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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Suspense... Suspense...

Want to know why Sumo is like this... Is there any her past... Or something else... But only next chap can give answer for this...

Let's see how this story unfold...

Bechara Shravan why is he always became bali ka bakra...

Continue soon

Thanx for the PM

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Curious! was up with Suman...

Shravan ko ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare ... he must be like...Why Me!!😆

He is a sweetheart as usual..!😳

Amazing concept ! !

Update soonish...

Thanks for pm...

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

hey dear...very well written..

i thought it as a normal arrange marriage love story but then a twist...😲

really intriguing..kya hua suman ko????

looking forward to the next part...

update soon..😊

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Loved the story line❤️

Suman don't want to marry anyone!! I am getting some idea the reason y she don't want to marry anyone, lets c whether my guess turns out correct or not!

And pls update it soon!

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pisces17

@pisces17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Such a different storyline...

Very interesting...curious to know why does Suman say so...

Awaiting your update

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Aha its quite interesting and different from others... Shrawan is heartbroken as usual our beautiful lazy lad and impulsive lawyer became judgemental.. Puri baat toh suni hi nhi..

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Thanks for pm. Amazing ,Interesting plot, eagerly waiting to know suman's past... update soon

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sunain

Awwh...u gave me the credit..no yar..its all UR hardwork..meine tu bas approval dea..nothing else...n tht means i desrve 0% credit..all the credit goz to U N ONLY U...n thts final!..is say agay koi baat nhi ho gi
btw thanks a ton for ur sincere words...really made my heart swell..love yaa🤗

Bhai dono ko credit jaayega... Jisne likha uske writing skills ke liye👏 Aur of course motivator ke liye bhi...👍🏼 Naina n juju *hope you don't mind if I call u that too.. Abhi tak copyright nahi liya kisine😃 * both of u are awesome man.. 👏

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Sunain

Soo ture..by the end of the show Namik acting skills got well polished..b ya he did a fantabulous job...handled drunken Shravan really wel..btw i really loved all his intense scenes..
Namik ❤️
so...excited for The trip..me tu defo
😳

Yaasss...and he is looking... 😳😳😳 Really waiting for that one!