TUMHARE SAATH..TUMHARE PAAS SHRAMAN TS (epilogue updated pg13) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon


Sure i will...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written
They are truly for edkv
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krutish22

Well written

They are truly for edkv
Update soon


Thanks 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot to all the people who appreciated. ..here we go..

Chapter-2

In the evening... Suman is laying on the bed and shravan is reading a magazine..

Shr: sumo chalo thodi walk karte h doctor ne bola tha naa

Sumo: abhi?? (Makes a puppy face)

Shr: kitni alsi ho gyi ho chalo utho

Shravan goes near the bed and holds her hand and puts one hand on her waist for support ...suddenly sumo gasps...

Shr: kya hua?

Sumo: vo...tumhara haath...waist p se hatao na pls

Shr: *smirks* kyu tum turn on ho rhi ho?

Sumo: shravan pls

Shravan removes his hand from her waist and holds her by her hands

Sumo: shravan bilkul nhi chala ja rha. ...dekho mere per nhi uth rahe

Shr: acha ek kam karo..mere dono per petum apne per rakho. ..

Sumo keeps her feet on shravan's and he makes her walk...she stares him lovingly..

Shr: (raises eyebrow) kya hua?

Sumo: kuch nhi

Shr: bolo naa...mujhse chupaogi?

Sumo: kuch nhi...bas yehi soch rhi thi ki tum nhi hote to mera kya hota...koi nhi h yha jo mere liye ye sab kare...kyuki ye to hum usi k liye karte h jisse hum bohot pyaar karte h. ..

Shr: tum chinta mat karo...me hu na yha. ..me tumse bohot pyaar karta hu sumo...

Sumo: tum ab kabhi mujhe chod k nahi jaoge na shravan...tumhe pata h jab tum chale Gaye the me kitni akeli ho gyi thi...koi nhi tha mere pas jo meri care kare...mere sare kam kare...jisse me apne dil ki sari baatein kar saku. ... (she says getting emotional)

Shravan makes her sit on the bed and kneels down in front of her

Shr: tumhe pata h jab me yha se gaya tha tab to tumse bohot gussa tha ...Par jese jese din guzarte gaye mera gussa shant ho gaya to socha ki ek baar tumhe call karke tumse baat karlu. ..par meri ego beech me a gyi ...socha ki galti tumhari thi to me kyu baat karu...par pata h me bhi vaha bohot akela tha...kuch dost the par sab ladke..kabhi ladkiyo se dosti nahi ki kyuki lagta tha sab ladkiya ek jesi hoti h...akela me bhi tha jitni tum thi...par hum dono ke akelepan ka karan janti ho??

*sumo nods in no*

Shr: hum dono ke akelepan ka karan h humara ego. ..agar ye nhi hota to hum dono itne akele nhi hote ...isliye aj me tumse ek promise karta hu ki mein apne ego ko hum dono ke beech nhi ane dunga

Sumo: me bhi kabhi apne ego ko humare beechnhi ane dungi kyuki pyaar karne valo ke beech kuch nhi ana chahiye or me tumse bohot pyaar karti hu. ..*blushes *

Shr: me bhi tumse bohot bohot bohot zyada pyaar karta hu...or pls ese blush mat karo. ...mere dil k armaan mene bohot mushkil se control kiye h...abhi bahar ajaenge...

Sumo: pagal kahike (whacks him)

Shr: acha chalo ab walk start karo...varna shadi kese hogi?

Sumo: kiski??

Shr: humari ...stupid ..

Sumo: pure pagal ho gye ho tum

Shr: ha tumhare pyaar me

Shravan makes her walk and then lays her on the bed it is 8:00 in the evening...

Shr: sumo me chalta hu..

Sumo: itni jaldi? (Makes sad face)

Shr: esi sad shakal mat banao pls ...mujhe office ka bhi to kam dekhna padega...pls ek important case study karna h

Shravan thinks in mind meri zindagi ka sabse important case. ... and leaves tiwari killa

In car he calls suman's physiotherapist and asks her if he can meet her

Ph:what happened mr. Malhotra? Ese achanak apko mujhse kyu milna tha?

Shr: actually doctor me ye puchna chahta tha ki esa kuch h jisse hum sumo ko jaldi theek kar sakte h?

Ph: ek tareeka h...agar hum unse ye kahe ki unki zindagi ki ek bohot keemti cheez unse dur jaa rhi h or sirf vo hi use uth kar bacha sakti h to ho sakta h ki unka subconscious mind work kare or vo chalne lage. ..

Shr: ok thanku doctor

Shravan goes home and calls pushkar

Pushkar: kya hua bhaiya? Apne ese achanak bulaya?

Shr: chote mujhe tere saath ek plan discuss karna h

Pushkar: plan?

Shr: ha meri zindagi ke sabse important case se related...

To be contd. ...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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well-written. shravan is planning something ...waiting to know more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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kya yaar main phir late ho gayi, chalo koi nhin dr aaye durust aaye, maan this was cute, like really cute
aur dusri baat second chapter pe main first realized it jab cursor down kiya*enlightenment😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing!! Very nicely written!!!Now i am very excited to know about Shravan's plan...And thanks for the regular updates!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

kya yaar main phir late ho gayi, chalo koi nhin dr aaye durust aaye, maan this was cute, like really cute

aur dusri baat second chapter pe main first realized it jab cursor down kiya*enlightenment😉


Ha ha...koi ni. ..happy that you read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Safire

Amazing!! Very nicely written!!!Now i am very excited to know about Shravan's plan...And thanks for the regular updates!!


Thanks ...actually can't resist writing on shraman so..😉😛

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