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Hello guys I am new to this forum and i have read all the stories which is very beautifully penned down
So this is my first try as an os ,so plz bear with me guys
So here come my very first os
This is the story based on the holi episode which is shown in the show but they are some changes
So its starts with the scene where suman comes to the shravan with full tashan and she handover the money to the shravan ( as she mortage her mother jewellry)
Shravan : yeh kya hai
Sumo : tum khud he dekh lo jo kimat tumne mujhe kal diya tha yeh uska hisab hai
Shravan : kya boli ja rahi ho kaunsa hisab
And then shravan with confuse look open the envelope and found the money which is shock for him and then suddenly he remember something
Flashback -
Yesterday when shravan went to went to market for his work he found sumo is going in some jewellry shop
Shravan : yeh sumo aachanak se jewellry shop mein kyu ja rahi aur voh aapni ma ki hwellry ke sathh
Par mein kyu itna soch raha hu mujhe kya , jo karna hai Kare
And shravan went from there
Flashback ends
When shravan is trying to say something to sumo , suddenly pushkar come there and applying a color on sumo checks which is not liked by the shravan and suddenly he went from there which confuses the pushkar
Pushkar : yeh bhaiya ko kya hoh gaya tumhari fir ladhai toh nahi hui na
Sumo : are kuch nahi aaj toh tere bhaiya se meine hishab barabar kiya hai tu yeh sab chod na chal chalke holi kehlte hai bachpan ki tarah
Pushar : ha toh chal na kiska wait hai
And pushar grab suman hand and started appyling colour to her and run behind her which is not
unnoticed by Shravan . As shravan is very irked with this as in childhood he used to first apply colors to sumo .
Suddenly some ladies start talking which is heard by the shranan
1st lady : ye pushkar ke sath ladki kon hai . Badi hi soni hai
2nd lady : ha badi soni hai aur dono ki jodi bhi kamal lag rahi hai
With tthis shravan is very angry and directly went to suman and grab her hand and cornered her
Shravan : kya hey yeh sab kya karne ki koshish kar rahi hoh ha , chahati kya hoh hu bolo kuch
Before suman could say something , kamini chahchi made an annoucement by calling shravan and uarvashi on the stage
And shravan had no other option so he leave her hand and went straight to stage and with this uarvashi accompany her
Kamini : aap sab soch rahe honge ki mein aachanak se shravan aur uarshvi puttar ko yaha stage pe bhulaya . Are par baat hi kuch aisehai ki kya kare
But shravan is only looking to suman who is standing with pushkar and pushar is saying something in her ear which made her laugh and shravan is boiling with anger from inside
But shravan is hit by the reality when kamini chachi made an announcement regarding his allaince with uarvashi which come as shocker new for shravan and for everyone but double shocker for suman
Suddenly sumo face become pale and she lost all her color and only looking at shravan waiting for his reply
But suddenly when she heard yes from shravan mouth it shocked her from inside not able to stand properly she is in the verge of crying but suddenly pushar hold her
Pushkar : kya hua sumo tu thik hai kya hua bol na
Sumo is not in a position to say anything and could only mutter " kuch nahi " and goes from there
And shravan notices all this but all the people come forward to congratulate the the couple but shravan mind is struck on the sumo so he decided to go to her and confront her
He shouted " sumo sumo sumo " but no use as sumo is very devasted with the news so she is no mood no mood to listen anyone
Suddenly shravan grab her and pinned her to the wall with all the force
Sumo : ooch kya kar rahe hoh shravan
Shravan : are tum mujhe congratulations nahi bolegi aakhir meri shadhi fix hoh gayi hai
Sumo turned her eyes as she is not able to hold her tears anymore
Shravan : are tum ro kyu rahi hoh tum kush nahi hoh
Suma : nahi aisa kuch nahi voh voh bas .. voh ankon mein kuch chala gaya tha
Shravan : jhuth tume lagta hai ki tum mujse juth bol logi Batao tume bura lag raha hain na bolo sumo mein kuch puch raha hu bolo
As shravan is very angry
Sumo : nahi tum jao aise kuch nahi jao na apni hone wali " wife " ke paas jao na kyu aapna time mujme wastee kar rahe ho tumhe kya farak padta hai ki mein tumse pya..
she about confesse her feeling but suddenly stop
Shravan : bolo ruk kyu gayi ki kya tum mujse bol bolo sumo
Sumo is about to go but shravan caged her with his strong hands
Sumo : shravan choho mujhe kya kar rahe ho
Shravan : nahi pehle apni baat complete karo bolo ki tum mujse ..
Sumo : kya sunna chate hoh yahi na ki mein tumse pyar karti hu Ha tu sunlo Mr Shravan Malhotra mein pyar karti hu aaj se nahi tabse jabse tum mujhe lindon chod ke chale gaye the
Suman is crying very bitterly and shravan try to cupped her face but suddenly suman stop him and say
" mujhe pata hai shravan that i am nothing in compare to you but you dont worry about it this is my feeling and i think you should go to your would be wife she is waiting for you and suman try to go
But suddenly shravan hold her waist and again pinned her
Shravan : tumne joh khena tha voh keh diya ab meri suno " toh Ms suman tiwari " mein tumse bahut pyar karta hu dammed ILOVE YOU bachpan se karta hu samji tum
And with this shravan hugged her tightly as suman is crying bitterly and then in order to comfort her he cupped her face and slowly kissed all her tears with this suman melts in his arms by hugging him tightly with the promise that she will never leave him ..,
That sit
I know this all crap
But plz bear with me guys
But if you still like plz comment
Criticism is most welcome
So this is my first try as an os ,so plz bear with me guys
So here come my very first os
This is the story based on the holi episode which is shown in the show but they are some changes
So its starts with the scene where suman comes to the shravan with full tashan and she handover the money to the shravan ( as she mortage her mother jewellry)
Shravan : yeh kya hai
Sumo : tum khud he dekh lo jo kimat tumne mujhe kal diya tha yeh uska hisab hai
Shravan : kya boli ja rahi ho kaunsa hisab
And then shravan with confuse look open the envelope and found the money which is shock for him and then suddenly he remember something
Flashback -
Yesterday when shravan went to went to market for his work he found sumo is going in some jewellry shop
Shravan : yeh sumo aachanak se jewellry shop mein kyu ja rahi aur voh aapni ma ki hwellry ke sathh
Par mein kyu itna soch raha hu mujhe kya , jo karna hai Kare
And shravan went from there
Flashback ends
When shravan is trying to say something to sumo , suddenly pushkar come there and applying a color on sumo checks which is not liked by the shravan and suddenly he went from there which confuses the pushkar
Pushkar : yeh bhaiya ko kya hoh gaya tumhari fir ladhai toh nahi hui na
Sumo : are kuch nahi aaj toh tere bhaiya se meine hishab barabar kiya hai tu yeh sab chod na chal chalke holi kehlte hai bachpan ki tarah
Pushar : ha toh chal na kiska wait hai
And pushar grab suman hand and started appyling colour to her and run behind her which is not
unnoticed by Shravan . As shravan is very irked with this as in childhood he used to first apply colors to sumo .
Suddenly some ladies start talking which is heard by the shranan
1st lady : ye pushkar ke sath ladki kon hai . Badi hi soni hai
2nd lady : ha badi soni hai aur dono ki jodi bhi kamal lag rahi hai
With tthis shravan is very angry and directly went to suman and grab her hand and cornered her
Shravan : kya hey yeh sab kya karne ki koshish kar rahi hoh ha , chahati kya hoh hu bolo kuch
Before suman could say something , kamini chahchi made an annoucement by calling shravan and uarvashi on the stage
And shravan had no other option so he leave her hand and went straight to stage and with this uarvashi accompany her
Kamini : aap sab soch rahe honge ki mein aachanak se shravan aur uarshvi puttar ko yaha stage pe bhulaya . Are par baat hi kuch aisehai ki kya kare
But shravan is only looking to suman who is standing with pushkar and pushar is saying something in her ear which made her laugh and shravan is boiling with anger from inside
But shravan is hit by the reality when kamini chachi made an announcement regarding his allaince with uarvashi which come as shocker new for shravan and for everyone but double shocker for suman
Suddenly sumo face become pale and she lost all her color and only looking at shravan waiting for his reply
But suddenly when she heard yes from shravan mouth it shocked her from inside not able to stand properly she is in the verge of crying but suddenly pushar hold her
Pushkar : kya hua sumo tu thik hai kya hua bol na
Sumo is not in a position to say anything and could only mutter " kuch nahi " and goes from there
And shravan notices all this but all the people come forward to congratulate the the couple but shravan mind is struck on the sumo so he decided to go to her and confront her
He shouted " sumo sumo sumo " but no use as sumo is very devasted with the news so she is no mood no mood to listen anyone
Suddenly shravan grab her and pinned her to the wall with all the force
Sumo : ooch kya kar rahe hoh shravan
Shravan : are tum mujhe congratulations nahi bolegi aakhir meri shadhi fix hoh gayi hai
Sumo turned her eyes as she is not able to hold her tears anymore
Shravan : are tum ro kyu rahi hoh tum kush nahi hoh
Suma : nahi aisa kuch nahi voh voh bas .. voh ankon mein kuch chala gaya tha
Shravan : jhuth tume lagta hai ki tum mujse juth bol logi Batao tume bura lag raha hain na bolo sumo mein kuch puch raha hu bolo
As shravan is very angry
Sumo : nahi tum jao aise kuch nahi jao na apni hone wali " wife " ke paas jao na kyu aapna time mujme wastee kar rahe ho tumhe kya farak padta hai ki mein tumse pya..
she about confesse her feeling but suddenly stop
Shravan : bolo ruk kyu gayi ki kya tum mujse bol bolo sumo
Sumo is about to go but shravan caged her with his strong hands
Sumo : shravan choho mujhe kya kar rahe ho
Shravan : nahi pehle apni baat complete karo bolo ki tum mujse ..
Sumo : kya sunna chate hoh yahi na ki mein tumse pyar karti hu Ha tu sunlo Mr Shravan Malhotra mein pyar karti hu aaj se nahi tabse jabse tum mujhe lindon chod ke chale gaye the
Suman is crying very bitterly and shravan try to cupped her face but suddenly suman stop him and say
" mujhe pata hai shravan that i am nothing in compare to you but you dont worry about it this is my feeling and i think you should go to your would be wife she is waiting for you and suman try to go
But suddenly shravan hold her waist and again pinned her
Shravan : tumne joh khena tha voh keh diya ab meri suno " toh Ms suman tiwari " mein tumse bahut pyar karta hu dammed ILOVE YOU bachpan se karta hu samji tum
And with this shravan hugged her tightly as suman is crying bitterly and then in order to comfort her he cupped her face and slowly kissed all her tears with this suman melts in his arms by hugging him tightly with the promise that she will never leave him ..,
That sit
I know this all crap
But plz bear with me guys
But if you still like plz comment
Criticism is most welcome
Indian Mythology
