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Swarnima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

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Hi Delta,

Firstly I'm really happy that I am the first one commenting. Generally sare updates mein I've been the last one appreciating your good work.

Coming to the update.. It's a lovely chapter

I'll make you Malhotra from Tiwari

Shravan is an ardent follower of "no pain no gain " and Shakespeare too😆

You highlighted his jal-kukkada shades too well.. I mean frog in your cousin's bag..!!😆

Keep updating

Swarnima

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Hmmm... Sumo pighal rahi hai... Just loved the frog wala part! And Shakespeare that too Romeo! That really cracked me up! Too much! But loved this cute Shravan. Again waiting for the next part.

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Shravan is too cute man. ..I would love to have someone woo me that way. ..but yaar. ..about Sumo ko maan jaana chaahiye...I don't want the handsome hunk to go behind her way too much😉

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Naamika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

After reading this chapter I'm glad the way sumo reacted after knowing the truth of shravan-diya's relationship.

If she had accepted shravan's love that easily then we wouldn't have got chance to see this smarty, superly adorable and cute shravan.

He remembers every detail of little things related to his sumo. And yes I can totally imagine how handsome he must be looking in that white shirt.

I just loved it. Awesomeness overloaded 👏 Update the next part soon. 🥳

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

excellent update. i love the entire dialogues and his plans of shravan. totally awesome 👏

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

It was awesome dipti...sumo dhire dhie pighal rahi hai...loved shravan so much he remember each and everything about his sumo...and that was epic "Tum meri ho..aur kuch banana na tumhe aya hai na aayega" 👏 mindblowing dilouge...just one song played in mind

"dilbar mere kab tak muze aise hi tadpaoge

mein aag dilme laga dunga wo k pal me pighal jaoge" 😉

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

playing hard to get sumo

love it

make him beg

awesome update

continue soon

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Lubna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Hey Dips,
Wow very beautifully written. You made Shravan the best boyfriend ever. Who could say no to him. He was always the best but the way you portrayed Shravan makes him even desirable. Loved the list of apologies, and the way which he executed. He didn't want to disturb her, that was very cute. The way he read her mind was indeed mind blowing. Another Out of the Park update. But don't make it the last. Write till their wedding and epilogue as you initially planned. You are not dragging. We are enjoying and would love to read more. 👏 👍🏼

Lubna.

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

RES

And I need a epilogue too... 😳

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Holy Heaven. ...did I just read that?...This is one of those times when you keep fumbling for words to describe a beauty and then just give up coz you can't find any word that could do justice...

Just how beautiful was that!!..The fact that I am still on my bed reading this the first thing in the morning while essentially I should have been getting ready by now sums it all up..Kudos Dips!!

Could you just throw in an epilogue as well...as a desert😛

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