EDKV Title Track My Version updated.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone, this is my tribute to the EDKV title track. This displays Shravan's and Suman's POV after the confession. Really hope you guys like it. It's very close to my heart. I feel really happy I wrote this. I also included this in my SS Channa Mereya too. Just wanted to put it together on one page. Thanks.


Hooton pe tere shikwon ka shor hai

Par ye nigaahen kehti kuch aur hai

Jo hai mile lamhe kahin

Choot na jaye haath se

Miljane dil jo bane Ek duje ke Vaaste

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Shravan's POV


Aankhon me ban kar khwaab tum

Rehna sada yunhi

Dil ki har dhadkan se tum

Milna sada yunhi

Ke phir juda na ho kabhi tere mere.. raaste

Mil Jane de jo dil bane Ek duje ke vaaste


Tumse hua jo door main

Tadpa hoon har Ek dum

Tere Milne se mile sab

Zakhmon ko marham

Ab doonga jane na tumhe main apni Panahon se

Mil hi gaye dil jo bane Ek duje ke vaaste


Suman's POV


Khwahishon ko par mil gaye

Jo mil gaye ho tum

Arzoo udne lagi

Sang udd chalo ab tum

Chalo basale ghar kahin door is sansaar se

Mil Jane de dil jo bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste



I have one more stanza for Suman, which I will Update later. Let me know what you think about it.


Lubna.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lubna. ..this is so beautiful. ..I had loved your version In Chana mereya as well. ..my favourite part is the last stanza in Shravan's POV..it actually nails his emotions. ..
You're so talented👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww... this is so beautiful...loved it
U have beautifully narrated their emotions...
👏 ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!
This is just amazing dear 👏
Beautifully written n very very apt for ShraMan!!
Really loved it!!
Love
Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Lubna, amazing! You are so good at it! Lovely just lovely!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lubna that was beaauuutttiiifffuuulll👏👏👏loved it❤️
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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