Suman and shravan love realisation: an shravan os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii guys..i am kratika garg. I have never written any story before. So i am quite nervous. But one of my friend encouraged me to write. So i thought to write a small story or we can say an os on shraman. I have read many stories on them but now lets write something .
So the story starts here ...

Part 1

At the age of 16
Suman- yaar shravan maine kitni baar kha h ki tu mudhse school mai baat mat kiya kar meri yaha par kuch reputation hai tu samajhta kyu nahi h
shravan- sumo mudhe bas yeh kehna tha ki tu aaj library chali jaeyo vaha maine kuch rakha h book mai tere liye apne style mai ( means book ulti rakhi hai jisme uske liye kuch h )
Suman- okk try karungi agr time mila to chali jaungi ab byee kissi ne mudhe tere saath dekh liya to problem ho jaegi
shravan- okk byee

Suman's pov
Pata nhi shravan ne kya rakha hai isa jo vo mudhe dikhana cahta h dekhna padega. She goes, ye rahi vo book mil gayi. Shravan bhi na kaise kaise book chunta hai apni baat btane ke liye bilkul apne jaesi. She laughs. Are isme to ek letter hai. Shravan bhi na bta ne sakta tha kya baat hai likhne ki kya jarurat thi she thinks. But when she reads the letter she is shocked. She never thought shravan fells that way for her.( it is the same letter which suman get when she was packing stuff of shravan and celebrate the last day of shravan in delhi)

Shravan pov
Pta nahi usne vo letter pada bhi hoga ya nahi. Maine kuch galti to nahi kar di use apni feeling bta kar. Nahi nahi shravan positive soch kuch galat ne hoga

Suddenly he saw sumo coming from the library. He is happy that sumo has read his letter as that letter was in her hand but when he saw her face, he saw her crying and her expression was of shocked. Shravan try to console her but of no use because she was not in her senses. She then leaves for her home and not had not acknowledge who is near her.
shravan also thinks to talk to her in evening. So he also left for his home

In the evening
Suman was in her room thinking about the letter. When suddenly she listens the door bell ringing. As there was no one in the house except her nana ji who was sleeping so she has to open the door. When she opens the door there was no other than shravan. She did not know what to say so she let him in. They both goes in her room. There was an awkward silence in her room so she thought of breaking it.
Sumo- shravan tumne apna homework kar liya?
Shravan- mai tumse kuch baat karna cahta hu pahele vo kar lete hai
Sumo knows what he want to say but she thought to avoid that topic
sumo- pata hai aaj ka homework bahut tough hai tum meri help karoge homework karne mai
Shravan- sumo topic change karne se koi faida nahi hoga
Sumo- okk shravan lets talk. You want to know na what i want or what is my answer to your letter.
Shravan - yes
sumo- no shravan the ans is no. I dont think about u in that way. I think you as only my friend. Let be friends only i dont want to spoil our friendship due to this
shravan in shattered but he doesnot let it come on his face he shows that he is happy with her decision
Shravan- yess we will be friends for ever no one can spoil this relation not us also.
Sumo- okk then chalo hamari frdship ke namm kuch metha ho jae
Sumo beings chocolate and both eats. Sumo gets happy but shravan is not.

After two years
Shravan has console himself and now stays happy in what he has and sumo is now sad but due to other matter

Sumo- kya yaar shravan tum kyu ja raho ho bahar padne yaha bhi to kitni achhi universities hai tum yha bhi to pad sakte ho
Shravan- sumo i know but papa cahte hai ki mai bahar jakr padai karu jo unka sapna tha pr vo nhi kar paye to ab vo cahte hai unki jgah mai unka sapna pura karu bahar jakr padke
sumo- par mai kaise reh paungi tumhare bina tum hi to ho mere dost jiske saath mai rehti hu jo mudhe janta h tum jaoge to mai akele pad jaungi
Shravan- mai bhi ne reh sakta tumhare bina par kya karu meri majburi hai mai papa ko mana nhi kar sakta
Par hum baat karte rarenge roz dont worry
Sumo- hmm
Byee saying this she left for her home

Suman's pov
Shravan jb ja raha h jo mudhe itna ajeeb kyu feel ho rha h
Vo to mera dost hai aur dost hamesha saath thodi na rehte hai aur mudhe to khush hona cahiye ki vo itni achhi university mai padne ja rha hai tudhe dukhi ne hona cahiye sumo
pr mai khush kyu nahi reh pa rahi hu kya mudhe bhi usse pyaar, nahi nahi sumo isa kuch nhi h vo to tera sirf dost hai
Thinking this she reaches home

At home
Preeti- di aa gyi aap shravan se milkr
Sumo- ha preeti aagyi tu bta kya chal rha hai yaha
Preeti- di vo actually hum pyaar ke baare mai discuss kar rhe the
sumo- hum kaun
preeti- mai aur mere frds phone pr
sumo- aur kya discuss kiya
Preeti- vo actually meri frd ko na pyaar ho gya hai aur uski ab shaadi bhi hone vaali hai you know love marriage to hum yehi usse puch rahe the ki kaise pta chala use ki use pyaar ho gya hai ans uski love life ke baare mai
Sumo- aur kaise pta chala use ye
Preeti- aapko kyu janna hai di
sumo- aisehi, tudhe btana mai kya prb hai ( sumo wanted to know this because to clarify his doubt)

Here was the first part of my ff.
Think sumo's doubt will be clear ir not..
I know i am not that much of the gud writer but i try and hope u guys will like it.
Suggestions and criticism are always welcome.

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Ohhh great mujhe tumhara new name mil gaya kishu 😆 ha ha Pata h copy paste Kiya h mene but mere antic names so to bahut acha hi h😛 but mere antic name bhi itne bure nhi h 🤔kyu kr tilak🤣 and about your story I already told u it's too good 😉
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This is really good... Continue soon
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Harshi ye naam mera bachpar se h ghr par mudhe sab kishu hi bulate h par tu bhi bulana cahe to bula le no prb but kr tilak achha ne hai samjhi ''
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Good start! Update it soon!
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Hey kisha...😊.Nice start dea...👍🏼
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Hey kratzy...i am dolly remember??😆 and you already know my views babe. ..continue soon😉
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hii anukulgr8
my name is kishu not kisha and thankyou so much for your apppreciation.

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mai tudhe kaise bhul sakti hu dolly
and ya i know your views
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Originally posted by: kishugarg

hii anukulgr8

my name is kishu not kisha and thankyou so much for your apppreciation.


Aare..maine toh nick name diya...😊"Kisha" Aacha laga tumko??
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