Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 16

Hi Dips,
Every update is like Out of the Park. Amazing. You portray emotions really well. Loved the whole part from start to finish. Drowning part scared me too, but no fear when Shravan is near. 😆
Sumo's realization was beautifully written. Song selection was apt. I will keep going on and on. Just one word Perfect. 👏 I know you update really fast but with the cliffhanger that is long too. So please update soon. 😊

Lubna.

Areee me first! 😃

yayyy... Sumo ne kya sunaya! Loved it to the core! 🥳And Dipu darling... You to chaa gayi! ❤️It was a mind blasting update indeed! Sumo's reaction was absolutely perfect! 👏But still feeling bad for Shravan! Bechara humesha karne kuch jaata hai aur ho kuch aur jaata hai...but still imagining Namik in this place, was..☺️.. Okay... You can understand!

Ouch. ..that hurt!!...did she overreact or was she justified. ..

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Ouch. ..that hurt!!...did she overreact or was she justified. ..

I'm in a dilemma. ...but hadn't he played this game. ...Sumo phir friend zone hi karti. ..let's see what Dips is thinking 😉

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Areee me first! 😃

yayyy... Sumo ne kya sunaya! Loved it to the core! 🥳And Dipu darling... You to chaa gayi! ❤️It was a mind blasting update indeed! Sumo's reaction was absolutely perfect! 👏But still feeling bad for Shravan! Bechara humesha karne kuch jaata hai aur ho kuch aur jaata hai...but still imagining Namik in this place, was..☺️.. Okay... You can understand!

Chalo koi nai... I know... At the end all will be well! Again waiting for the next update eagerly! Till then... 🤗

And your HD thought you are pmsing! That cracked me up so badly! 🤣

Poor people, they just don't understand our feeling for ekdv! *sigh*

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Next will be tomorrow only mostly coz I haven't made up my mind yet.. or even started it..

Sumo ki sumoness kahi to dikhe na... 😎

as for DH.. if he knows I am not just reading Shraman stories but actually writing now he will get a heart attack.. mujhe psychiatrist ka appt mil jayega shayad.

oh no ye kya ho gaya😲...poor shravan😭...it was awsome

oh poor sumo... plz do.t break the relationship with sharavan he.love u alot... he just did so.tht u csn fight for urself... plz sumo. dont do this

Res
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Unres
Oh!!! 😲
That was unexpected.!!
Shravan's plan backfired...that too badly!!
Well I loved Sumo's reaction n in my opinion , Sumo's outbrust was natural!!
Shravan knew that she didnt said no to the marrige proposal, so he should have pamper her n confessed his love in a proper way instead of doing all this...And Sumo was right in her place..!!
How can she confess her love when she knew that Shravan has already a girlfriend...and she was afraid of Shravan's reation also after their fight n Shravan's words!!
You have written it perfactly dear!! 👏

Oh!! So Sumo rejected the proposal...Well Shravan you call for it yourself!!
But am sad for Shravan also 😕
Exited to see what happens next!!
Thanks for the pm buddy!!
Love
Nik