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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ch 12 amazing update.

The morning scene and song. Beautifully penned.

Shrav's bechaini and photoshoot. nicely written 👍🏼
New track is quite interesting.

Thanks Eva. Now that they are married I have to get their moments right. I love that song. Shravan doesn't wanna leave her now and had to justify the photoshoot scene that's why the small fight of pushing him. Shravan can be grumpy only with Sumo.😆 I loved that photo shoot in the show. Tun Tun was fun, wanted that to be part of my story. So glad you found it interesting.😊🤗

Lubna.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ch 13. Very interesting. What with this Berry case?

I am liking this Pushkar very much.

The night convo. Ahem ahem. nice.😳

The puja scene. ufff. kya kehne uske toh.

The new lyrics. Mindblowing Lubs❤️

Rocking one yaar 👍🏼

Berry is in trouble and Ramnath still trying to get to him. Yes Pushkar seems to be doing the right thing now. So happy you like their moments. I was worried I would go wrong with the Puja, but itni filmein dekhi hai ke sab yaad tha😆
Thank you so much Eva.🤗🤗

Lubna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Hi lubna...
Amazing update it was... 👏 ...
And ur version of title track was cherry on the cake... 😊 ... loved it... ❤️ ...
Chachi feeling guilty... 😳 ...finally she realized her mistakes...
Looking forward for mamijis amreeka trip... 😆 ...update asap...
Thanks for pm...

Thank you so much Shaggy. Yes Chachi is feeling guilty and hopefully does the right thing now. Mamiji finally going to Amreeka. I'm sending her to where Dips live.😆
So glad you loved the song. So Appreciate it.😊

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Superb update!

Finally the reason for Ramnath's tension is revealed!
Kamini chahi feeling guilty, atlast she realized her mistakes!
Mamiji's dream of going to Amreeka is finally happening!
Shraman scens are nice!
Continue soon!

Thank you so much CrazyParrot. I like your username. Yes the reason is revealed, but there is much more to it. So glad you like ShraMan scenes.🤗
Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Ook back with the actual reply.

Still cant get over the punishment of having Mamiji over at my place for vacation 😡 Shraman ko hi bhej deti😆

You know I was driving when I got this idea and I was continuously laughing at the thought. I couldn't stop myself even at the Stop light. ShraMan ko to Houston bulana hai😃😆

Anyway...

Shravan sumo romance is so sweet here girl. Chipku hubby he has become and everyone caught his lie😆

He doesn't wanna let go of her, too many fantasies to get cozy in her room😉

Ramnath ka kya scene hai berry is kidnapped? And he is clueless about these papers... Ye villian log bhi pehle confirmarion kyu nahi lete if he does know about the papers. Ugh.

Yup Berry is kidnapped and even Ramnath has no clue about what papers are they talking about. Sabar karna acha hota hai sehat ke liye Dips!!

Kamini ko ab pata chala ki Shravan should stay.. kameeni, self centred... Kaam karne ko Shravan and ownership ke liye Pushkie😡

Yes now Kamini will want Sravan to stay, she's feeling bad and also so Pushkar is safe

Puja scene done right. Haaw sindoor.

I loved that scene too, it would have been so nice if we could have seen this in the show.😊

Bas ye dono hi rahe cute cute moments ke saath even if he needs to work on this berry case eventually.

About. Your version of the title track... Kua kahein hum gaalib ki nani ko ab 😊. Words nahi hain mere paas of beautiful each version of thay song from you is.

Thanks Dips. Made it right while I was writing the update. I felt that the Puja moment should be special.

Thanks Dips for such a wonderful comment. I will soon unress all your updates. Not getting enough time. Rakshita requested an update for her birthday so rushed even before I replied to the comments. Thanks for all the Love.❤️
Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LubSha

Thank you so much Shaggy. Yes Chachi is feeling guilty and hopefully does the right thing now. Mamiji finally going to Amreeka. I'm sending her to where Dips live.😆

So glad you loved the song. So Appreciate it.😊

Lubna.


Ur most welcome dr...
Hahahaha... so mamiji & Co r the guests... 😆 😆 ...
Hope dipti aur mamiji ki mulakat ho 'amreeka' me... 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lubs!!!
Dips to host mamiji and family 😆
Matlab ab woh Sumo ka badla chun chun ke legi mamiji se😉

Shraman's love was as mesmerising as Shravan himself in the pathani😳 Gosh I am always after the way this guy must be looking in different attires😕

Shravan ko do baar desserts mile. ..diabetes ka khatra hai!

Pooja wala scene was pure love...sigh!!

I am wondering how one must be feeling when you are backmailed for something and you have no idea what that something includes 😲...feel for Ramnath here (which is quite rare)

Those lines Lub...lafzon mein kya tareef karoon🤗

Ab agli mod par kya hoga. ..please don't make us wait long for it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww beautiful as always dear


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Hye Hye,,mue kaunsey papers hain,,itni aafat dha rakhi hai..!😕

Berry ne to pct ke paper hi diye the! !
Ramu kaka n pushkie are tensed... shravan,,is about to get tensed! #SensorsOn!!

Their romance is...😳

Sindoor scene,..how much I wanted him to do that...in the ep,but he didn't...
Sumo got teary eyes,..🤗
(all this reminded me of 'hamari choti si,,simple...shaadi' fiasco 😭)

Kamini is feeling guilty..!!
I want ShraMan in Delhi..!!😃

Lyrics!! amazing as ever..!!👏


Hi, Haha Mue is the right word for the Oberois.😆
Yes they want Papers but nothing related to PCT. That's too small place for them, but Berry is in trouble and Ramnath being his Lawyer he is in trouble too.
That part was my favorite too, that's why I thought of making it special by adding another stanza. I made that in few minutes when I was writing the Puja scene. Thank you so much for liking the song. Let's hope Shravan stays. Will be clear in the upcoming chapters.
Thanks again. By the way what's your name, I don't know but I have a feeling that you are from Hyderabad, are you??

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Awww Shravan is such a lovely husband

Berry ka kidnap hua kya😆
Accha hua Berry ka warna Sumo ka PCT band karwaya tha na😡
Lubsha dear you are a wonderful brilliant writer.
I mean look at the stanza. It's so beautiful.

Arey ab Shraman ka honeymoon I mean London trip cancel ho jayega kyaa???

Please update soon.

Love
Madhu

Hey Madhu,
We didn't get to see how wonderful husband Shravan had been after confession if the show didn't end. Sigh!!! Yes Berry is in trouble, Sumo ko sataya tha na😆 but this is not related to PCT, it will be clear in upcoming chapters. Thank you so much Madhu for such a good compliment, my eyes well up to read such comments, that's the reason I don't wanna rush to reply back. I take time, sometimes too much time but every comment means so much to me. So glad you liked the stanza.
Let's wait and see what Shravan does. I'll try to update soon. Thanks again. 🤗


Lubna.

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