi kyun aate hain! I guess I should stop watching these films... 😕 btw haddiyan jaldi sameto... Agle update jaldi nahi ki to ek aur mil jayega... 😉



aa ge ka tu hi likh ab 🤣


loved your imagination ... chori karu kya isme se?? but then whts the fun..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

reading in detail.. woh toh can't avoid , its so real and gripping,I can relate to Sumo a lot and Shravan is like dream guy for every1 ..
Definitely go your way,I'm toh just a reader,u write beautifully , sare angle use karo ,ved,diya,aditya,u r awesome at your job .. just keep giving regular updates ..😊
infact I forgot abhi toh jealous shravan dekhe hain,woh bhi thoda sa,not fully,and in future abhi toh jealous Sumo baki hai,ita handsome munda hai,ladkiyan toh girengi hi,wud love to see,her jealousy and pain,when his husband wud appear to be stolen from her (i hv really bad fantasies,facepalm)..


itna achcha imagination hai.. dekho ab bhi keh rahi hoon think of writing !!
😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
Karwachauth celebration! ! There is something intimate about it...! 😳
Such online bookings can be readers paradise. .!😆

"Tum.. u have no sense!! You have not one romantic bone in you!!" she had declared looking away from him.

"Me?" he was dumbfounded"... Sumo seriously! If his romantic bones become active u will be in soo much trouble! ! 😲 I share Shravans expressions. .!

Sleepless nights ahead..!!!😉

As she leapt into his arms complaining about not seeing him for so long all he was able to get out of his mouth was a long sigh of relief to finally be in her embrace.." 🤗

Warna tumhare ghar me next generation Malhotra's aane ke koi asaad nahi dikhte"...

Karma .!! Be careful with words..! No hard feelings Adi. .!😃

"OK.. so that was a momentary lapse in concentration?" he asked again... 🥺

She reminded him so much of the poise his mom kept up in such occasions..." men!!

Are we getting their dance in any of the flashbacks! Just curious! ❓

These props... can give way to mistakenly romantic possibilities! !☺️ #zipper!

Marriage... Career... in a family way...!!! O womaniya! !😕

Let's see Adi n Ved are catalyst or inhibitor! !

Waiting for next!


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn



aa ge ka tu hi likh ab 🤣


loved your imagination ... chori karu kya isme se?? but then whts the fun..


Exactly main to hoon hi melo... 😉 To saare melo chezze mujhe achche lagte hai... Bengali mein ek word hai... 'hebby' it means superb... So chori karoge to woh hebby nehi hoga na...but... I am on right track or not! Bolo bolo...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Woowww. ...too good it was ...
loved the flashback. ...
Romantic shraman
Sad for shravu...he is so scared😭
Sumo wanted him to be romantic 😉
Adi diya!! Omg!! Unexpected
Or humara pushkie 😆



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh


Exactly main to hoon hi melo... 😉 To saare melo chezze mujhe achche lagte hai... Bengali mein ek word hai... 'hebby' it means superb... So chori karoge to woh hebby nehi hoga na...but... I am on right track or not! Bolo bolo...


I wont let you open up the plot so easily.. 😉

thinking cap ON !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for being late!!!
It was really a wonderful and interesting chapter!!!
Ab Shraman ka kya hoga,jaanne ke liye very excited hoon...
So update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was an amazing chapter... And suman's expectations... Uff... Ut it was an awesome update... Shraman scenes were also good...👏 And diya... What... Offo...shravan disturbed at the thought of sharing bed with sumo.😆.. Arre khud ki hi biwi se hesitate ho gaya... Hahahaha.. 🤣Update soon dear... 😛

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