Plethora - A ShraMan TS - 27/11 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sptrno

beautiful heart-touching as always dear love it...

Originally posted by: Castile2

Unressed on pg. 2! 😊

Sowwie for being this late!

Apology accepted?! 😳

Originally posted by: Castile2

Res
Awesome!
...
Unress

How come I forgot this?! 😕

Silly me!! Anyways...

Badam kha, badam😆

Most of us if not all disliked the track and ShraMan moments around PreeKar wedding!

So coming to the chap...

Yes! THIS is the Shravan Malhotra! The one that we lost somewhere after Madam Sumo started ignoring him...but a man can only take so much

At least Pushkar here showed some concern for his Bhai and Preeti too and even Sumo panicked...!

But somewhere here, I could relate to and empathize with Sumo...how the 'responsible' ones are always made to sacrifice their happiness for the others...
I know right, its almost always this way, but I feel a line has got to be drawn... At some point its enough..

"To him just breathing in the same vicinity as she did was healing."

ShraMan the best-friends didn't loose each other because of ShraMan the 'srar-crossed'(?) lovers...

They 'talked'. That's what's important. Well not technically but still yaa know...

That was the main issue with the onscreen ShraMan, they never spoke 🤔

"Sumo, hum dono.. Hum.. humko shabdon ki kabhi zaroorat nahi padi. Bas ek doosre ki aankhe padh liya karte the hum. Tumko kabhi meri aankhon mai tumhare liye py..."

Yes! This is what I was saying!! And a song comes to me that's so apt for this situation...

"Lafzon se tha jo pare
Khaali dil ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Rishte ko kya naam de
Naata yeh jode le
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Benaam rishta jo
Bechen karta jo
Hona sake jo bayaan...darmiyaan"
(Lyrics may vary 😕 )
Oh brilliant song this one! It fits so well here👏

But you get the gist right?! Yaa sooo...

Sumo ab pighal bhi jaao naa...itna mat pareshaan karo hamaare hero ko!!

I too cracked when she said "Dost the..." 😭

What do you want to do to that chep?! Beat the crap outta him?! 😡
Well I'd love to beat the life out of him 😆

RaaMini breakup!! The only one that makes me go ROFL every time I read the various versions of it!! 😆

And HE comes back.

For ones Raghuvar Tiwari is acting like he really was once upon a time an invincible lawyer!! 😛

Aditya!! Chomu ko uska raasta bhi dikha diya!! 😆

Sahi hai Tiwari Ji! #TheBoss

Oldman slayster😎

Yes Shravan! Don't let any of them off the hook so easily! They have earned it!

Par taste bhi change ho gaya?! 😕
Sirf bol ra woh, andar se wohi sev ki sabzi and wohi Sumo ke liye pyaar

But I loved your ending!! 😳
Glad you did😃
Man keep writing like this Zoya!! 🤗
Sure thing 😳
Waiting for more

With lots of ❤️

Cas

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

zoya pehle to thanks a lot for the pm...:) means a lot :)

Well you welcome :)

now about the TS God I'm speechless ...you always make me ...it was beautifully written dear... the situation you chose was really amazing...

Aww thank you so much!!

n yeah I too would've loved if something like this had happened in the show rather than bringing more problems n making their life for chaotic...

I know right!

the song you chose I loved that.. every word was defining the situation, their feelings...(plz tell me the name of song)...

Its called "Aur ho" from the movie rockstar😳

n I loved it when you wrote that shravu saw pain in her eyes after announcement of her marriage...n he came from window ..loved that...

Soul mates after all right...

how she was crying talking to the pic of her mother n when she said ap mujhe apne pas bula lo God my eyes welled up... n how they both cried n then came back to their fake avatars... she broke him n how he cried, God :( . n then at malhotra mansion, finally truth revealed... n realization did hit him badly...he was already heartbroken n now his trust too broke... n man he always hurt himself...again hurt his hand...ramu tera to beda garg ho... n when sumo called him, he was in dilemma but again got control over himself...n then all talks with nanu, ramu, nirmu n sumo...really he needed to cry out loud...glad that nanu understood finally the love of shraman... n God wanted to kill that asshole when he held sumo...:-/ n when nirmu entered shravu ka reaction was hilarious for me ...actually sarcastic it was... n after 7 months really...time heals ur wounds but some scars are always left... forgiving is easily but forgetting is just not possible... loved it ...it was emotional n heart touching... ur an amazing writer dear... :)

Thank you so very much Anju!!

keep writing n sending me pm's ;)

I sure will...

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.
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Unres.
It has been said, time heals
all wounds. It's not true. The
wounds remain. In time, the mind,
protecting its sanity, covers them
with scar tissue and the pain
lessens. But it is never gone. Its
love that fills the crevices slowly.
Love heals that which time cannot.
Zoyi 🤗

Reshu🤗
This is just superb.

Aww yey

There is something in this that we couldn't see in the show. LOGIC. Everything here makes so much sense.

Hahaha... agreed bro! Logic first say 30 odd episodes ke baad bilkul hi khidki ke bahar ho chuka tha😆

The hurt Shravan had to endure and his immediate reaction made my hurt cringe. But the way you made him got up and say Let the world f**k itself was The Shravan Malhotra for me. Suicide is for cowards and our hero isn't one.

Amen to that😎

Suman doesn't make me feel anything anymore just because it's difficult to compare the pain of both of them. I want to feel for her but really ho nhi rha. He came to her with so much hopes and she blurted out those things to him 🤢

Don't worry, I write her character here and I don't feel for her too.. So we are pretty much on the same page...
I loved Kamini and Vandy's convo. Too cute they are.

Oh hell yeh!
To be continued... 😆

Reply bhi😉

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Ramini break up 😭 Haaye. Trust me I could feel those hideous background music of EK and those constant close ups of their faces when Ramnath said "Kamini" 😆

Oh shit🤣 was it the one that started in hum dil de chuke sanam and went on in all her shows? Aaa aa aa aaa aa aa... ting ting dich... aa aaa aaa aaa...
Nanu was the star of the story. I loved how he was questioning Shravan. But our Shravan's resolution was way too firm and all for his own good and I loved it that for the first time he is thinking about himself and his pain. I love this Shravan.

I know right! He's the man!

Wish we could see this Shravan in the show.

I swear... That caricature of a man was too much to handle

What we got was a drunkard which was really hard for me to believe. Yaar you should have been the writer man.

Aww.. I like you re😳
The dialogues you gave to the changed Shravan are slaying. I loved loved it.

Me too
Ab sau baat ki ek baat. This is the best way the track could have been played.

Yeyyy🥳
Do I need to say I Love you

That I already know, but a reminder every now and then is nice too😃
Le bol deti hu phr v Love you loads 🤗

I love you more ❤️

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi..🤗

Ranju 🤗

You're finally here
What a masterpiece girl..
Amazing...Fabulous.. 👏
Love it..❤️

I'm glad you did!

Yey

Shra break down perfectly written..
Sumo broke his heart and then three of them.pay for their selfishness..

I'm high on vengeance where its due 😎
Nanu ah his part was beautifully written and enjoy that..
Shra answer to everyone was awesome..
👏

Haina 😛

Aditya ki bezaati Nanu ne ache se ki..Love that..
😆
Damn chomu😆
Last part of ShraMan was. Beautiful..❤️

Fabulous work dear... 👏
Thank you so so much!
Zoyi you are amazing writer and god bless u dear...🤗
Shukriya😳
Thnx for pm dear ..🤗
Pleasure is all mine😳
Late k liye sorry nhi bolugi.. 😆
hahaha... Maine sorry maanga kab😆