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Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Happy new year!!!

Wow!!! This was a marvelous piece of writing!!! You are a natural writer!!

Do update soon!!

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arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

awesome...
beautifully penned...
heart warming...
..loved it...
thanx for PM..😊

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Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Amazing update dear...
Sumo is finally enjoying her life just coz of Shravan... 😊
Loved the end part where Shravan-Sumo-Pushkar were enjoying reminiscing their childhood... 😊

Exited for the next part..!!
Love
Nik

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Amazing chapter.. Sumo has finally started to understand her Feelings for shravan..

Waiting for next chapter

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Hi Deepti...,

Goa is nice place for holidaying...I have been there nice beaches & all...it's a nice place to realise someone they have feeling for someone special... 😉 romantic place...romance toh automatically ajatha hai... 😆 Shravan trying hard to make her realise her feelings for him...Sumo toh ek number ki duffer hai...she still not realising why she feels different when Shravan touches her why her body shivers to his touch...bilkul gadi...😲

I hope Sumo realise soon her feelings for Shravan...he gets his love of his life...😛

Thanx for the PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Rini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

This is awesome! Waiting for shravan's surprise

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Hey deepti... It was again a beautiful one! Hope sumo realises soon! Shravan to hai hi amazing! And yes! We are perfectly okay with your verbal diarrhea...please do write as many part on goa track! Really loving this track.

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shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Hi deepti!...
It was so adorable, loving the whole goa track... jealousy sumo is so cute hope she realises her feeling soon.
Thanks for pm 😊

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Hey deepti... It was again a beautiful one! Hope sumo realises soon! Shravan to hai hi amazing! And yes! We are perfectly okay with your verbal diarrhea...please do write as many part on goa track! Really loving this track.

Thanks dear.

I am at a decision fork here..she has realised almost entirely.. just one big push. But the positioning of diya is such that she cant decide whether to take a plunge. She is a good girl afterall. So my dilemma here is how to not get her totally out of character... 😕

Still working on it.

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Naamika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Every chapter of this story is just amazing. There is not a single chapter where I felt that what yaar what is this why she or he is doing this. There every action is justified and totally suitable to their character.

I just love this shravan. He knows what he wants and how to get it and for the very first i adored sumo's character as much as shravan's character. I actually felt for sumo for very first time. Generally in other stories i just want to see every situation from his pov but here I'm also want to know what is sumo's pov and all credit goes to you. Keep writing dear.

P.s. You're just to good at updating. Thanks for that.

Edited by Naamika - 8 years ago